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Old 2012-02-15, 09:47   Link #22301
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Some genre savvy reader might, and well, you might drop false hints about Kazuma's mother or stuff.

Note - yeah, I'm bored during my hiatus day before goes to I.S. fandom
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Old 2012-02-15, 09:47   Link #22302
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>.>

Spoiler for prolly way out of place but I was planning to apply this:


Right now, I'm still wondering if I can still implement this and the closest thing actually is the IS with the weapons rack.
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Old 2012-02-15, 09:48   Link #22303
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@ Senpai - False hints how? Also, I wonder how mad some readers will get when I reveal he has a clone.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:00   Link #22304
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@ Demi
Physic never been my specialty but I can understand the concept. Many speculates what exactly powering I.S. and many agrees it's either particle annihilation or even more esoteric power such as dark energy etc, only Tabane knew.

@Eras
I don't know, I myself is not the best when it comes to inserting twist without making it an asspull. However, I don't think anyone will go into a rage.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:02   Link #22305
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Remember when I asked if it was too much for cake eater Ichika to be good at chores, decent at school and still be able to kick relatively copious amounts of keister? what if I added a small amount of parkour to his skill list?
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:03   Link #22306
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Parkour might be too much though, the other three already present in Canon, just need to be highlighted. :|
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:08   Link #22307
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@ Demi - How the he'll did he get the parkour? Also, is it even needed? Adding skills just because isn't very good.

@ Senpai - Hmmmmm, what if he calls the scientist who made him "Mother"? It could be vaague like:

"As the pain flooded his head, images flashed in rapid succession. A cold bed, the shine of the needles, the pain of the injections. But the most vivid image of all was a woman with dark hair and a sadistic smile as she stared at something in her clipboard.

With the faintest breath he muttered, "Mother...." before the ice cold feeling spread over his body again."
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:08   Link #22308
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The biggest difference with cake eater Ichika from canon Ichika is that he's a bit less of a spineless situational bad ass. He realizes that Chifuyu, no matter how evil the disciplinary actions she does are, is struggling to keep things together. He knows she's always worrying about him and that he has to support her somehow. Also, he's smart enough not to get lost.

EDIT: Well, I thought he'd get a morning paper route for some extra money and exercise/excuse for jogging. Then one day he got bored and thought of how he could make the route faster. He did a shortcut by jumping over the rails once. Then again, and again and again. Until it became sort of a habit. Then he decided maybe he can do bigger things XD

So he's not jumping from roof to roof. It's less parkour and more free run I guess.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:11   Link #22309
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@ Eras
Yes, that

@ Demi
Parkour has nothing to do with it. Ichika is always been traditionalist too (especially when it comes to food). Him able to do martial arts well is enough
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:11   Link #22310
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@ Demi - What role does it play in the story?

@ Senpai - Think it should be an OC scientist or someone like Autumn?
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:14   Link #22311
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*Shrug*

Up to you, but for added ironic twist, make the Scientist being the same group who kidnap Ichika, indeed a PT member, but came from German.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:16   Link #22312
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Well it's something I thought up for a gag moment. Clarissa mentions once that Ichika might just be her type but only he's too weak. Though she says she can fix that. Chifuyu warns her that Ichika might surprise her. Ichika really does when he wins one in a best out of 3 free-style sparring match.

Also it makes him not absolutely useless in the possible more serious parts of cake eater.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:18   Link #22313
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Why Germany?

@ Demi - Your choice then.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:19   Link #22314
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:|

Well I guess cake eater Ichika is too free-spirited? not old man like enough?
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:25   Link #22315
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@ Demi - We can't really say anything. You ask us if it's too much, we say it kinda is and you defend it and say it's useful. You already made the choice, so we're not gonna force you.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:26   Link #22316
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Making him sound like old man? That's going overboard, demi. Just making him less stupid and dense is enough.

All in all, your choice, as Eras said.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:33   Link #22317
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well I'm probably gonna take the parkour off.

so hard to balance between canon and fanon.

In cake eater Ichika is supposed to give the "wife" kind of feeling to Chifuyu's "husband" image in the Orimura house.
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:33   Link #22318
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What's wrong with a stupid Ichika?

Why can't we make him a combat savant?

Good at fighting but really stupid about everything else?
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:35   Link #22319
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Because combat savant/ book dumb is overdone? (look at TvTropes guide) Definitely overdone...

(not that being romantically dense is not... )
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Old 2012-02-15, 10:44   Link #22320
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@ Treme - Combat savant means he has to be competent. The word Ichika and competent don't really belong in the same sentence unless idiot or cooking is added.

@ Demi - Sounds about right. We all know Ichika's the one who does all the chores and housework.

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