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Old 2012-02-18, 09:52   Link #22741
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What if someone decides to walk the OOC route and have Tabane rectify her little programming issue which only allows females to pilot IS such that males will be able to pilot them as well?

Not sure if anyone has already published a story with such plot point. But damn...

Also, what do you mean by copies of Arnie?
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Old 2012-02-18, 09:54   Link #22742
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If they're strong, but not overtly so and have flaws, then it's okay. Having Arnold Shwarzenager copies is getting annoying. Thankfully, it's getting better recently.

@ Senpai - WHat do you think her kid inherits?
skills, but don't include personality
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Old 2012-02-18, 09:56   Link #22743
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Why do we make male OCs?

1) Because the show is saturated by estrogen already with only 1 relevant source of testosterone proving to have more pheremone than actual testosterone.

2) We're men with no confidence on how to write about women.
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Old 2012-02-18, 09:56   Link #22744
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@ Stratos
Then it'll be the same, only suddenly we have Ichika started as S-rank rookie or with special power unobtainable by anyone else, because... you know... main character should be special is a rule for Shonen.

@ Demi
Bless you. I use both reason.
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Old 2012-02-18, 09:57   Link #22745
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@ Stratos - Blatant Character Derailment. The only male she cares about is Ichika. THe rest can rot to for her.

I saw a story where a kid, most likely 5-7, took out 10 IS pilots with no suit and by - you won't believe this - grabbing the pilots gun, pushing it to her face, and making her pull the trigger. That has to be the weakest pilot in IS history.

@ Demi - THen write a tomboy. I've done it before, and it's not like tomboys are impossible in real life.

@ Yachi - Well, Celeste thiks her dad gave birth to her
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:01   Link #22746
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Most overpowered OC ever, compensating for something much?
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:01   Link #22747
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you already said that you hung around girls a lot during your younger days, before or after your gynophobia.

Let me describe how close I am to the female species. From before till even to this day, I am hesitant to get within a 5 foot radius of them.
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:04   Link #22748
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@ Stratos - Blatant Character Derailment. The only male she cares about is Ichika. THe rest can rot to for her.

I saw a story where a kid, most likely 5-7, took out 10 IS pilots with no suit and by - you won't believe this - grabbing the pilots gun, pushing it to her face, and making her pull the trigger. That has to be the weakest pilot in IS history.

@ Demi - THen write a tomboy. I've done it before, and it's not like tomboys are impossible in real life.

@ Yachi - Well, Celeste thiks her dad gave birth to her
Oh yeah........
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:07   Link #22749
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@Eratas

Sad, but I can definitely agree with you there. Maybe that kid is from the Chaos dimension for all we know.

Also, my take on Blue Tears Alice's OOA:
Spoiler for Stuffs:
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:08   Link #22750
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@ Demi - I had a tomboy friend who was so boyish her girlfriends bro thought she was a dude So yeah, it's not that hard to write for me.

@ Yachi - SHe also acts way too mature for her age to get attention. Call her on it, and she gets stuttery and panicked.

@ Senpai - Any wonder OC fics got instant flack?
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:10   Link #22751
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AQua system is utterly mind blowing *claps* I am honestly amazed
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:12   Link #22752
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@ Eras
Fan dumb felt threatened by the presence of marty stu even though they're not sure about it?

@ Stratos
Nice, you have my and Demi's bless (mine are more simpler than that)
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:13   Link #22753
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@ Senpai - It doesn't help that almost all stories that have OC's are MArty's. It's been getting better recently, at least.
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:16   Link #22754
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Most writer these day have learned the mistakes done by authors in the past
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:19   Link #22755
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@ Senpai - Well, not everyone..... One of the authors just changed his name and deleted his old Marty stu story. Still Marty even now...
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:22   Link #22756
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@ Stratos
Nice, you have my and Demi's bless (mine are more simpler than that)


Thanks~! Canon mentioned that Cecilia's unit is meant to suppress targets, single and multiple alike. So I made it such that her OOA is centered around that role.

That and there's also me blasting Ex-S's theme(Which she'll definitely qualify for upon reaching Second Shift) into my ears and trying to improve Cecilia the best I can.
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:23   Link #22757
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Some people just refuse to change something, I am no exception
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:29   Link #22758
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@ Senpai - WHat do you mean?
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:30   Link #22759
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@stratos: gratz on the awesome ideas.

@OC fics in general: It's always a hit or miss with OC fics. Sometimes it's not even really a matter of balance or the writer's skill. You either find an OC you can relate to or just enjoy his antics and what not. Whatever it is, most stories really are just like that.

Overpowered characters. Bad justification of events. Over-justification of events. Lack of development. Bad grasp of writing language. Things like that are issues of writer and editor. It's not limited to only OC fics, rather its a problem that can be found in all types of fics. It's just that people find the OC approach easier to start with so this fic type falls victim to all these problems more often than not.

@Everything else: I'm going off now.
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Old 2012-02-18, 10:32   Link #22760
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@Eras Soldiers have to be matured always right?
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