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Old 2012-02-23, 10:58   Link #23561
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Power that would stop a war.

But I suppose it's way to idealistic.

So, a power that scares the hell out of everyone, to the point that they stop fighting. Alternatively, power that clears everyone's mind from needless confrontation.
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:03   Link #23562
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I wonder why Japan always answers with "the sword"
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:10   Link #23563
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Because as Ichika said "Sometimes violence is necessary to protect".
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:17   Link #23564
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Trying to form an image of a "power to protect" as a basis for second one off ability for Byakushiki. Am now currently not making any progress -_-"
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:21   Link #23565
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Hahaha, it's really hard to do eh.

Spoiler for Stupid, corny flashback:


Please read and correct it, choice of words, pacing... hell, anything. .
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:30   Link #23566
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Good stuff! Some tense problems and some changes in wording but everything was awesome

However! for some reason... the pacing does feel a bit monotone... though that might just be me?

EDIT: The way it's being told gives me a sense of detached surreal feeling @_@ As if he's recounting something far away. Well there are many ways to read it. Really might just be me.
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Old 2012-02-23, 11:34   Link #23567
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The pacing *facepalm*

At least I got the concept right (I wrote that in the middle of writing a thesis lol) thanks for your help.

That's a spoiler for the prequel movie of the Sacred Twins, telling the different tale about Chifuyu's... ahem, special person.

Anyway, more paper is waiting, see you tom
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Old 2012-02-23, 16:16   Link #23568
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@ Senpai - Can you answer my questions from before?
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Old 2012-02-23, 18:52   Link #23569
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Anesthesia is not my field, so I can't be sure. But rarely multiple shot is used because they're, well, narcotics, which caused all sort of side effect BEFORE overdose is even counted. Hypersensitivity also can be lethal in a single shot (pun intended) and that's the reason of heavy dosage control. That's why they're only used in emergency situation when anything else is unavailable or not strong enuff.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:01   Link #23570
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@ Senpai - Do kid's have a lower tolerance to drugs than adults?

Side note - Found a manga called Ranobe no Hen. Seems like another Izuru work
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:07   Link #23571
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Yes, they do.

@ Note - hahaha, I already read that long ago, the main character looks like Ichika.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:10   Link #23572
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@ Senpai - Plan to give some odd traits because he's a clone. ANy ideas?

Side note - You can tell because the first girl has Charlotte's face
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:15   Link #23573
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Well, I dunno. Rapid deterioration aside, which is pretty much standard sci-fi sign of a clone.

Note - The way I imagine Orimura-papa is exactly like the older brother, while Josh is Manga!Ichika.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:21   Link #23574
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I meant actual good traits. He was meant to be a weapon, so he doesn't have a load of weaknesses like Irish does. So far All I have is rapid healing.

Side note - If only Ichika was that hilarious in IS.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:28   Link #23575
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Maybe he's also a supersoldier? has supper senses?

You can blame the stigma about harem hero = bland character, it's a very old concept and damned by most audience, but is far from extinction, as proven by this original manga, he can create a good protagonist if he wanted (or if he CAN).
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:30   Link #23576
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So kind of like Laura? His only weakness is he can't use the IS.

A lot of harem protagonists have something they're good at, Ichika just fails at his. The others got it because they either work or suffer to get them, Ichika got his and doesn't even know what it is or seemingly care.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:37   Link #23577
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Yes.

So , the way to fix him is at the least have him care about his development and putting effort in improving himself more?
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:45   Link #23578
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Yeah. Kinji and others harem protags do, and no one gives him flak.
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:57   Link #23579
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One more point for me to remember
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Old 2012-02-23, 19:59   Link #23580
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What do you mean?
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