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Old 2011-10-07, 18:06   Link #2361
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Shounen!? Damn it! I guess I can't write romance for shit after all Oh well, Cecilia is coming next.

I'll probably write a draft about the curbstomp batlle and the amnesia that follows later, hopefully it'll be okay.

In all the drafts I made so far does it look like Irish angsts? I'm trying to avoid the angsty male protagonist syndrome and since he's supposed to be emotionally numb it wouldn't make sense for him to angst.

EDIT: Do you plan to use that draft you showed me?

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Old 2011-10-07, 18:48   Link #2362
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@ Meister- Who's Kirio? You seem to keep mentioning him.
Hyuga Kirio, a character from Kamisama Dolls.

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Would the newtype reaction even work on Irish? His mind is completely closed off so all he'd see are jumbled images and random words. Karon is an ISper so she'd have an easier time seeing than Irish does. That's why he got a piercing headache while Karon didn't since his mind is rejecting the images.
That's if you want, but the IS Field of the I-type when using both emergency and normal power allows both ISpers and non-ISpers exchange thoughts much better. The effect would be perfected when the unit goes into Second Shift, but that's a mid-season power-up.

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That draft was awesome! This is why I hate writing in first person view, you have to limit what you're writing to what the protagonist sees. Too bad I need it to keep the ambiguity of a situation or I won't have an excuse as to why I can't just write what everyones thinking.
Thanks. I just wrote whatever came to mind. But really all that was Irish's perspective, because of Karon's mind just feeding him everything.

So to Karon, she was watching his past, while Irish was watching her's.

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How would Irish know that was a metroid ship? It's not like his teammates told him anything about it during their free time.
I should have mentioned that Irish recognized the touchscreen controls, and even though he had never been on one, it was common knowledge that Metroid ships were the only ones to be equipped as such.

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Some people Class 1-2 would probably find any excuse to assault Irish since he's been pissing them off from day one Attacking them when they attack him (He doesn't care about a persons gender, an enemy's an enemy to him), Being open about his dislike of IS pilots and being a prick in general
Aye.

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Don't worry! I'll make sure Irish and Karon won't get together, don't want to intrude on your characters rights too much
Hey I pretty much left it up to you, but we don't want to disappoint the fanboys do we?

We can just keep on shipteasing the two of them.

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Hopefully this event won't smash his trust in Karon too much, he'll still push her out of the way of the bullet since he doesn't want to owe her but that'll lead to his temporary memory loss.
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That meeting was doomed to fail from the start The minute he blew up the power station then any chance of compromise was out the window.


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Who do you think would've helped them try to assault Irish? I have Karon's four teammates and the three feminists along with Tyra Hedberg. anybody else?
That's a lot!!

I'd think once Karon asks them to stand down, her teammates will just assist her, but the other 3 will ignore her and press on.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ain't Meister said it's okay to ship her? Look at his reaction! Well, it's still up to you...


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I REALLY don't want to write a scene where Irish is given "the talk"

Tatenashi: So Irish-kun, I've heard that you're going out with Karon-chan.

Irish: No I'm not! *Blush*

Tatenashi: Tsundere.

Irish: Shut up!

Tatenashi: fufufu~ I think it's time onee-san taught you about a girls body.

Irish; ...I have a VERY bad feeling about this.
THIS MUST HAPPEN--

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Old 2011-10-07, 19:02   Link #2363
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I still hoped for IrishxKaron, but forget it...

Anyway, Posted Authorfic in the FF.net, waiting for the reactions...

Infinite Stratos Animesuki Thread - The Documentary
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Old 2011-10-07, 19:12   Link #2364
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I still hoped for IrishxKaron, but forget it...

Anyway, Posted Authorfic in the FF.net, waiting for the reactions...

Infinite Stratos Animesuki Thread - The Documentary
I'll probably write some Karon x Irish fics here don't worry It'll probably only be posted here though, the one on fanfic.net will be with Tatenashi

Can you not write any spoilers I posted when you finally get to the pages I wrote? I pretty much wrote the entire plot here.
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Old 2011-10-07, 19:15   Link #2365
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I'll probably write some Karon x Irish fics here don't worry It'll probably only be posted here though, the one on fanfic.net will be with Tatenashi

Can you not write any spoilers I posted when you finally get to the pages I wrote? I pretty much wrote the entire plot here.
No, I'm not going to post anything plot related, I just took whatever I think it's cracky and post it (such as the incident in the Image thread yesterday).
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Old 2011-10-07, 19:19   Link #2366
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The first Karon x Irish fic will be posted later, please read and review if you can. It'll be about the multi-IS assault, the amnesia, and anything else I can think about Please look forward to it.

@Meister- Tyra Hedberg would most likely try to shoot through Karon to get to Irish, she's not called an "avenger" for nothing.

How do you think the teachers will react to this? I doubt either party will get off unscathed.

Any problems with Karon and Irish being temporary roommates? She'll probably be held responsible for his amnesia / try to claim responsibility for it and be forced to bunk with himand until he recovers. Gotta wonder how Riselle will react

Is Karon not body shy at all? Children don't really have nudity taboos and since Irish went into a child like state...

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Old 2011-10-07, 19:45   Link #2367
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Lol we turned Irish into a harem lead with multiple endings!

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Old 2011-10-07, 19:56   Link #2368
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The first Karon x Irish fic will be posted later, please read and review if you can. It'll be about the multi-IS assault, the amnesia, and anything else I can think about Please look forward to it.
Hmm, seriously, now that I have this Idea... but.... it might be hard to do...

Basically, you made a half-finished fic which branches into two/three sequel...with different pairings and plot... for example, Idealistic/ Bonus Ending (Karon), Realistic/ Canon ending (Tatenashi), Cynic/ Bad Ending (Alone).

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Lol we turned Irish into a harem lead with multiple endings!

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OKAY! Hi-5! :3
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Old 2011-10-07, 20:34   Link #2369
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Lol we turned Irish into a harem lead with multiple endings!

*hi5's Zero*
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Hmm, seriously, now that I have this Idea... but.... it might be hard to do...

Basically, you made a half-finished fic which branches into two/three sequel...with different pairings and plot... for example, Idealistic/ Bonus Ending (Karon), Realistic/ Canon ending (Tatenashi), Cynic/ Bad Ending (Alone).



OKAY! Hi-5! :3
Irish: Harem!? But I hate IS pilots!

Tatenashi: There's something you call foe yay you know.

Karon: Yeah! You seem more tsundere than anything anyway.

Irish: Don't I get a say in this!?

Tatenashi and Karon: Nope!

Irish: I hate my life.

Side note- Ever since I came to this forum the grim darkness has slowly but surely started bleeding out. What happened to Cynical, psychopathic Irish?

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Old 2011-10-07, 21:21   Link #2370
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Third Chapter of Infinite Stratos: Athena Bouclier is UP!!


Chapter 3: Kitasaki Prefecture
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Old 2011-10-07, 21:42   Link #2371
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- "jet stream attack!!!":d
Yea, might happen assuming that they are fighting in group of three instead of two.
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Old 2011-10-07, 21:45   Link #2372
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I still hoped for IrishxKaron, but forget it...

Anyway, Posted Authorfic in the FF.net, waiting for the reactions...

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And so it begins...

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Chapter 3: Kitasaki Prefecture
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Old 2011-10-08, 00:18   Link #2373
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@ Zero and Meister-Bored waiting for my next class so I'm using my phone to make a draft, It's pretty bad so I apologize if it makes you two puke.

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*Pukes*Hormones are a bitch aren't they? Sorry for asking but tell me what you think.

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Old 2011-10-08, 01:41   Link #2374
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Irish: Harem!? But I hate IS pilots!

Tatenashi: There's something you call foe yay you know.

Karon: Yeah! You seem more tsundere than anything anyway.

Irish: Don't I get a say in this!?

Tatenashi and Karon: Nope!

Irish: I hate my life.

Side note- Ever since I came to this forum the grim darkness has slowly but surely started bleeding out. What happened to Cynical, psychopathic Irish?
As I said, you can make an alternate bad ending where Irish become even more psycho and cynic than before... and kill himself realizing he couldn't accomplish his mission saving Joshua and destroy all I.S.

Also, LOL at Irish' very first wet dream.
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Old 2011-10-08, 02:32   Link #2375
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As I said, you can make an alternate bad ending where Irish become even more psycho and cynic than before... and kill himself realizing he couldn't accomplish his mission saving Joshua and destroy all I.S.

Also, LOL at Irish' very first wet dream.
Better hope Karon and Tatenashi never find out, they'd keep pestering him on who he dreamt about. Maya would go into mama bear mode too.

M: Ri-kun. I think it's time to explain about the birds and the bees.

I: ....please don't

M: When a boy and gi-

I: Stop! Don't say anymore!

M: Mom's so proud, they always grow up so fast.

I: You're 21! Don't talk like an old woman!
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Old 2011-10-08, 03:02   Link #2376
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Throwing knives thunk, making an outline around Maya and Irish

<Ren>: "Shut up. I'm trying to concentrate here." (goes back to planning assassinations)
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Old 2011-10-08, 04:08   Link #2377
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I still hoped for IrishxKaron, but forget it...

Anyway, Posted Authorfic in the FF.net, waiting for the reactions...

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Old 2011-10-08, 04:15   Link #2378
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The most epic ending would be if the characters from IS came acoross the forum and wondered what idiots were posting on it--(CRACK or attendance book on head)
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^ A fanfic within a fanfic?

Oh, and I like how it's under Humor/Friendship, brings a tear to my eye.
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Fanfics spotted!!

SilverShot Survior
A Code Geass and IS <Infinite Stratos> Crossover
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