AnimeSuki Forums

Register Forum Rules FAQ Members List Social Groups Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Go Back   AnimeSuki Forum > Anime Discussion > Older Series > Infinite Stratos

Notices

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 2011-10-08, 22:04   Link #2421
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
Haha, poor soul.

Well, I was lucky that I was relatively indiscriminate for any form of Fiction (except for long running, repetitive shounen manga). Very often I alternate between GRIMDARK Seinen, FABULOUS Shonen comedy, and DIABETIC Shoujo. That'll help expanding your views.
I did watch Shoujo, Shonen and Harem almost exclusively about a year ago. But you get tired of seeing girls tits being shoved into your face or a guy getting mauled for being a "pervert" so I stopped. I usually watch anime no matter the genre for the plot, and no, i don't mean plot
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:08   Link #2422
MeisterBabylon
~ Ping For Effect ~
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: The Golden Throne
Age: 28
*Karon destroys an unmanned IS*

"This isn't personal. Blame it on the misfortune of your birth."

*ruuuuunz*
__________________

On money: Every man has a price. For everything else, there's MakoCard.
MeisterBabylon is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:10   Link #2423
wavehawk
O GALILEO LET ME GO
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
It's still an experimental fic so I hope to improve as I go on, I admit that I suck at writing romance so I'm using this fic to try and improve.
- It's just a matter of application. Let's use Kishisato-san as an example.

Kishisato: "Eeeh? Atashi--?"

Quote:
"This is--I mean it's just sudden."

Kishisato felt her heart beat as the man with blue eyes looked through her intently. As if there was nothing between him and her, not even the pale white of her academy uniform as she backed into the wall.

Something about this man, temptation and charm in the very words he spoke. She found him irresistible even though the thinking part of her mind warned her off.

He's dangerous, a liar, and untrustworthy-- Her silken black hair trembled at the thought. And yet he's hard to deny. Irresistible.

The young man's smile simply melted her fragile young heart. Despite herself, Kishisato allowed him to corner her--something no woman in this day and age would allow. The young man's blue eyes glowed with mischief and the promise of more as his lips drew closer to hers.

The softest whisper that gave her a thrill as it coursed down her body.

"...do you mind if I string you along?"
__________________
"This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."
wavehawk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:11   Link #2424
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon View Post
*Karon destroys an unmanned IS*

"This isn't personal. Blame it on the misfortune of your birth."

*ruuuuunz*
Irish: I thought you said the IS had life? Guess you were lying then.

*Starts planting bombs all over the hangar bay*
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:14   Link #2425
ZeroXSEED
I am no one
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
I did watch Shoujo, Shonen and Harem almost exclusively about a year ago. But you get tired of seeing girls tits being shoved into your face or a guy getting mauled for being a "pervert" so I stopped. I usually watch anime no matter the genre for the plot, and no, i don't mean plot
Yeah, of course, that's why I was selective when it comes to that...here's the snippet

Spoiler for Story:


Which one do you think I picked?

Spoiler for Answer:


EDIT: Seriously, Karon, Irish, STOP HAVING A CARNAGE SEX!
__________________
Ichika Is Awesome
ZeroXSEED is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:20   Link #2426
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
Yeah, of course, that's why I was selective when it comes to that...here's the snippet

Spoiler for Story:


Which one do you think I picked?

Spoiler for Answer:


EDIT: Seriously, Karon, Irish, STOP HAVING A CARNAGE SEX!
Thanks for the list, I'll check out Yuusha no Densetsu when I have more time. BTW here's a reply to your edit.

Irish: Sex? What's sex? Sounds like some kind of weapon or something...Oh! You mean the other way you say "gender" don't you?
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:23   Link #2427
wavehawk
O GALILEO LET ME GO
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
I just realized---Kishisato is it? Other than that one part (the pic above), she's not seen with Kanamin or nonohon again in the TV series...correct me if I'm wrong? Because if so...

(Rubs hands together) "Excellent."
__________________
"This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."

Last edited by wavehawk; 2011-10-08 at 22:38.
wavehawk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:32   Link #2428
ZeroXSEED
I am no one
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Thanks for the list, I'll check out Yuusha no Densetsu when I have more time.
Densetsu also originally a Light novel, it's on Bakatsuki too.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Irish: Sex? What's sex? Sounds like some kind of weapon or something...Oh! You mean the other way you say "gender" don't you?
That's not what I meant...

Anyway, Old Man-

Quote:
Originally Posted by wavehawk View Post
I just realized---Kishisato is it? Other than that one part (the pic above), she's not seen with Kanamin or nonohon again in the TV series...correct me if I'm wrong? Because if so...

(Rubs hands together) "Excellent."
Whatever you're planning now... DON'T!
__________________
Ichika Is Awesome
ZeroXSEED is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:38   Link #2429
wavehawk
O GALILEO LET ME GO
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
Anyway, Old Man-
Whatever you're planning now... DON'T!
- Why not? It's not like she's a major player in anyone's fics.

And what was her full name? Nothing about her on the IS wiki. And after Aizawa's introduced, she takes Kishisato's place as 3rd member of the crazy girl trio in the TV series...



Kishisato: "TASUKETTE MINNAAA~~~!!!!"
(dragged off into the dark underground lair of an evil fanfic writer)
(Doors slam shut on her)
__________________
"This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."
wavehawk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:40   Link #2430
blitz1/2
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
@Eratas: I am not sure if you would want me as a beta for romance fics, romance isn't my forte point, unless you want me to twist the fic into tragedy? >: D
__________________

hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.
blitz1/2 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:41   Link #2431
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
@ wavehawk- Don't listen to Zero! Do it and let us read when you're done!

@ Zero- Irish: Then what did you mean? Mo- Maya won't explain, she says I'm too young or something, can you tell me what it means? I think I'm old enough to understand.
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:41   Link #2432
Masuzu
勝利のため
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: キセキの世代
^ Hmm, she is cute...

Just as planned.


EDIT: Ninja'd by two guys, oh Lord.
Masuzu is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:42   Link #2433
ZeroXSEED
I am no one
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
Quote:
Originally Posted by wavehawk View Post
- Why not? It's not like she's a major player in anyone's fics.

And what was her full name? Nothing about her on the IS wiki. And after Aikawa's introduced, she takes Kishisato's place as 3rd member of the crazy girl trio in the TV series...

Kishisato: "TASUKETTE MINNAAA~~~!!!!"
(dragged off into the dark underground lair of an evil fanfic writer)
(Doors slam shut on her)
I knew you'll do it even if I said don't.....

Also, FIXED.
----------------------

Well, you we're right, anyway, Sacred Twins went slow again for some reason... 65% and counting...
__________________
Ichika Is Awesome
ZeroXSEED is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:42   Link #2434
wavehawk
O GALILEO LET ME GO
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
I could beta it, but be warned that I may or may not have time to work through them very quickly--very busy lately and only have days like today to rest.

...I normally write my fics while in-transit to and from work. At home I just want to relax.

Again, can we get a confirm of Kishisato's full name if it exists, and official verification? I'll be asking this in the LN thread as well with the pic.
__________________
"This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."
wavehawk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:47   Link #2435
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by wavehawk View Post
I could beta it, but be warned that I may or may not have time to work through them very quickly--very busy lately and only have days like today to rest.

...I normally write my fics while in-transit to and from work. At home I just want to relax.

Again, can we get a confirm of Kishisato's full name if it exists, and official verification? I'll be asking this in the LN thread as well with the pic.
I accept your offer Don't worry, I'm not gonna finish it anytime soon so you won't have to deal with it for a while.

Side note- Please don't tell me you're planning to kill her off? Even grim dark has limits (Hence why I'm not killing Joshua in my fic)
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:49   Link #2436
wavehawk
O GALILEO LET ME GO
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Please don't tell me you're planning to kill her off?
- Well, there has to be a good reason she no longer turns up after her appearance in ep.1

Seriously though, she's not going to be killed off--it would affect the storyline. However, I'm thinking of toying with her a little bit...
__________________
"This is the worst webpage ever. Of all time."
wavehawk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:52   Link #2437
ZeroXSEED
I am no one
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
I accept your offer Don't worry, I'm not gonna finish it anytime soon so you won't have to deal with it for a while.

Side note- Please don't tell me you're planning to kill her off? Even grim dark has limits (Hence why I'm not killing Joshua in my fic)
Actually, Grimdark Equation of scale is

(Apparent Age + How much GrimDark story you read) x % of understanding the story concept : actual age when you read the first grim dark.

Considering WaveHawk's penchant for thriller novel... the limit is absurdly high
__________________
Ichika Is Awesome
ZeroXSEED is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 22:57   Link #2438
Eratas123
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
Actually, Grimdark Equation of scale is

(Apparent Age + How much GrimDark story you read) x % of understanding the story concept : actual age when you read the first grim dark.

Considering WaveHawk's penchant for thriller novel... the limit is absurdly high
I'm still pretty young so my grimdark limit is pretty low, that's why the original draft (Psychopathic Irish, Shaggy dog ending, and Black and Black morality) was scrapped.

Side note- Can you please explain what sex is to Irish already? He keeps harassing me about it and it's getting annoying. If you don't want to do it then can you ask Karon or Maya? They'd probably explain if you asked them.( DON'T ask Tatenashi!)
Eratas123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 23:07   Link #2439
MeisterBabylon
~ Ping For Effect ~
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: The Golden Throne
Age: 28
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Irish: I thought you said the IS had life? Guess you were lying then.

*Starts planting bombs all over the hangar bay*
You're taking it out of context.

Quote:
Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon View Post
*Karon destroys an unmanned IS*

"This isn't personal. Blame it on the misfortune of your birth."

*ruuuuunz*
She's holding the shut-down core of the IS in her hands that she ripped out from the machine.

But I guess it would be better to paraphrase Char and go, "Please don't take this personally... I'm freeing you from the misfortune of your birth."

Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
EDIT: Seriously, Karon, Irish, STOP HAVING A CARNAGE SEX!
Karon: Sounds like FUN!

*more explosions*


Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Irish: Sex? What's sex? Sounds like some kind of weapon or something...Oh! You mean the other way you say "gender" don't you?
Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post
That's not what I meant...


~~~~~~

I was thinking maybe Karon should get an alias once she becomes more famous so...

...nerdy Eileen Mass.
__________________

On money: Every man has a price. For everything else, there's MakoCard.
MeisterBabylon is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2011-10-08, 23:07   Link #2440
ZeroXSEED
I am no one
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
I'm still pretty young so my grimdark limit is pretty low, that's why the original draft (Psychopathic Irish, Shaggy dog ending, and Black and Black morality) was scrapped.

Side note- Can you please explain what sex is to Irish already? He keeps harassing me about it and it's getting annoying. If you don't want to do it then can you ask Karon or Maya? They'd probably explain if you asked them.( DON'T ask Tatenashi!)
Spoiler for NSFW:

Yeah, I already told him, what's next?
__________________
Ichika Is Awesome
ZeroXSEED is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 16:19.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
We use Silk.