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Old 2012-03-12, 10:53   Link #25561
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@ Treme - At what point did I insinuate that you were making an OP pilot? I said "So it's just canon with Joan mixed in?" How does that say "Joan's an overpowered badass"? Hell, you replied "Joan's not important".....yet you don't deny that he still gets inserted and that the girls are static, there's more ffod porn than plot, or Ichika's a rock. If you want to say otherwise, prove me wrong and I'll accept it. Nothing you have said contradicts "So it's just canon with him mixed in". When I said that fics like that go downhill fast, I didn't say the OC had to be badass to make it fail. Even if he/she's not a badass, the fic can still fail.

@ Demi - Which I'm already trying to fix THat's the point of the re-write.

@ Senpai - When does te stomach start eating itself?
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Old 2012-03-12, 10:53   Link #25562
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*facepalm*

Joan, Not important.

He is not a self-insert.
He is just a tool.
His personality is simplified to shy and timid so that I can develop him as a character.
He is just a male IS pilot in ISA.

Problem is:
Male IS pilot receive special attention and privilege just for being a guy.

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I give up.

Edit: How do you develop a character who main aspect revolve around a guy? And that guy is a stone who get aroused by food.

Until I had new idea, I will be playing Mass Effect 3 or working on my Shakugan no Shana fanfic instead.
To be honest, I don't see why you can't make this into a girl oc. Joan can be a girl name, personality matches with most girls I know. And, she does not NECESSARILY have to have special privileges. And if she does, maybe she comes from a royal family/or from a family with heavy political ties which make her parents seem like the behind the scene type of person.

And your character can develop from either an unconfident person to one that gains the strength through friendship and to overcome any possible traumas/expectations in the past.

And, it's not exactly a rule that your character has to fall in love with Ichika, or that your character is the centre of your universe (as long as the canon laws/rules are abided by)
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Old 2012-03-12, 10:59   Link #25563
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Stomach... eating itself?

Also, a snack bit of a scene:

Spoiler for Scene~!:
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Old 2012-03-12, 10:59   Link #25564
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@ Eras
People call it gastritis, and that's if you skip eating few times (hell, even once sometimes did it)

@ Stratos
Bitch doesn't know her place :3
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:00   Link #25565
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When working on IS fanfic, I am beginning to realize that Ichika.....is actually quite generic for a harem male lead.

Something just felt missing.....

I think it's the heart....

Sora no Otoshimono's Tomoki. Absolute Pervert but his kind heart and strong appear only when in serious situation.

High School DXD's Issei, also a pervert but screw with his friend, he kick your ass.

To-love-ru's Rito..... not a pervert but end up in perverted situation..... he do have his own moment when his caring side shine (when the series is not doing its usual crazy fanservice stuff)

Edit:

YES! THE HEART!
I NEED TO WORK ON THE HEART!!

MUAHAAHAAAHAA!

*Age will be conducting Heart surgery on Ichika*

Moar edit: Scrapping everything to start from the beginning again....

THE HEART IS IMPORTANT!
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:01   Link #25566
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@ Demi - Honestly, do I have a choice at all? Ive made Skyrim and Dragon age fanfics where the characters are badass. Did I get complaints? Nope, because everyone's badass in those games. I make a half decent OC? I'd get my head chewed off by the fanndom since only Chifuyu in the story counts as badass. If I could make a stronegr OC, I would, but this fandom doesn't give much choice in the matter.

@ Senpai - Is there any way to prolong this from happening if you don't eat?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:04   Link #25567
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Bitch doesn't know her place :3
It's what happens when one thinks that the IS are the ultimate, undefeatable machines. Should see her reaction at the later part.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:05   Link #25568
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Honestly, no answer for that in my case, maybe Blitz can help ya?

@ Stratos
Cast trying to kill each other? It was Tuesday in canon, and you get the atmosphere well Anyway, what's the title of Nami Tamaki song you mentioned earlier?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:17   Link #25569
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Cast trying to kill each other? It was Tuesday in canon, and you get the atmosphere well Anyway, what's the title of Nami Tamaki song you mentioned earlier?
Nana Mizuki, actually

The song name is Black Diamond.

Would be an apt OP song for the third part of Athena series, currently under the working title "Infinite Stratos: Athéna Espérance".

Also, next part of the aforemention scene:

Spoiler for Scene~!:


Edit: Gonna turn in for the night... ^^
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:24   Link #25570
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At what point can Hallucinations "Kill" you like the ones in Higurashi?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:29   Link #25571
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The same case as you winced seeing a guy getting kicked in the nuts.

If it's affect the brain strongly, it can cause the brain to be convinced that the pain and injury is real
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:32   Link #25572
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Does this mean you can literally die if you hallucinate that someone killed you?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:33   Link #25573
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Yes. You can, and it does happens, if rarely.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:34   Link #25574
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How exactly does wearing black count as stealth? it seems most stealth outfits are black no matter the environment.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:39   Link #25575
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Well, if you count any realistic night combat environment, it's not black, it's very dark blue/gray that is stealthy (why else do you think CT units wore blues?). Black is more conspicuous most of the time, unless there's no light source in the slightest.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:44   Link #25576
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It just seems odd when everybody says stealth, they immediately wear black outfits no matter how out of place it would be. Anyway, I should probably re-design the skull suit from being a skintight bodysuit. Any ideas on what stealth wear usually looks like?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:46   Link #25577
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Stealth wear don't reflect light.

That's all.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:49   Link #25578
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Is it usually baggy or tight?
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:52   Link #25579
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As long as it doesn't restrict mobility, no problem.
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Old 2012-03-12, 11:53   Link #25580
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Any idea why Honne's so popular? She beats some of the heroines in overall popularity!
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