2012-03-20, 07:56 | Link #26701 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Well, at least in my version. She's a mild and sympathetic version of attention whore, she want people to look past her supposedly perfect facade.
Yeah, Idol was supposed to represent youth, innocent spirit.
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2012-03-20, 08:05 | Link #26703 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Good and bad. Most of the time it's understandable, a deconstruction of Mary Sue if I must say, or at least, Broken Ace played straight. Again, this is not done for bashing, I want to flesh her out according to ST rules of characterization.
The bad stuff came when her hints are not clear enough, she always try to fix it however, and this is the reason everyone open their heart to her (even dumbass Ichika), not because she came and tamed everyone for no reason than to show that she was awesome. I dunno.
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2012-03-20, 08:27 | Link #26709 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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She still do her duties as leader: meeting with various people and reading reports and stuff, but either way, it was still her parents who did the job full time. She still have a lot to learn.
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2012-03-20, 08:44 | Link #26713 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I dunno, they shall remains nameless and figureless (because you know I'm not very good at handling too many OC, especially their names).
They do business of course, trading-related business to be exact.
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