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Old 2012-05-03, 19:07   Link #30381
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Anyway, I think I know the jackass that write the flaming review on your story... judging from his profile, he is really a proud one.
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Old 2012-05-03, 20:18   Link #30382
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And StratoSpear, don't you think you're giving a bit too much away here?
Nay. :3

This is a fanfic authors board. I see it as a channel to splurge my ideas here, get comments then amend if needed.

Needless to say, what I post here may be different from the final work.
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Old 2012-05-03, 21:06   Link #30383
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Well its good to be back. I'll be reading all your fics again. Just asking: has anyone been recieveing some very flaming and trashing reviews from anyomous people? Or is it just me?
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I think Jak and others did, mine too but not as bad as them.

Anyway, in this five months I only managed to roll 3 chapter, sigh
I disabled anonymous reviewers before I even posted the Prologue of my fic.

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Nay. :3

This is a fanfic authors board. I see it as a channel to splurge my ideas here, get comments then amend if needed.

Needless to say, what I post here may be different from the final work.
Suit yourself man. Anyway, exactly how did you portray the canon characters on their very first encounter with Inami?
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Old 2012-05-03, 21:32   Link #30384
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Suit yourself man. Anyway, exactly how did you portray the canon characters on their very first encounter with Inami?
Portray as in...?

As per Bouclier Chapter 2. Ichika and Cecilia since are the only ones that conversed with him. With Ichika being arbitrary in a sense that he attempted to attack both the Minerva and the Praxidike drone upon sight.

For Cecilia, she got a little too stern and direct with her words while expressing her negative suspicions for the Minerva.
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Old 2012-05-03, 21:43   Link #30385
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My question is, were they actually in character during that encounter?

Cause I'm thinking of having the canon characters appearing more in my fic. The first time they appeared was near the end of Chapter 6.

If I'm going to do that, I want to make sure that they're themselves.
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Old 2012-05-03, 21:51   Link #30386
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My question is, were they actually in character during that encounter?
I would say yes. but from a reader's POV... There's not much telling for that since their meeting was brief.
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Old 2012-05-03, 21:58   Link #30387
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Yeah it was short.

For mine, I got a little something in mind. But what I need to be watchful of, is to keep the canon characters in character...
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:07   Link #30388
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Seems like what I thought was true: Looks like the fics which hav Ichika changed get flak for copying the class intro scenes.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:11   Link #30389
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Yeah it was short.

For mine, I got a little something in mind. But what I need to be watchful of, is to keep the canon characters in character...
I'm pretty sure some of the other bros here can help out.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:14   Link #30390
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Alright. But truth be told, I want to keep it close to the vest from here.

And if I ask, it'll feel as though I'm giving things away by having what I asked turning into "hints" of whats to come.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:16   Link #30391
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Why are you so paranoid? There's about at most 6-10 guests. You get dozens if not hundreds of readers in your story, so they can't possibly all be here reading spoilers.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:17   Link #30392
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Alright. But truth be told, I want to keep it close to the vest from here.

And if I ask, it'll feel as though I'm giving things away by having what I asked turning into "hints" of whats to come.
I understand that feel.

It's all right, each of us have our own styles. It is, as has been said for times and times again, fanfiction.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:34   Link #30393
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Alright, I'm wondering something about Laura's railgun.

Do the shots have an 'blast' radius when it impacts it's target, or not?
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:40   Link #30394
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Alright, I'm wondering something about Laura's railgun.

Do the shots have an 'blast' radius when it impacts it's target, or not?
Air repulses, yes. But an explosion? Unlikely, unless she's using explosive shells.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:41   Link #30395
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Air repulses, yes. But an explosion? Unlikely, unless she's using explosive shells.
But does the shot's impact cause some sort of shockwave, powerful enough to knock someone back or send them flying?
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:54   Link #30396
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Don't think so... Solid 0.8 caliber slugs can't produce that much impact wave. Naval autocannons are another story though.
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Old 2012-05-03, 22:57   Link #30397
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But was it mentioned that Laura used explosive shots with her railgun?
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Old 2012-05-03, 23:04   Link #30398
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But was it mentioned that Laura used explosive shots with her railgun?
No idea, sorry. Maybe Box can help with that.
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Old 2012-05-03, 23:06   Link #30399
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Sheesh, once again I'll have to improvise...
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Old 2012-05-03, 23:10   Link #30400
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Given the advance nature of IS tech, her railgun should be just as powerful impact-wise even if she uses solid slug shots.

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