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Old 2012-05-30, 09:02   Link #31621
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Half and half really, even some of the human is not 'exactly' normal. However, even those abnormals is mundane in comparison to people like Lala or Yami.

Too bad, slow Internet, sorry
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:08   Link #31622
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Would someone who's incredibly thin still be able to do physically straining activities?

Side note - Just watch it when you can
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:12   Link #31623
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Theoretically, as long as their joint and muscle can do it, I don't see why not. But from what you explained, it sounds like someone that is massively underweight, I doubt they can do much
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:16   Link #31624
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Yeah, I need to know how to write action scenes when Irish starts his "Dying" process. He also acts more pissy than normal since his condition makes it harder for him to do normal actions.
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:21   Link #31625
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^ I think Irish' issue is not so much lack of strength, more about the internal damage that is piling up.

And him being more of a jackass than usual is realistic, it's a normal coping mechanism for helplessness.
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:23   Link #31626
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Any excuse one can say when they start abnormally losing mass in a short period of time? He holds off on saying he's "dying" since he doesn't think its important.

Side note - Are Rito and Laura like Brother and Sister?
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:36   Link #31627
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When someone losing weight rapidly, it means something incredibly dangerous. Anorexia was the one considered tame.

Kinda, they started like brother and sister that constantly quarrel, but something tick off after Ichika defeat her. Laura rapidly developed actual personality as time passes and leaving her abnormal, unstable fabricated emotion, which changed their relationship. The most notable example would be them seeing each other naked.

Normally, Rito has no issue baring small hint of embarrassment and protest, but later, well.... he froze just like he react with other girl naked, or totally freaked out like other girl seeing HIM naked.

EDIT: as for Ichika's harem, I'm somewhat conflicted whether to choose Houki or Charlotte as main haremmete along with Lala. Any opinions?
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:48   Link #31628
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Maybe somebody else? Houki and Charlotte tend to be the mains already.
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Old 2012-05-30, 09:56   Link #31629
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Okay, let me do small recap then

Ichika's harem (revised):
> Lala
> Houki
> Charlotte
> Lingyin
> Tatenashi (considered)
> Saki (also considered)
> Lun
> Ran (minor)

Blue = Original, Red = Swapped

So the choices... boils down to Lingyin, Tatenashi.

No way in hell I'll make Ran the main. Too little background and reasoning, no offense.

Lun is out of question because Lala already fill the 'exotic girlfriend' quota. (not like Lingyin and Tatenashi is normal but....yeah ). She and Saki also form TLR, which mean if they're chosen, none of the canon girl has a chance.
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:11   Link #31630
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@ Senpai - Draft, please judge.

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Anyway, Tatenashi seems like the most reasonable one. Houki and CHarlotte have been done to death and Rin is basically too tsundere 9/10 times.
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:15   Link #31631
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Thats.....


EPIC!

I can feel the change of mood from the usual bickering to heartfelt conversation, in a single draft? Impressive.

Okay, I'll settle on Tate then ! And no, no hard feelings this time because she's not too OOP in the Fusion fic.
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:24   Link #31632
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I listened to this rap:



And now I can't stop writing this rap!!

(SHOOTING ST@RS, YEAH!
Brought to you, by Kougami-P!
Shout it out, SHOOTING ST@RS!
COME ON!)


My name is Gou Karon, GO!
My trademark is my V-fin, yo!
Always cheerful, always throttle full
I trip a lot, gotta be careful!

What? Should I make an accident appeal?
I don't think my Buster Cannon damaged the school field--?
Oh a personal appeal?!
Well, 'leader!' that's how I feel!


~~~~~~

Celeste Eisenberg, 10 years old. ._.
My body is aged to 15 years though.
I cannot smile and I am bad with the bold,
My superiors think I'm a failure right through!

I may be a faulty cyborg, but I can still imitate

*hyper-cheerful*
So I'll be everyone's favorite leader yet!
(what the?!)

~~~~~~

Yay, I'm Erika Weber.
I'm poor, but I work hard!
Still, I have to call it a day,
There's a sale going on by the way!
I'm may be useless.
But I'll be the superpowered leader, no less!


(And you're not useless, no, yeah!)

~~~~~~

Nameís Huang Lingyi!
Exquisite china dress or Char Siew deculture, Iím perfect at everything!
Donít you think Iím at a disadvantage, or
*yandere face* youíll be a stain on Shenlongís blade. EheheheÖ

My chords are Megadeth incarnate,
My scream rings like Metallica.
Come, everyone, I am your Leader!
Raise the fox sign high!


SATSUGAAAI!!

~~~~~~

I'm everyone's idol, Risette!
I'm smart, beautiful and great with a sword.
The choice is clear you don't have to dither,
And for the last time, I'm not tsundere!!

Nihihi! It's no surprise that I'm the leader.
The top of the arena, that's who I am!
Even sounds great "Risette the Great Leader,
And her loyal servants, Sam I Am!"


~~~~~~

Ling: Eh? I'm not the leader?
Riz: What are you saying? Of course it's me!
Celeste: Um... I also...
Ling & Riz: Celeste, be quiet!
Celeste: Ö
Erika: Um, what if we make everyone leader?
Ling & Rizu & Celeste: Everyone?
Erika: Yes!
Karon: I see.
Rizu: So everyone's the same!
Everyone: Now, let's go!

~~~~~~

Ippo zenshin! Zenshin!
Tama ni chuudan!
Sonna toki mo aru sa
Murisezu ni kansou! Kansou!
Tsugi wa rakushou!
Dekiru to ii no dakedo
Sore ga uchira no yarikata dakara.


~~~~~~

My name is Shinonono Houki,
Iíve no interest in being an idol
All this was just my older sister mucking around--
What did you mean, ďI wanted to?!Ē W-WHO TOLD YOU THAT?!

*sigh* All these halfwits know nothing about being idols
I donít care about them one bit.
Especially when their IS are so weak, I end up carrying the team.
So if I am not the Leader, then who will?


(So, you do care for them.)

~~~~~~

I'm called Fujiwara Kei.
Dancing and racing are what I do best. Eh-he-!
Thanks to that, I'm really really popular!
But all the people who approach me are girls! UrgÖ

All right! I'll rough up this ĎLeaderí business
With fiery burning spirit!
Ö
Ah, I meant it in a more girly way...

~~~~~~

My name is Teo Ginjyo.
My people call me Princess, but I really am not.
I often dream, where is my soulmate?
And by the way, where is the clubroom?

Hm, yes.
I have political experience, after all.
Ehehe, so, I donít mind
if you accept me as Leader.


~~~~~~

Sou desu, Kougami Tsubomiís the name.
I am the glasses-and-braids President of the Light Music Club.
And every day Iíve to play the straight man.
Itís so troublesome, honestly!

What? Thereís someone other than me who can be leader?
Iím set for the top! I thank you for your support!


~~~~~~

Icchi danketsu! Danketsu!
Toki ni shoutotsu! Ato kusarenai you ni
Toriaezu enman! Enman!
Subete soudan! Tsumaranai koto demo
Minna matomete, SHOOTiNG ST@R!


~~~~~~

Ippo zenshin! Ippo zenshin! (Zenshin! Zenshin! Zenshin!)

Icchi danketsu! Icchi danketsu! (Danketsu! Danketsu! Danketsu!)


~~~~~~

My name is Louise díNapoleon.
Iím the 2nd best in school. Itís true.
Lui will do anything for my Honey.
Ne, ne, Honey look over here!


(Stop trolling me!)

Luiís really popular, so I think I can be leader.
Btw, what does a leader do?
Curbstomp people?


(Youíre not the Student Council President!!)

~~~~~~

Iím Agni! Iím Moniq! Weíre AgniMonique!
We are the Two-in-One IS idol!
But weíre still paid the same.
Thatís of course.
ReallyÖ

Hey, hey, Moniq, want to be the Leader?
Sounds troublesomeÖ
Oh yesÖ
*Together* Forget it then.


~~~~~~

Agni: Arenít we missing Stark?
Stark: *sunbathing in the background, raises a glass* Iím not here!

Kei: But don't we have too many leaders?
Tsubomi: Come on, hurry up and decide.
Gin: My, what should we do?
Lui: *yawn* Let's stop with this leader stuff!
Houki: That's true. We don't need a leader.
Tsubomi & Gin: After all,
Everyone: All of us are friends!

~~~~~~

Ippo zenshin! Zenshin!
Tama ni chuudan!
Sonna toki mo aru sa
Murisezu ni kansou! Kansou!
Tsugi wa rakushou!
Dekiru to ii no dakedo
Sore ga uchira no yarikata dakara.


Icchi danketsu! Danketsu!
Toki ni shoutotsu! Ato kusarenai you ni
Toriaezu enman! Enman!
Subete soudan! Tsumaranai koto demo

Minna matomete,
Minna matomete,
Minna matomete,
SHOOTiNG ST@R!


~~~~~~

There, complete! A quick introduction to all the ST@RS. My brain hurts!
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:30   Link #31633
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@ Meistah - Heyyyyyyyy, long time no see man! Saw you on the Nyarko forums:P Anyway, isn't Karon Leader?

@ Senpai - Any operations that add body mass or fix organ functions?

Side note - Will she still act the same?
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:30   Link #31634
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*dies in glorified sparkling flame of awesomeness*

@ Eras
Adding body mass? Well, you better ask meister up there, surgery is not my specialty.

For the second one, yes, it's called corrective surgery, but not always done because of invasive nature and the risk following. It was done if medical treatment is not enough.

Yes, but Ichika know better how to react.
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:43   Link #31635
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Can I just add some unspecified surgery for organ regeneration? Since the IS world has NANOMACHINES here, it shouldn't be a problem. The only thing is he refuses to take the operation.

Side note - Qhat about the sibling rivalry?
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Old 2012-05-30, 10:56   Link #31636
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Yes, you can.

It's still there, but this time it was Rito who she approached. Of course, she's banging her head into the wall about the fact that Rito is halfway to be Kanzashi's friend before she add extra complexities. It turned out good though, her effort was paid decently.

Furthermore, Tatenashi also has strained friendship issue with Saki. As well as persistent misunderstanding with Motemitsu. This time though she solved it by herself s part of her own character plot
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Old 2012-05-30, 11:01   Link #31637
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What do you call it when a daughter says things like "I wanna marry dad when I grow up!"?

Side note - Is Kanzashi a Main?
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Old 2012-05-30, 11:01   Link #31638
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is there something wrong with a story when I find myself cheering for the badguys, wishing karmic retribution on the goodguys while at the same time wanting to mutilate said good guys?

EDIT: that phase in life where a daughter has elektra complex?
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Old 2012-05-30, 11:09   Link #31639
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@ Eras
Nothing weird, remember the Parent->Spouse template I said before? Children often (though not always) use their parents as template for their spouse.

As a child, they might use brother, sister, father or mother as frame of reference. A child after all has no distinction between Platonic, Familial, Lust, or Admiration.

Incest plot notwithstanding, above situation is normal.

I have considered some idea about Kanzashi or Cecilia being main, but that means I have to kick Laura (the TLR spot is occupied by Haruna already). Incidentally, Laura was the third most common Heroine chosen, topped only by Charl and Houki.

So maybe there's a hope.

@ Demi
Eh, it depends really. You probably watching too much Death Note
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Old 2012-05-30, 11:10   Link #31640
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@Eratas:
Well, there is the problem of how the Nanomachines get their energy. You could wirelessly supply them... but then you might end up pumping lethal ionizing radiation at your patient (ionizing radiation is also known as nuclear radiation). The Nanomachines could get their energy from ambient energy in the human body, but then they would work very slowly. Also, remember that the size of Nanomachines immediately make it impossible for them to do complex tasks without external guidance. Seriously, how do you cram enough processing power to a Nanomachine for it to know the difference between, let's say, red and white blood cells? Or differentiate the different types of Antibodies?

But anyway, since IS verse isn't that realistic anyway, you can just handwave that. I probably would too, if I were using nanomachines.

@Demi:
No. I find myself cheering for the bad guys often. My recent fanfic (still in planning stages) has a psychopathic (and not the goody two shoes fictional variety, either. An actual Psychopath) villain protagonist who quite literally feels nothing.
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