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Old 2012-06-01, 21:30   Link #31781
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I've been stuck on writing human interactions. I feel my writing became... too mechanical?

Also, having to take 3 subjects for summer classes really puts a wrench in vacation plans
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Old 2012-06-01, 21:33   Link #31782
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On the other hand, I still can't update frequently enough.
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Old 2012-06-01, 21:46   Link #31783
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Frankly, I'm jealous of your enthusiasm >:3
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Old 2012-06-01, 22:02   Link #31784
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What enthusiasm? Look at Stratos and Senpai for that.
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Old 2012-06-01, 22:05   Link #31785
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there's greedy too >.>

what would be a good name for a group of soldiers hellbent on taking down all sides of a power struggle? "Chaos corps" would be too corny.
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Old 2012-06-01, 22:10   Link #31786
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Outcasts, Wolfpack, Pariah etc etc.
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Old 2012-06-02, 03:38   Link #31787
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Woah, I hope you haven't forgotten about me

You guys still talking about this stuff? I'm now wondering when will this end, or will this ever end
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Old 2012-06-02, 03:45   Link #31788
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^ Not anytime in the near future, though myself I've been focusing on other series recently.
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Old 2012-06-02, 04:12   Link #31789
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Not really a big chance of this ending. We tend to talk about thing s even when they're not that tight knit to IS, so I doubt it.

Anyway, a load of new fics recently.
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Old 2012-06-02, 04:57   Link #31790
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Anyway, a load of new fics recently.
talking about fanfics..hmm, the current number of IS fanfics in ff is 112?
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:05   Link #31791
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Well, I decided to do a reconstruction of Lukasz's character. Apparently, trying to make a mass murdering Psychopath look sympathetic is not only hard, but very disturbing for me to write.

So, here's a snippet I wrote. No IS verse characters or IS units, just a small snippet to describe how I reconstructed Lukasz's character and downplayed his murdering tendencies.

Comments please !

Spoiler for Insurgency: The Nature of Self Awareness:


So... what do you think ?
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:14   Link #31792
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More sympathetic, but it doesn't exactly erase past actions.

"You can save a million people, but it'll never erase the one you destroyed."
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:27   Link #31793
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Well, yes, it doesn't erase the past actions. But he IS a villain after all. If I don't make him kill an innocent at some point of his life, I feel like I'm forcing him to be sympathetic. Just because you have made mistakes that cannot be fixed does not mean you cannot try to atone for them. Killing someone before does not exempt you from the effort of saving more lives.

Actually, that quote you used is brilliant. I could have someone say it to Lukasz. His response would probably be:
"That is the point. I know I cannot fix my mistakes. The least I can do now is to avoid making them."

Sounds... too... forced? I'll rethink his reply.
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:30   Link #31794
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I got hiatused :O I forgot to work about my fics, especially this one. The epilogue is the only thing left and I haven't finished it until now >.>

Being problematic in my Angel Beats! Fic too, I need more DRAMA ._.
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:34   Link #31795
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@Yachiyo
Hi! By the way, I'm new.

Sorry if I'm being stupid, but what does 'this one' refer to? Angel Beats?
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:38   Link #31796
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Hi! By the way, I'm new.

Sorry if I'm being stupid, but what does 'this one' refer to? Angel Beats?
This one, my fic in Infinite Stratos.
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:40   Link #31797
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@Yachiyo
Ah, so it's the name of your fic?
Sorry, didn't catch that .
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:51   Link #31798
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I'm just busy with another story atm.
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Old 2012-06-02, 05:59   Link #31799
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RIght now I'm just trying to get the next chapter of Future Imperfect out. The kid's are way too mature for their age.
From an 8 year old.

"A time machine makes no logical sense. If something like that was made, our current state makes no sense. Thesis and Anti-synthesis, ever action has an equal and negative reaction. Why the screw up? Shouldn't the creation of something like that automatically cause a ripple in time?
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Old 2012-06-02, 06:19   Link #31800
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Ah, so it's the name of your fic?
Sorry, didn't catch that .
No, it's Where have you been? and Everything is Radiant.
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