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Old 2012-06-07, 19:49   Link #32021
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^ Ah sorry, that's me mistyping, I mean mellow spot

The point still stand, and yes, she do just that because A. Gentaro is strong B. He is persistent in engaging enemy, even though he was forbid to C. To prevent collateral damage from action B
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Old 2012-06-07, 19:54   Link #32022
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A.

B. I'm on the fence with this since he seems to act if he feels that the person can't handle it.

C. Are you sure you don't watch Fourze? =))
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Old 2012-06-07, 19:59   Link #32023
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A.

B. Oh, sorry then, not watching Fourze, I assume Gentaro is like Ichika, having Chronic Hero SYndrome.

C. Again, no. But I got that from every Kamen Rider I watch, especially when they're still green and in Joke Forms, officially known as Blank Form. Kamen rider is basically human shaped brick after all.
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:03   Link #32024
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But Gentarou is certainly the meddling type. He makes it his mission to befriend everyone! Mostly via a rider kick to the face but

He seems to uphold certain codes of honor, so he knows if someone needs to do things by themselves. But at the same time he believes that friendship power answers all... wierd.
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:08   Link #32025
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That makes him quite a complex character than archetypical hero though, all kamen rider hero seems to have this kind of conflicting personality

Now I am confused where to put Saruyama, because when he said Europe, I have yet to decide WHICH country he will represent.

BTW, school first, see you later.
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:08   Link #32026
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:42   Link #32027
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Morning

Anyway, I just realized, did my drafts strikingly contrast from the description? It really sounds like a crapsack world when I read it again. And if done even more seriously, normal family did not exist.
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Old 2012-06-07, 22:41   Link #32028
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@ Senpai - Teen soldiers tend to invoke crapsack notions.
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Old 2012-06-08, 00:35   Link #32029
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The problem is pulling a line between "Dark back-story" and "Dark fic", maybe it's a leftover from writing ST concept, I'll try to put this one as lightly as I can though, so, less slapstick and more like a sitcom.

For example

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Old 2012-06-08, 02:24   Link #32030
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Yeah, that definitely seems more comedic.

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Old 2012-06-08, 02:35   Link #32031
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Old 2012-06-08, 02:42   Link #32032
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@ Senpai -Black Comedy's funny as long as it's not happening to you.

Anyway, I think I whiplash the mood too much when I write. Example: The start of an arc has Irish and Ichika having to deal with an.....eccentric rich family and being tasked to go to an island to get something. Then the "Insanity" draft picks up on what happens there.
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Old 2012-06-08, 02:46   Link #32033
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Nah, the Shadow cover both the light side of youngster's life and the crapsack world they're in. Besides, its was mostly Irish' segment, who is dark to begin with.
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Old 2012-06-08, 02:52   Link #32034
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I meant that it seems formula now. In every draft I do it tends to be: "Wacky event starts, plot happens, dark segment, the end." I'm copying the novels in cliche setup:/
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Old 2012-06-08, 02:56   Link #32035
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^ D'oh

How about having a recovery arc, as in, a realistic transition between the dark moment to the normal situation. So, no "Well Cecilia is injured, let's return back to harem antic",
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Old 2012-06-08, 02:59   Link #32036
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How do I do that?
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Old 2012-06-08, 03:12   Link #32037
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Hmm, I dunno, it's really how you put it. I can give some pointer though

First, Irish was greatly injured by that point, and Ichika would be very cautious, the girls will wonder what happened (assuming they don't know) and of course is worried about Ichika. This situation will go until Irish recover, and the whole situation settled down.
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Old 2012-06-08, 03:46   Link #32038
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Both of them are injured since the two of them are the one who went. They had to do it to get Ichika out of his arranged marriage (long story).

Side note - Would a club of Yaoi fangirls be a legitimate club?
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Old 2012-06-08, 03:54   Link #32039
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Here come some more!

IS Byakuya no Tsubasa

Phantoms of the Past

Fata Morgana (Crossover with Naruto)
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Old 2012-06-08, 04:05   Link #32040
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Nah, probably disguised as manga club or something
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