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Old 2012-06-16, 00:48   Link #32341
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Hmm, how about we take this example

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"You're saying that 4 people took down a unit? Even if they were using anti-IS weapons, it would be near impossible to do it with no casualties." Sasha interjected.

"It's not skill that saved them, but an invention. My invention." His voice took on an angry edge, "One of them was wearing an advanced suit, the small one. It's an invention of mine from before." He balled his hands into fists, "Most likely it scanned the suit and allowed the user to get close since it recognized it from a database somewhere.
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"You're saying that 4 people took down a unit? Even if they were using anti-IS weapons, it would be near impossible to do it with no casualties." Sasha interjected.

"It's not skill that saved them, but an invention. My invention." His voice raised intensely, "One of them was wearing an advanced suit, the small one."

One can see how angry he is consider how his fist curled into a dense red ball "It's an invention of mine from before."

He continued to express his rage as he explained how the suspect can achieve such miraculous achievement. "Most likely it scanned the suit and allowed the user to get close since it recognized it from a database somewhere.
There it is, apparently you almost enough transition, you just need to add some spacing and prose as seasoning. (just don't overdo it)
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Old 2012-06-16, 00:49   Link #32342
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Doesn't have to be matrix dodge =))
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Old 2012-06-16, 00:53   Link #32343
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@ Senpai - Thanks, I'll keep that in mind Does the Professor seem to stuish to you?
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Old 2012-06-16, 00:55   Link #32344
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Nah, if anything, he does sound like a bumbling idiot (intelligence =/= common sense)
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:07   Link #32345
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Sasha's basically the Token Good teammate (in a sense) while the other 3 look psychotic.

Side note - Need to add more people since 3 isn't enough. Any ideas?
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:11   Link #32346
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For what? THe terrorist? PT?
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:13   Link #32347
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Doesn't have to be matrix dodge =))
Dude, I already assume that it is not matrix dodge.

Which is why I claim it is impossible unless the shooter really suxs at shooting or the dodger luck out....or may be a little of both
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:19   Link #32348
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As in I'm going to revise the scene and need to add more people. 3 clearly isn't enpugh. Need like 5-6 at least.
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:20   Link #32349
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Eh, I don't see anything wrong.

Give me the three's profile (one paragraph is enough) and I'll make other 3

@ Age
Which is exactly the case with Ultraviolet
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:29   Link #32350
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@ Senpai - The three's profile...do you mean the one's already there or new ones?
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:33   Link #32351
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Err, wait a minute.

Lessee, you can add Autumn meddling with the conversation (wasn't supposed to) and a PT grunt commander (a guy), the other one... hmm...
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:37   Link #32352
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Wasn't PT all female, though? Anyway, I need one's from any other org. It's more than just those three who want Tabane's location.
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:52   Link #32353
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Maybe a Sarashiki spy?
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Old 2012-06-16, 01:56   Link #32354
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Wait, you mean a spy for or against? The leader's right there already.
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:12   Link #32355
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D'oh....


Okay, last thing, a CIA/KGB/Whatever agent.
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:15   Link #32356
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Can't put any law enforcement there, unfortunately. Pne of the main things there is that the Government isn't aware of what's happening there.

Sid note - DO you plan to include Tearju Lunatique (Yami's creator) in TLR Stratos?
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:22   Link #32357
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Feeling very conflicted, too many stories in my head right now....

But very little for IS......
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:28   Link #32358
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Then I give up, maybe a delegation of a I.S. corporation then.

Probably, but sure as hell I won't include Nana or Momo, legality is way too dubious (Mea and Yami at least has excuse). At best they'll appear as cameo and won't join the harem.

Note - Drawing canon unit is a PITA, too detailed.
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:29   Link #32359
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Just write what you want.

@ Senpai - Why too dubious? If you're willing to make Saruyama a male pilot, I think putting them in seems like a minor thing.
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Old 2012-06-16, 02:36   Link #32360
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Problem is that they're both 12-13, and unlike Sainan High, I.S.A. sure as hell not leeway enough to let them in for the lulz. Besides, Gid's raid on I.S.A. already leaving a black mark on the Devilukeans, where Zastin and Lala is more or less treated a captive. (It's explained in story of course)

Besides, Saruyama is example of Male pilot gone wrong, Motemitsu at least a decent one, just not good enough to fill the expectation. Both are a take that against bog standard male Pilot idea, but not without their own development.
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