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Old 2011-10-17, 10:04   Link #3221
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Yes it was done on purpose. That whole tirade about doing things like a MAN, was about this.

Both. You can grow them by being exposed to IS long enough, but most people never get enough of. And then there's Karon, who is on the other end of the scale where she born with a remarkable amount of the trait and still having so much more room to grow. (It is speculated often in my fanon by Tabane and Three Diagram that Kajie probably could have operated an IS like Ichika, but he never tried one and died before the theory was established). Which is rather hard to believe, but it is a BIG reason why Tabane is so interested in her, so I decided to run with it.
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Old 2011-10-17, 10:17   Link #3222
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Yes it was done on purpose. That whole tirade about doing things like a MAN, was about this.

Both. You can grow them by being exposed to IS long enough, but most people never get enough of. And then there's Karon, who is on the other end of the scale where she born with a remarkable amount of the trait and still having so much more room to grow. (It is speculated often in my fanon by Tabane and Three Diagram that Kajie probably could have operated an IS like Ichika, but he never tried one and died before the theory was established). Which is rather hard to believe, but it is a BIG reason why Tabane is so interested in her, so I decided to run with it.
That's a pretty interesting theme I'm guessing Ichika is the equalizer/balance then? Karon and the ISpers represent the full sci-fi spectrum while people like Irish and Maximillian represent the full realism spectrum. Ichika is male but he's also an ISper and pilot which makes things interesting.

Karon was born with great potential then? Did she get this from her genes or something else along the line?

Side note- In your fanon can ISper mind reading be resisted? In the draft I made about 30 or so pages ago they couldn't read Irish's mind because he's a very detached/secretive person. Karon could do it because, as you said, she has great potential and even then his head started hurting because of the forced reading. Can people resist in your story or can ISpers bypass any mind defense?
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Old 2011-10-17, 10:34   Link #3223
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Managed to finish up Chapter 5, it will be up shortly.

As for the epilogue draft, Eratas. I'll try and work on it tomorrow. Still trying to figure out the sequence of events, not to mention describing the massaging scene :P
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Old 2011-10-17, 10:36   Link #3224
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Managed to finish up Chapter 5, it will be up shortly.

As for the epilogue draft, Eratas. I'll try and work on it tomorrow. Still trying to figure out the sequence of events, not to mention describing the massaging scene :P
No problem, take as long as you need I'm just writing "SWC" for fun anyway so I don't really have a set time limit for it.
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Old 2011-10-17, 10:44   Link #3225
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No problem, take as long as you need I'm just writing "SWC" for fun anyway so I don't really have a set time limit for it.
Awesome!


Also, Infinite Stratos: Athena Bouclier Chapter 5 is UP!


Chapter 5: Revelations

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Old 2011-10-17, 11:49   Link #3226
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@ Agetreme- Does Amami like Pyxis or is it a one sided thing? I could use that for the epilogue later.
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Old 2011-10-17, 12:59   Link #3227
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@Zero: I am thinking if we are going past vol 7 events, that I might incorporate something resembling an advanced mobile doll system (reference from Gundam Wing) for the Golems Mk III.
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Old 2011-10-17, 17:09   Link #3228
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Does Tatenashi love Ichika? I need to know if I should include her in "daydreams"
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Old 2011-10-17, 17:43   Link #3229
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@Zero: I am thinking if we are going past vol 7 events, that I might incorporate something resembling an advanced mobile doll system (reference from Gundam Wing) for the Golems Mk III.
Well why not? I'm still afraid about falling into 'harem antics' problem, so here's my request;

Can you please write the segment where the girls (Madoka, Rin, Houki and Cecilia) visit the important place in the past (while all the guys watching porn and doing random jobs ) for example

> The park, where three of them often plays together, and where Ichika trained Madoka, had disappeared, replaced by an office building. (Madoka)
> Shinonono dojo has new owner who also open martial arts school (with different style), it was revealed that Ichika used to work there as kendo instructor assistant. (Houki)
> Huang restaurant, now still vacant and unsold as of now, became old and dirty because nobody took care of it. (Rin)

Spoiler for Lol:



Spoiler for My question that had yet to be resolved:


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Spoiler for Explanation of my review:
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:12   Link #3230
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@ Zero- Let me try to answer your questions.

1. Gen 1 and 2 I.S are weaker not just because they have inferior performance but because they have a harder time synching with their pilot. The more generations pass the more they become refined super weapons.

2. I'm assuming ShiroKishi can go supersonic because it's WAY thinner and compact to the other IS along with the fact that Chifuyu is probably a near god level pilot.

3. ShiroKishi is a fragile speedster because it forgoes all armor in favor of the BFS and boosters. Notice the arms and legs are very close to normal size while others have colossus size hands. It also didn't get hit one during it's debut.

4. Sorry, I don't know anything about the weapon.

I've answered your questions so can you answer mine? It's the post above yours.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:12   Link #3231
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I think concussion would be best as well. Then there's the factor of it being a smoke grenade as well. Ah, what the hell?

"S2 Concussion Grenade" it is. As a reminder, it's basically a flash bang, smoke grenade and an electrical jammer in one.

Flash bang: Unleashes a flash of light to blind the targets, also dazes and disorients by the shockwave from the detonation.
Smoke Grenade: Unleashes a thick cloud of smoke to disrupt the target's vision.
Electrical Jammer: Tempararily jams electrical systems.

It does all 3 of these things at the moment of detonation. This video here shows how it detonates. It'll affect both human and machine targets. And the Infinite Stratos is no different.
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How does that grenade do all these things at the same time?
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To be honest, I can't really explain it right now.
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Huh? Why? Classified information?
Yeah, you can say that.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:30   Link #3232
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@ Zero- Let me try to answer your questions.

1. Gen 1 and 2 I.S are weaker not just because they have inferior performance but because they have a harder time synching with their pilot. The more generations pass the more they become refined super weapons.

2. I'm assuming ShiroKishi can go supersonic because it's WAY thinner and compact to the other IS along with the fact that Chifuyu is probably a near god level pilot.

3. ShiroKishi is a fragile speedster because it forgoes all armor in favor of the BFS and boosters. Notice the arms and legs are very close to normal size while others have colossus size hands. It also didn't get hit one during it's debut.

4. Sorry, I don't know anything about the weapon.

I've answered your questions so can you answer mine? It's the post above yours.
Yeah thanks, I'll use no 2 and 3 as my argument.

@Jak

Hmm.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:32   Link #3233
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Karon was born with great potential then? Did she get this from her genes or something else along the line?
As Tabane describes to Three Diagram (one of the taglines for the 'movie' I scribbled down for lulz), "Humanity advances as a slow rate, but every so often, there will be someone born with enough talent to define the world for a long time to come."

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Side note- In your fanon can ISper mind reading be resisted? In the draft I made about 30 or so pages ago they couldn't read Irish's mind because he's a very detached/secretive person. Karon could do it because, as you said, she has great potential and even then his head started hurting because of the forced reading. Can people resist in your story or can ISpers bypass any mind defense?
At the start, I kept it as vague as I could, so Karon noticed that when she first got into the Vandam I she could "read the movements" of the 3 PT agents and their Mobile Dolls easily. After that fight and the end of the story, Tabane explains it to her that she was an ISper, "someone whose unique brain structure can read the hidden language of humans using the IS' sensors and interact with the core to create a new One Off Ability."

This hidden language is only restricted to strong emotions, and some people are more easily read than others. And there will be quite a few people that Karon can't read, and she'd simply brush it off as "unreadable". Irish would fall in to the latter, but she's still perceive his very strongest emotions, like pain, hatred and... Love.

*fleeeeeeeeeez*
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:36   Link #3234
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^ WHAT DO YOU MEAN WITH TWIN CORES?! PLEASE ELABORATE!

*Pant* *pant*

Can't believe you skipped my question THREE times even though it's very specific for you...
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:41   Link #3235
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@ Zero - Can you please answer the question above? If you can't then it's okay.

@ Meister - So she's just naturally gifted then? I guess that's okay. Good luck explaining what love is to Irish though Most child soldiers in real life can feel or even experience love but they won't know what it is, it's part of the emotional numbing they receive due to constant fights.

Side note - She could probably read Amnesiac!Irish's mind just fine since he's generally trusting and gullible unlike Jerkass!Irish.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:45   Link #3236
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Sorry Zero, that has to wait till my fic comes out... Eras asked the same question, and that was my answer to him.

IE, I turned her profile into a full fic.

But yes, due to some spoilered circumstances, Vandam Imouto has the Twin Core System, where the power output a single IS core is not doubled, but squared...

...in theory. The current output of the thing is still comparable to other MPIS, the second core being a redundant system that Karon uses for her One Off Ability "Zenryu Zenkai" (Full Power, Limits Off - An unreliable ability that makes Vandam I glow red. Percentage chance of 3x every parameter for a short time, then return to 1/3 of original parameters to recharge if the effect triggers.) It is speculated to be incomplete, and may need to reach Second Shift to complete it. But no one knows, not even Tabane. She's just watching her creation grow...

But I'll come out and say it first. I have no plans for a Raiser of any kind.
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Does Tatenashi love Ichika? I need to know if I should include her in "daydreams"
You mean this? She can, potentially. She shown some hints in V7, but due to her mischievous nature, it was obscured by her actions. The lack of Tatenahsi POV be damned.

(I actually convinced that she's a hidden tsundere somehow, even though it was wrong on so many levels)

Also, ^Twin Drive System?? nah, you often broke my expectation, I'll stop guessing.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:53   Link #3238
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You mean this? She can, potentially. She shown some hints in V7, but due to her mischievous nature, it was obscured by her actions. The lack of Tatenahsi POV be damned.

(I actually convinced that she's a hidden tsundere somehow, even though it was wrong on so many levels)

Also, ^Twin Drive System?? nah, you often broke my expectation, I'll stop guessing.
Tsundere? How can she be a tsundere when she's such a f***ing tease!? She looks more like that girl who teases you but never let's you get any. Oh well, I'll include her in "daydreams".

Side note - Did yoi read the latest post for "SWC"? I need to know if it's okay.
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Old 2011-10-17, 18:54   Link #3239
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Does Tatenashi love Ichika? I need to know if I should include her in "daydreams"
@Eratas: well, I would say it's genuine love, so Tatenashi may lower the amount of teasing and actually increase romantic like actions without malice. But definitely not to the point of constantly daydreaming about Ichika, that's Kanzashi's role not the onee-san.
If you want, you can take some ideas from "waltz from the mysterious lady", hopefully that might give you some more input.


@Zero: Not really sure if twin drive IS cores may actually work for this universe, I mean it's not like Gundam where 2 drives combined together will square the output. (and no magic fairy dust please)

Well, in Ichika's dream like thing in ep 12, I would say that Shiro Kishi has a complete core, as it's the same core that Ichika is using. And the Shiro Kishi has a huge ass buster blade, I have no idea if that's supposed to be a primitive Yukihira.
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Tsundere? How can she be a tsundere when she's such a f***ing tease!? She looks more like that girl who teases you but never let's you get any. Oh well, I'll include her in "daydreams".

Side note - Did yoi read the latest post for "SWC"? I need to know if it's okay.
Yeah, I read half of it before the power out yesterday, and then I went to sleep.

I plan to continue to read it right now actually, but forget which pages.

@Blitz

If you read this, please read my PM or post above

It's not even twin drive system, just a backpack of some sort, which kicked hanger system to conserve space.
(actually, it's CANON ability that ByakuShiki 2nd shift has it's boosters doubled, but oh well)
Magic fairy dust? Screw it.
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