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Old 2012-07-20, 11:48   Link #34401
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Haruna: "Please do not let Yuuki-kun nowhere near the cherry, it's dangerous"

Girls: "Huh?" *Looks at Rito who skilfully knot the stem*

Girls: "Don't get excited, don't get excited"

(Somewhere else in the party, Ichika does the same with a peach)
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Old 2012-07-20, 12:34   Link #34402
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Spoiler for Chapter 3: Genius Beautiful Professor:


Does it feel right? The tone of terror in the story.
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Old 2012-07-20, 19:50   Link #34403
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Hmm, between Char twins, who should use Custom Mark II? Should Charlotte keep it, or she passed it to her brother and get a new machine?

I have some explanation of why and why, I just need some opinion.
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Old 2012-07-20, 19:54   Link #34404
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She keeps it and her brother gets something new... or something on par
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Old 2012-07-20, 20:41   Link #34405
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No comment, I take it that the segment has no problem?

time to move on to next part.....
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Old 2012-07-20, 20:45   Link #34406
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Yeah, I barely understand but I think it's fine.

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Well, the new unit is... ah, somewhat quirky. It's supposed to use Raphael Frame as well, but FINALLY incorporate G3 system which made it immune to beam weapon but vulnerable to physical weapon.

Considering it's full-armor type, I think it suit male profile as well (because y'now, boobs)
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Old 2012-07-20, 20:59   Link #34407
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Why Fuyuki is terrified of her will be explained later

If it is the name that confuse you...

I am still trying to decide to keep her name or change it..... (because of the Chapter Title character, Beautiful Genius Professor....)

Cecilia's name will not change though...
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Old 2012-07-20, 21:08   Link #34408
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Unlike Reiryaku Byakuya though, it does not nullify energy and made it harmless, instead, it works like numerous microscopic barrier working against focusing field that held beam/plasma together, working as both disrupter and deflector. However, due to fragile, sponge like nature, something with large momentum (i.e. physical weapon) will be slowed down only a little.

In Charles' hand, it can even BEND the attack somewhere. He's that genius

His combat skill OTOH suck ass compared to other major character, relying on insane thinking speed to counter.
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Old 2012-07-20, 22:51   Link #34409
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Morning guys....
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:08   Link #34410
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^ Dude, it's noon.
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:29   Link #34411
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It was 9 minutes from noon when I posted it:/
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:36   Link #34412
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Hahaha... stop arguing menial things
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:38   Link #34413
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Right, back to the main point: Almost done with Synchronicity, hopefully it'll be good.
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:45   Link #34414
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Congrats, I'm almost done with Episode 2 as well.
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Old 2012-07-20, 23:46   Link #34415
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How many words is it? I'm about 5000 now and still going.
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Old 2012-07-21, 00:17   Link #34416
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5500 words, apparently.
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Old 2012-07-21, 00:21   Link #34417
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Nice I'm almost done, so it'll probably reach 6000 something by the time I finish.

Though most of it is just exposition.
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Old 2012-07-21, 00:37   Link #34418
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I'm fasting starting today and my head is dizzy, can you help to enhance the last ecchi scene? It's seriously messy. It need something more than simple grammar fix

Spoiler for Warning: ecchi:
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Old 2012-07-21, 01:13   Link #34419
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Spoiler:


How's this?
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Old 2012-07-21, 01:19   Link #34420
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Much better thank you very much.
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