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Old 2012-08-10, 04:07   Link #35361
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I thought Ichika'd just put it somewhere for possible use, not really outright throw it out
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Old 2012-08-10, 04:19   Link #35362
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No, TLR!Ichika flat out refuse it, where ST!Ichika indeed simply take Yukihira and surpass Chifuyu altogether.

The only good thing about it that he's not being a jerk, even if he's blunt about it, and his reason actually made Chifuyu happy, even if she disappointed. This is the reason Chifuyu didn't force him like in canon, he already has backbone
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:11   Link #35363
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Some weirdo pervert idea entered my head for older harem.

Ichika cleans the house and finds an old film camera. He starts taking pictures with it. At that same exact moment Chifuyu comes running out in practically nothing but her birthday suit chasing Tabane who'd stolen the clothes she intended to change into after bathing. Ichika stares and his shutter finger starts twitching without moving away from the button as he enters a catatonic state.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:16   Link #35364
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Ichika always been like that if confronted by fanservice, DO WANT/DO NOT WANT conflict, so he just shut up and stood still.

If it was Canon Ichika, he probably will putting camera away, but not releasing it.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:18   Link #35365
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Man, Ichika's excessive "everyman"-ness is screwing with the progress of the KR crossover. Any part that stars him is just... too over the top to be him. And if I write any less I fear he may not be reacting enough. Geez...

EDIT: In short I never seem to be happy with how I write him.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:26   Link #35366
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Accept him or not, that's the only choice. Whether you hate him or like him came into consideration, but not the absolute factor. If you're not satisfied, just change him.

His mundane nature may clash with what you want, but think about it, he will be a good foil for Gentarou, who went 11/10 for everything. If you try hard enough, you will pull the charm at that. Hell, just give Ichika a small spine and it'll work.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:28   Link #35367
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I need material for calm rational non-overly-complex-minded main character. Any suggestions?
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:33   Link #35368
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He saw everything from 'normal' perspective.

For example, if he presented with the fact about Ran having a crush on him, he will be surprised about what she see in him. Or his osananajimi, on that matter, the first thing come to him is brother/sister like bond they share.

Ichika is a living, walking textbook, and even the slightest bit of personality WILL flesh him out. He refused Ran by claiming he saw her as a sister as well, conflicted between his desire for Houki or maintaining the harem integrity and status quo.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:39   Link #35369
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Spoiler for compare with the previous page:


does this seem less dramatic?
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:43   Link #35370
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Yes, that could work.
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Old 2012-08-10, 05:50   Link #35371
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I have opposite of your problem. I'm overly hammy when it comes to writing XD

EDIT: Ichika never saw Silent Zephyr before cannonball right?

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Old 2012-08-10, 06:31   Link #35372
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Nope, he didn't
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Old 2012-08-10, 07:13   Link #35373
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@ Senpai - Looks like you got your batch of Charles
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Old 2012-08-10, 07:20   Link #35374
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Yep, Haven't enough time harvest it but at least I give him/her the rep
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Old 2012-08-10, 07:25   Link #35375
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More ideas of changes for Bouclier re-write, somewhat drastic:

- Inami doesn't meet the CC cast during his first intervention. The Academy's security troopers simply watched as he brawls against the trio of Praxidike drones.
- He goes off to find Tsurugi in Hokota out of his own accord instead of being tasked to station there.

Thinking of having the two run into the CC cast when they're on their way to their seaside resort, though I'm not quite sure where that is on the world map... :P
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Old 2012-08-10, 07:32   Link #35376
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Man, Ichika's excessive "everyman"-ness is screwing with the progress of the KR crossover. Any part that stars him is just... too over the top to be him. And if I write any less I fear he may not be reacting enough. Geez...

EDIT: In short I never seem to be happy with how I write him.
Notice how I seldom talk about Ichika?

I had the same problem until I decided to be lazy and write him as....generic.

Edit: I am at another writer block for OC fic....*sigh*
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Old 2012-08-10, 07:37   Link #35377
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He'd probably not even realize what was happening and just assume they're "really close friends".
- That's EXACTLY why it'll be comedy gold! all the other girls are hinting at it and he still doesn't get it!
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Old 2012-08-10, 08:10   Link #35378
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Hell yeah! finally finished Ichika's part. For now T_T
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Old 2012-08-10, 08:48   Link #35379
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I'll be doing Synchronicity tom
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Old 2012-08-10, 10:07   Link #35380
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@eras: personally do you prefer realism in fic writing or wacky insanity?
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