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Old 2012-08-14, 12:06   Link #35581
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Half of it is just wangst:/ Kanzashi had the same problem when she was younger. Like Mother like son....well, except she doesn't go vigilante and starts being a loner instead. He's just lucky makeup can hide the wounds.

Anyway, how do I portray siblings with an "Always someone better" relationship while they still have a decent relationship?
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Old 2012-08-14, 12:39   Link #35582
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As long as the better one don't get too cocky or too envious, they can go along just fine, however the wall separated them will exist at any rate unless they break it... or ignore it altogether.
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Old 2012-08-14, 12:55   Link #35583
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Well, since this is Dark Future, they're going to ignore it A lot of problems would be solved if he just said what he was doing rather than making contrived excuses as to why he comes home bruised and bleeding every night.

How long would it take to heal if you were impaled with extreme prejudice with a spear?
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Old 2012-08-14, 12:57   Link #35584
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Iw on't heal naturally of course.

Even treated, it'll take at least three weeks, and roughly two months to perfectly heal.
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Old 2012-08-14, 13:09   Link #35585
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How bad will movement be impaired in the meantime?
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Old 2012-08-14, 13:11   Link #35586
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It's impossible to run, not only the pain but musculature movement as well. Even walking is frowned for the first two week or so.

EDIT: going to sleep.
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Old 2012-08-14, 13:17   Link #35587
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Saito doesn't stop taking jobs even after he gets impaled. The dialogue I posted earlier is him consulting with Yukari (Utsuho and Dan's daughter and his Childhood friend) on how to lure out a high school rapist who somehow leaves no trace. Since he's handicapped, he has to rely on her to do most of the legwork.

Anyway, I need a set of skills good for a mcgyverist/combat pragmatist. Any suggestions? All I have so far is tech knowledge and street fighting.
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Old 2012-08-14, 17:58   Link #35588
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It's kinda self explanatory, it's the ability to improvise and treat damn near everything as an asset.
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Old 2012-08-14, 21:50   Link #35589
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How long does it take to mimic or copy the basics or a fighting style?
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Old 2012-08-14, 21:56   Link #35590
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Not as detailed, since I'm kinda rushing.

Spoiler:


What do you think? Not sure if it's good enough.
Just my kind of read to brighten up my day.
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Old 2012-08-14, 21:57   Link #35591
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If you're accustomed to one style, it would be very difficult.
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Old 2012-08-14, 23:32   Link #35592
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@ Blitz - Why?

@ Senpai - Not memorize it permanently, just enough to trick someone into looking like you know it.
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Old 2012-08-15, 00:18   Link #35593
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Yes, it's easy though won't fool any pro.
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Old 2012-08-15, 00:19   Link #35594
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@ Blitz - Why?

@ Senpai - Not memorize it permanently, just enough to trick someone into looking like you know it.
Because I could FEEL the dark emotions in the story just by reading it, which makes it a success in my eyes.
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Old 2012-08-15, 00:35   Link #35595
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Lol the master is pleased
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Old 2012-08-15, 01:56   Link #35596
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Is it dark enough? I don't think it is

Anyway, I' making a new draft. Can you please read it, senpai?
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Old 2012-08-15, 03:07   Link #35597
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I'm concerned more about Dog Days, so many material dumped on audience, asking to be processed as fanfic
That's another one I'm resisting making a fanfic of
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Old 2012-08-15, 03:55   Link #35598
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Old 2012-08-15, 04:00   Link #35599
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Inspired but stared dead in the eye by exams... Dear sweet- BLARGH!
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Old 2012-08-15, 05:20   Link #35600
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Aaaargh.

I should spend less time looking at Fb (and all the little soap opera dramas and disasters that everyone else I know blames me for) and go put my back into writing.

...and where the hell is Box?

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"You probably shouldn't have caused that mess with Dunois' security troupe a few weeks ago." Tatenashi snapped the fan closed, her cat's smile still evident on her face. "Seriously. Most of the heads of security in Japan, and even a few in other countries think you went overboard with the Cousseran affair. It's raised some concerns over your suitability for this role."

"Suitability." [Ren] forced a laugh that was devoid of all spirit.

"I heard some at Dunois Industries wanted to send a prototype 3rd-gen IS to take Charlotte-san back, but they let Cousseran act first. Hm." Tatenashi tapped the edge of the fan lightly on her full lips, in an almost enticing manner. "Care to tell me what happened?"

"Necessary roughness." was all [Ren] would say.

"What do you call 'Necessary'?" The cat's smile remained, more a shield than the fan was.

"Whatever works. Whatever it takes."

"Hm." The catlike eyes narrowed.

"Watching over Orimura Ichika from the shadows is my duty." [Ren] did not look directly at the seated girl, instead eyeing the surroundings. No one else listened, they were alone in the park. "Not yours, Tatenashi Sarashiki."

"Oh, that will change from today onward."

[Ren]'s own eyes seemed to hiss but she held her tongue.

"The Johohonbu have spoken with the Sarashiki family." Sarashiki began, pausing only to see [Ren]'s reaction. The lack of response was her cue to continue. "As I am already enrolled in IS Academy, it's for the best if I protect and train Orimura Ichika."

"The principal of IS Academy is playing favorites."

"Now, now. We act only at the behest of those in power." Tatenashi replied with a light voice but without her normal cheer. The cat was done playing with the snake. "Your family and mine have been doing this for a long time. Don't take life too seriously.”

"You don't take life seriously enough." [Ren] replied back, with a little more ice in her voice than was normal. "And this has nothing to do with family."

"Correct."

[Ren] crossed her arms. "What are you getting at?"

"Simple." The firm sound of a fan slammed shut accompanied Tatenashi's new tack. "Do you want Tatenashi-onee-chan to pass on your love letters to him?"

"Do that and I'll cut open your throat where you stand."

"Oh, but I'm seated." Sarashiki chuckled again.

"Fine. I'll cut you open before you stand."

"Really, you." The cat's smile finally fell from Tatenashi's face. It was a dance of words, one with serious consequences. "What's a little joke between friends?"

"We're not friends."
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