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Old 2012-08-26, 10:17   Link #36081
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Okay so I lied... that is the perfect harem right there =))

Funny idea I had...

The fanon Orimura pheremones work on extremely beautiful women/men of varying temperament and make it 100% that they'll fall for the guy/girl of said lineage. Problem is all the pheremones home in on a particular kind of psychological make-up for all of its intended targets. All of them are b!tch a$$ crazy.

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Old 2012-08-26, 10:19   Link #36082
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Nah, it's nothing special to him. Every Harem MC seems to have this skill.
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Old 2012-08-26, 11:56   Link #36083
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@ Senpai - New draft out

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Old 2012-08-26, 23:51   Link #36084
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I am now unsure of how to proceed with the locker room scene. On one end, being lynched feels... wrong. On the other, it's so ecchi I may as well label it softcore porn....

I hate my life

T_T
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Old 2012-08-26, 23:53   Link #36085
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*Cue Star Wars theme*
Best scene EVER.

Though, why I feel it's emotionally weaker than usual? Even the short festival scene is more intense

@ Demi
What you have in mind now? Perhaps I can help
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Old 2012-08-26, 23:58   Link #36086
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Genta shouts for the girls' attention and tells them that he's not suspicious at all and it's not his intention to peep. They don't believe him at all.

One girl(ojou-sama from the class picture) quickly calls the police on her celphone. Gentarou immediately senses it and jumps dramatically to prevent her from putting him in jail. He succeeds in disconnecting the call... but the landing is pretty bad. She's pinned under him and the towel that was the only thing keeping her modest just... popped.

Cue awkward moment.

Gentarou faints and when he wakes up, he's tied up and being guarded by Shizune.
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Old 2012-08-27, 00:04   Link #36087
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Just don't give explicit description.

It'll work just fine.
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Old 2012-08-27, 00:12   Link #36088
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@ Senpai - He does retain his appearance, so I guess that makes things awkward. Anyway, did Tatenashi seem too hostile to you?
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Old 2012-08-27, 00:15   Link #36089
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Nah, she's at least less hostile than Houki, more like typical Tsundere with bumbling dad (Karin from Bleach?).

Though, Irish implied she's way more dangerous.

EDIT: have to go, later.
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Old 2012-08-27, 00:23   Link #36090
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@ Senpai - Part of their dynamic is that they seem more like brother and sister than parent and child. Though who's supposed to be older varies.

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Old 2012-08-27, 01:37   Link #36091
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would it be considered honorable to turn yourself in despite not intending to do the crime?
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Old 2012-08-27, 01:49   Link #36092
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No matter the intention, crime is a crime. Though, that's what a consideration for.

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Large caliber machinegun roared as the machine danced gracefully around the metal labyrinth that is [Fire Valley] underground facility.

The young man, who is not even a real pilot, struggling hard to keep synchronizing with his machine's movement. While Inertia Cancelling mechanism keep him comfortable somewhat, he still not conditioned to high speed movement in actual, possibly lethal battle.

"[Good grief... this is suck]"

Chasing him is a black I.S., which is strangely agile for some reason. Normally, I.S. re optimized for high speed movement in open terrain, but this one is really different.

The female pilot's face is obscured by a visor, but the exposed torso didn't hide anything about the gender. then again, Male pilot are exceptionally rare.

She was followed by other two unit, either their unit is not as suitable, or their pilot not as skilled, or both, their maneuver are utterly clumsy, just like his.

"[Just give up already]" she said, launching what could be described as restraining web reinforced with strong energy barrier. If he was caught, then it's over.

"[I have dignity, miss]" He slip the grenade into it's chamber, the launcher has unusually medium-length barrel, but there's a reason for that.

Medium velocity shell spat, spinning coherently. It missed it's first target, but hit the one behind her, and thrashing it without nonsense.

Indeed, it was high powered HESH round.

"[As expected, that bootleg piece of junk DOES have it's merits]" the female pilot laughed.
Hmm, not tense enough. sigh.
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Old 2012-08-27, 02:06   Link #36093
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"Notoriously" is a term you use if it's already known to have a certain quantity which it is famous/infamous for. That's what "Notorious" would refer to.

...

D:

Azusa blackmails Gentarou into becoming her slave!?!?!?!!?
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Old 2012-08-27, 02:11   Link #36094
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Yeah, I'd fix it, if I ever reach that part anyway.

..........

I don't care anymore, moving on.
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Old 2012-08-27, 03:37   Link #36095
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I think I'm forcing the locker room scene too much... I'ma try redoing it.
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Old 2012-08-27, 06:36   Link #36096
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Do as you wish.

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The Quadratic foundation of Generation 9

Said to be the strongest team in I.S.A., their most incredible achievement is taking down the entire Student Council, composed of best pilot came from 12 countries, by themselves, ending the tyrannical regime as if their school life is a fantasy tale.

One year has passed, and a lot of things changed. Now, only one of them sat in the throne: Tatenashi Sarashiki.
Hmmm....
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Old 2012-08-27, 06:45   Link #36097
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What I missed...? o.o

Also, will the explosion of a sea tanker be enough to create a tsunami-type wave?
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Old 2012-08-27, 06:51   Link #36098
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Old 2012-08-27, 07:20   Link #36099
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New draft

Spoiler for Chapter 04 Part 1:


@ Stratos
No, it's less a tsunami and more like localized hot splash (bigger than Tsunami but brief)

@ Eras
I'm here.
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Old 2012-08-27, 07:24   Link #36100
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Awww, Kanzashi and Ichika and sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.

Side note - For the reversal fic, do you think Chifuyu has the personality to be Childhood friends with Dan?
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