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ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 08:36

Hmm, okay then. My fault.

It's actually less graphic than Jak's.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 08:40

Yeah, because I don't believe in description gorn:/ I also hate writing action scenes, as you can tell by the crappy action.

Side note - For the next draft, should it to be about Kanzashi or more ship tease?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 08:41

Up to you, my grimdark meter already full from that draft alone.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 08:46

Both of them aren't grimdark

One's more on the closeness of friend's while the others based on the hardships of being a parent to a vigilante.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 08:48

Once again, both of them are acceptable. As long as there's no more Machiavellian schemes or deep philosophical combat ongoing that will burn my brain.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 08:53

Oh no, philosophical combat's over. Now that his parent's know, there's no point in whining about it.

Side note - On a more lighthearted note, how would Laura imitating Rin be like?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 08:57

1. Violent
2. Stubborn
3. Selfish
4. Prideful
5. = Deficit, since all of them are huge turn off. No profit there.

Several chapter in the crossover will be huge bashfest for Ling, especially from Dan, who allow himself to be whipped THEN pull a Hannibal as his prediction came true.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 08:58

I mean what would she focus on? When she tries to copy Houki, she obsesses over Kendo, Tsundere, and ponytails.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:03

Hmm, I dunno. Lesse...

> Twintail
> Flat chest (oh wait)
> Cooking
> Possessiveness

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:07

What about Yandere eyes

Side note - For reversal: Should I make Chifuyu's IS Byaku-shiki or a sniper/knife fighter combo? Ichika uses dual blades

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:08

Yes, just use ST skillset if you wish

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:12

What about Kanzashi's? I wonder if I should have her keep Uchigane Nashiki or give her byaku-shiki.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:13

If it suit her why not.

The crossover has both avoid Byaku because it's just that bad and Ichika feel offended by the reversal doctrine (cue Chifuyu chugging out beer). Though, at least the parts can be cannibalized.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:16

Golem fight will be different also. Chifuyu's a better natural pilot, so I need a longer fight scene.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:18

Eh? If she's better pilot, the fight will be shorter amirite?

In my version, because Ichika thrashed ShenLong silly, Ling can't contribute anything, and Ichika has to protect her. Cue spotlight takeover by the sidekicks and curbstomp battle...

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:23

I meant because she doesn't get Ichika's energy absorber shield. She needs to rely on skill alone

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:27

.... you do realize that he doesn't even have a shield to begin with right?

Seems like he forget about RB more often than not (or rather, it's hard to activate), and Barrier Void ability diminish what's left from Byaku's fragile defense. This is why Golem doing it's no nonsense assault on Ichika.

With Yukihira active, Ichika's defense is not much better than piece of paper if face of beam weapon.

Though you could argue that Chifuyu lack OHK weapon as well

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:28

He used Rin's cannon to power his sword and propel him forward to the golem, right?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-28, 09:32

Yes, but it's air pressure canon, not energy weapon, and he use Ignition boost to counter the destructive effect.

(the gas released by the booster and the cannon cancelling each other, but result in net thrust which is the reason Ichika can fly so fast)

He still use his internal battery to power Yukihira, and RB active just long enough to protect him from rapid beam cannon... before golem sucker punch him (RB is useless against kinetic impact). In the next scene where Houki done her stupid action, RB is no longer active and Ichika took a brief exposure to golem weapon as he finished it.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-28, 09:34

Well, I have to change that since she uses a sniper rifle

2012-08-28, 08:36	Link #36141
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Hmm, okay then. My fault. It's actually less graphic than Jak's. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 08:40	Link #36142
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Yeah, because I don't believe in description gorn:/ I also hate writing action scenes, as you can tell by the crappy action. Side note - For the next draft, should it to be about Kanzashi or more ship tease? __________________

2012-08-28, 08:41	Link #36143
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Up to you, my grimdark meter already full from that draft alone. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 08:46	Link #36144
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Both of them aren't grimdark One's more on the closeness of friend's while the others based on the hardships of being a parent to a vigilante. __________________

2012-08-28, 08:48	Link #36145
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Once again, both of them are acceptable. As long as there's no more Machiavellian schemes or deep philosophical combat ongoing that will burn my brain. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 08:53	Link #36146
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Oh no, philosophical combat's over. Now that his parent's know, there's no point in whining about it. Side note - On a more lighthearted note, how would Laura imitating Rin be like? __________________

2012-08-28, 08:57	Link #36147
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	1. Violent 2. Stubborn 3. Selfish 4. Prideful 5. = Deficit, since all of them are huge turn off. No profit there. Several chapter in the crossover will be huge bashfest for Ling, especially from Dan, who allow himself to be whipped THEN pull a Hannibal as his prediction came true. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 08:58	Link #36148
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I mean what would she focus on? When she tries to copy Houki, she obsesses over Kendo, Tsundere, and ponytails. __________________

2012-08-28, 09:03	Link #36149
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Hmm, I dunno. Lesse... > Twintail > Flat chest (oh wait) > Cooking > Possessiveness __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:07	Link #36150
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What about Yandere eyes Side note - For reversal: Should I make Chifuyu's IS Byaku-shiki or a sniper/knife fighter combo? Ichika uses dual blades __________________

2012-08-28, 09:08	Link #36151
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Yes, just use ST skillset if you wish __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:12	Link #36152
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What about Kanzashi's? I wonder if I should have her keep Uchigane Nashiki or give her byaku-shiki. __________________

2012-08-28, 09:13	Link #36153
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	If it suit her why not. The crossover has both avoid Byaku because it's just that bad and Ichika feel offended by the reversal doctrine (cue Chifuyu chugging out beer). Though, at least the parts can be cannibalized. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:16	Link #36154
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Golem fight will be different also. Chifuyu's a better natural pilot, so I need a longer fight scene. __________________

2012-08-28, 09:18	Link #36155
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Eh? If she's better pilot, the fight will be shorter amirite? In my version, because Ichika thrashed ShenLong silly, Ling can't contribute anything, and Ichika has to protect her. Cue spotlight takeover by the sidekicks and curbstomp battle... __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:23	Link #36156
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I meant because she doesn't get Ichika's energy absorber shield. She needs to rely on skill alone __________________

2012-08-28, 09:27	Link #36157
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	.... you do realize that he doesn't even have a shield to begin with right? Seems like he forget about RB more often than not (or rather, it's hard to activate), and Barrier Void ability diminish what's left from Byaku's fragile defense. This is why Golem doing it's no nonsense assault on Ichika. With Yukihira active, Ichika's defense is not much better than piece of paper if face of beam weapon. Though you could argue that Chifuyu lack OHK weapon as well __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:28	Link #36158
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	He used Rin's cannon to power his sword and propel him forward to the golem, right? __________________

2012-08-28, 09:32	Link #36159
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Yes, but it's air pressure canon, not energy weapon, and he use Ignition boost to counter the destructive effect. (the gas released by the booster and the cannon cancelling each other, but result in net thrust which is the reason Ichika can fly so fast) He still use his internal battery to power Yukihira, and RB active just long enough to protect him from rapid beam cannon... before golem sucker punch him (RB is useless against kinetic impact). In the next scene where Houki done her stupid action, RB is no longer active and Ichika took a brief exposure to golem weapon as he finished it. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-28, 09:34	Link #36160
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Well, I have to change that since she uses a sniper rifle __________________