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Old 2012-08-28, 08:36   Link #36141
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Hmm, okay then. My fault.

It's actually less graphic than Jak's.
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:40   Link #36142
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Yeah, because I don't believe in description gorn:/ I also hate writing action scenes, as you can tell by the crappy action.

Side note - For the next draft, should it to be about Kanzashi or more ship tease?
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:41   Link #36143
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Up to you, my grimdark meter already full from that draft alone.
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:46   Link #36144
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Both of them aren't grimdark One's more on the closeness of friend's while the others based on the hardships of being a parent to a vigilante.
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:48   Link #36145
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Once again, both of them are acceptable. As long as there's no more Machiavellian schemes or deep philosophical combat ongoing that will burn my brain.
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:53   Link #36146
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Oh no, philosophical combat's over. Now that his parent's know, there's no point in whining about it.

Side note - On a more lighthearted note, how would Laura imitating Rin be like?
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:57   Link #36147
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1. Violent
2. Stubborn
3. Selfish
4. Prideful
5. = Deficit, since all of them are huge turn off. No profit there.

Several chapter in the crossover will be huge bashfest for Ling, especially from Dan, who allow himself to be whipped THEN pull a Hannibal as his prediction came true.
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Old 2012-08-28, 08:58   Link #36148
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I mean what would she focus on? When she tries to copy Houki, she obsesses over Kendo, Tsundere, and ponytails.
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:03   Link #36149
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Hmm, I dunno. Lesse...

> Twintail
> Flat chest (oh wait)
> Cooking
> Possessiveness
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:07   Link #36150
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What about Yandere eyes

Side note - For reversal: Should I make Chifuyu's IS Byaku-shiki or a sniper/knife fighter combo? Ichika uses dual blades
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:08   Link #36151
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Yes, just use ST skillset if you wish
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:12   Link #36152
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What about Kanzashi's? I wonder if I should have her keep Uchigane Nashiki or give her byaku-shiki.
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:13   Link #36153
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If it suit her why not.

The crossover has both avoid Byaku because it's just that bad and Ichika feel offended by the reversal doctrine (cue Chifuyu chugging out beer). Though, at least the parts can be cannibalized.
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:16   Link #36154
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Golem fight will be different also. Chifuyu's a better natural pilot, so I need a longer fight scene.
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:18   Link #36155
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Eh? If she's better pilot, the fight will be shorter amirite?

In my version, because Ichika thrashed ShenLong silly, Ling can't contribute anything, and Ichika has to protect her. Cue spotlight takeover by the sidekicks and curbstomp battle...
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:23   Link #36156
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I meant because she doesn't get Ichika's energy absorber shield. She needs to rely on skill alone
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:27   Link #36157
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.... you do realize that he doesn't even have a shield to begin with right?

Seems like he forget about RB more often than not (or rather, it's hard to activate), and Barrier Void ability diminish what's left from Byaku's fragile defense. This is why Golem doing it's no nonsense assault on Ichika.

With Yukihira active, Ichika's defense is not much better than piece of paper if face of beam weapon.

Though you could argue that Chifuyu lack OHK weapon as well
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:28   Link #36158
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He used Rin's cannon to power his sword and propel him forward to the golem, right?
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:32   Link #36159
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Yes, but it's air pressure canon, not energy weapon, and he use Ignition boost to counter the destructive effect.

(the gas released by the booster and the cannon cancelling each other, but result in net thrust which is the reason Ichika can fly so fast)

He still use his internal battery to power Yukihira, and RB active just long enough to protect him from rapid beam cannon... before golem sucker punch him (RB is useless against kinetic impact). In the next scene where Houki done her stupid action, RB is no longer active and Ichika took a brief exposure to golem weapon as he finished it.
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Old 2012-08-28, 09:34   Link #36160
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Well, I have to change that since she uses a sniper rifle
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