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Old 2012-09-09, 03:39   Link #36681
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Senpai - Well, it's new, I'll say that much.

Anyway, finally got a draft out.
Spoiler:
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:17   Link #36682
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Exactly as I suggested, and then some
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:18   Link #36683
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Would it be funny when the Emergency/Last Resort weapon has both implications of the word to it?
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:25   Link #36684
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Uh.....what?

@ Senpai - Now I need to write how to deal with a megalomaniac idol singer:/
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:28   Link #36685
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No deal, please ask elsewhere.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:32   Link #36686
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Wasn't planning to ask Anyway, I need advice: How does one do a proper fight scene?
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:38   Link #36687
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I'm not really sure if I can help you on that.

To be honest, I'm not even sure if I'm doing the fight scenes right for Project Silverback.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:40   Link #36688
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If it's mecha fight, the best thing is gun porn. Every single detailed description of machine operation and design is important, and the words used are not something beautiful, but something more technical and stiff. Technobabble optional.

if it's living creature fighting, then you can choose between brutality or elegance, or a mix of both. The former is more honest but not without it's exaggeration, the later require more wordplay and eloquence. You have tendency to the former, and I see you already done it well without going for actual gorn.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:43   Link #36689
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If it's mecha fight, the best thing is gun porn. Every single detailed description of machine operation and design is important, and the words used are not something beautiful, but something more technical and stiff. Technobabble optional.

if it's living creature fighting, then you can choose between brutality or elegance, or a mix of both. The former is more honest but not without it's exaggeration, the later require more wordplay and eloquence. You have tendency to the former, and I see you already done it well without going for actual gorn.
Even with Chapter 6? And 7?
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:45   Link #36690
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Actually, it was for Eras, you went straight for gorn but not too far with it, it's still within Shonen territory.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:45   Link #36691
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I don't like making fight scenes eloquent:x Anyway, I mostly need tips for acrobatic combat
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:47   Link #36692
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The weapon is called an emergency weapon because you use it when you run out of everything else. At least that's the initial idea they have of it due to its tiny size and really lame basic function. They don't know that it's also your emergency weapon during times when you know absolutely everything has to die as its second function.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:50   Link #36693
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But what about how it's being described?

It's terrible, isn't it?
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:53   Link #36694
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Not my forte, but I'll try.

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Nope, don't think so.
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:54   Link #36695
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Like the Machete in Far Cry 2. The official description is "Not a stealth weapon, not a melee weapon, just an emergency weapon".
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:56   Link #36696
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An Academy scene(finally?):
Spoiler for Wall:
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Old 2012-09-09, 04:57   Link #36697
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Well, if you say so.

And you know the "routine" after reading my chapters, right?

There you are, StratoSpear.

I saw that clip. Tell you the truth I actually watched the whole campaign of that game on YouTube. And another thing; since watching the campaign, I got an idea of how one of the Silverbacks functions it weapons.
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Old 2012-09-09, 05:02   Link #36698
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It was kind of like the Executor from Kurogane no Linebarrel. Variable output that ranges from thin beam saber/peashooter to Raisersword/Wingzero buster cannon.

O.o
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Old 2012-09-09, 05:06   Link #36699
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Glad to be of help

Was hoping for comments as to whether it would work having such scene take place where you replace:
- Grimlock with Tsurugi(In the Minerva)
- Insecticons with drones
- Snarl with Inami
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Old 2012-09-09, 05:09   Link #36700
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Yeah, and truth be told; I actually watched the whole campaign of Transformers: Fall of Cybertron long before you posted that clip here.

But yeah, with how you made Tsurugi...

Oh snap...
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