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Old 2012-09-13, 08:23   Link #36901
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=))

as varied a response as I liked.

I followed the lyrics and I found a broken hero
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Old 2012-09-13, 08:27   Link #36902
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@Eras

And I stand corrected...again o.o"
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Old 2012-09-13, 08:47   Link #36903
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As I recall, she was the worst injured among them all

@ Demi - Look at "no more heroes" if you want an Anti-hero
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Old 2012-09-13, 18:42   Link #36904
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Not anti-hero. Most anti-heroes are spiteful. This broken hero I envision is more like he's lost the will to be a hero and becomes sort of... a lamer.

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Old 2012-09-13, 23:15   Link #36905
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Old 2012-09-14, 03:48   Link #36906
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Another writer's dilemma... While we tend to make it such that in-story characters don't know where the villian's lair is, should I attempt to keep the location of the villain's base a secret from the readers as well?
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Old 2012-09-14, 03:52   Link #36907
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Another writer's dilemma... While we tend to make it such that in-story characters don't know where the villian's lair is, should I attempt to keep the location of the villain's base a secret from the readers as well?
I'm keeping it "unknown" for mine because I don't know where 'their' base is either.
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:13   Link #36908
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I have no problem with it. I write things like "He was bleeding heavily, vision blurring and senses numbing. It felt just like before." without bothering to say what "before" was.
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:18   Link #36909
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So you're re-doing What Lies in Shadows?
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:28   Link #36910
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Focusing on other fics first. Might make a Kingdom Hearts or a Persona 3 fanfic soon.
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:31   Link #36911
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Don't put too much on your plate man...

I'm just about a third to halfway done with Chapter 8 on mine. Because of the latest chapters (5-7), Project Silverback will have more chapters than I originally planned.
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:45   Link #36912
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Eh, it's fine. I write for fun. If people wanna bitch about me writing too much, then I guess they should just stop reading. Fanfic writing isn't a job.
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Old 2012-09-14, 04:51   Link #36913
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Fanfic writing isn't a job.
This.

Also, looking through Gundam Wiki helps alot with unit designs and weapon loadouts. Which also means more ideas for me to sketch out
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Old 2012-09-14, 05:05   Link #36914
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Alright, my last bit here for Chapter 8...

Spoiler for Ishiyama High.:


Any thoughts?
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Old 2012-09-14, 05:20   Link #36915
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Still wondering what random IS with missiles will attack a high school all of a sudden ._."

Some suspense, not bad. Though it does look like the action's started even before the attack plan comes into effect.
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Old 2012-09-14, 05:36   Link #36916
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@ Jak - Same as Stratos.
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Old 2012-09-14, 06:56   Link #36917
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Villian scene, I'll stick to "Unknown Base" for now:

Spoiler for Villian:


Foreshadowing the crap out of things that it's pretty obvious to fellow posters here.
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Old 2012-09-14, 07:05   Link #36918
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@ Stratos - Why don't you just write it without the "Underground Base" thing written on top? It really wouldn't make much of a difference.
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Old 2012-09-14, 07:28   Link #36919
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I think cuz it's supposed to be a scene break :/
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Old 2012-09-14, 07:28   Link #36920
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What Demi said.
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