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Old 2013-01-21, 07:08   Link #39841
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I'll help of course Anyway, when can I expect the draft?

Well, whatever I was hoping the shirt's sleeves would be longer, but that's just anal complains. Thank you for all the help!
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Old 2013-01-21, 07:33   Link #39842
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You can start with this

Spoiler for Test draft 03:


Credit: Demino Hellsin for the Chifuyu gag

And this

Spoiler for Test Draft 04:


You have all the time you need, I never actually put a deadline.
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Old 2013-01-21, 07:34   Link #39843
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Should be finished soon.
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Old 2013-01-21, 08:08   Link #39844
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Would it seem more interesting if Aries gains the other swords by winning them?
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Old 2013-01-21, 08:11   Link #39845
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Super robot: yes

Real robot: NO

Pick your genre.
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Old 2013-01-21, 08:43   Link #39846
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Then he gets them one by one as a test subject it is
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Old 2013-01-21, 09:04   Link #39847
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After months of isolation and brainstorming other fanfics....

I think I finally had the inspiration to start writing IS fanfic... A new story(sorry...)


For now:

Upgrade: (Combining some ideas including Extreme Shift) (Inspired by Vividred Operation)
A system which allow IS to perform beyond its maximum capacity. Originally created as a dangerous war-tech stealing device (taking over enemies' machines), now retooled as IS powering-up device.

Capable of performing Overdrive (an powerful attack with the IS performing at 500% of normal capability)

The problem is: the IS frame can't take that much power, resulting in reduced performance and disabling of equalizer after use.

Currently Black Box technology due to original Creator committed suicide due to depression.
The current Creator only build a system (the IS powering part) around the Black Box.

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Raphael Revised (probably need a better name):
Classified as Generation 2x.
>To bluntly put it: It is just a Generation 2 Raphael Custom equipped with Generation 3 Equalizers.
> Capable of Bursting (Burst Speed and power for a short period of time)
>The problem is slow charging time (think of it as Cool-down time for spell) but it managed to make up the weakness by retaining some Generation 2 weapons.

>Notable feature: 3rd Generation IS Shield pierce: Gray Scale Mk3.
-Long range Shield Piercing (aka Barrier Void) capability with almost nothing (short of another IS) capable of blocking the attack due to piercing capability...
-One serious problem though, is the LONG charging time. However, under the hand of skilled IS pilot, it can be used as an End-game trump card.
Edit: Forgot to mention: The Equalized store energy from Main core...which means that even if the IS is low on energy, Gray Scale mk3 still can be used.

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Blue Tear Maelstrom.
Work in Progress.
Equally as powerful as 4th Gen IS but thematically opposed Akatsubaki.
> Blue vs Red
> Highly Specialized vs All-rounder.
> As scary as its name suggested.
> Utilized Data from Blue Tear's battle with both Silent Zephyr and Sliver Gospel.
Edit: New modified frame using the excuse of Blue Tears being Test-Bed IS to use these new technology (technically stolen from the two fore-mentioned ISes)
Edit: probably make Britain look kind of bad-ass (as in they already expect that Silent Zephyr would attack Blue Tears one day....hence the data capturing device)
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Old 2013-01-21, 09:08   Link #39848
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Old 2013-01-21, 09:13   Link #39849
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Spoiler for CSI Academy:


And here the Academy suspects that the Minerva is an autonomous robot.
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Old 2013-01-21, 09:31   Link #39850
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Gatrandis babel ziggurat, edenal.
Emustrolronzen fine el belvaris i.
Gatrandis babel ziggurat, edenal.
Emustrolronzen fine el zizzl

- Valkyrie's Swan Song (a.k.a. Sacrificial Hymn)

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Old 2013-01-21, 09:53   Link #39851
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I'll do the rest tomorrow. Also, I didn't do much, sorry.
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Old 2013-01-21, 09:55   Link #39852
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Not really. I got an idea how to write the subsequent draft at least, thanks to this.
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Old 2013-01-21, 10:00   Link #39853
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Good luck. Cold's still killing me.
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Old 2013-01-21, 21:19   Link #39854
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I seem to hit a wall inwriting whenever I finish a chapter. So please bear with my over conceptualizing.

4th blade is made from a metal experiment that gave it unique properties of absorbing energy, both kinetic and ambient. This causes the metal to barely flinch on impact and generate an extreme temperature of less than 100K. The metal is extremely hard, registering itself to be at least 10 times harder than diamond. However it is extremely brittle. The metal has very little flexibility and malleability to speak of. It also has a higher than normal density for a metal due to its closed molecular structure.
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Old 2013-01-21, 21:33   Link #39855
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4th blade is made from a metal experiment that gave it unique properties of absorbing energy, both kinetic and ambient. This causes the metal to barely flinch on impact and generate an extreme temperature of less than 100K.
.... so it generate ice on impact?

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The metal is extremely hard, registering itself to be at least 10 times harder than diamond. However it is extremely brittle. The metal has very little flexibility and malleability to speak of. It also has a higher than normal density for a metal due to its closed molecular structure.
This fly over my head really fast.

As far as I knew (please correct if I'm wrong) there's no way high density material can be brittle. Diamonds are hard and brittle because it's light, homogenous molecular structure right?
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Old 2013-01-21, 21:55   Link #39856
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Density implies numberr of atoms in a limited volume. Or mass in a limited volume. Diamons are equally spaced, fairly far and of a light material in pure carbon. What makes diamonds so strong is their uniform lattice like bonds which are themselves strong.

The 4th metal is funky as it doesn't have this structure or any other structure. In fact, you can even say that the chemical bonds that hold them together are like a thin coat of glue. Looking at their structure is like looking at a giant atom unless you know where the crevices are.

Never really covered crystal structures too much but that's as far as I know.

EDIT: I guess it could. But for the most part it just sucks in most of energy based attacks. It also comes in handy to calm down oscillinium metal.
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Old 2013-01-21, 21:56   Link #39857
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@ Senpai - I'll beta the next part later. Right now I have classes,
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Old 2013-01-21, 22:10   Link #39858
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Density implies numberr of atoms in a limited volume. Or mass in a limited volume. Diamons are equally spaced, fairly far and of a light material in pure carbon. What makes diamonds so strong is their uniform lattice like bonds which are themselves strong.

The 4th metal is funky as it doesn't have this structure or any other structure. In fact, you can even say that the chemical bonds that hold them together are like a thin coat of glue. Looking at their structure is like looking at a giant atom unless you know where the crevices are.

Never really covered crystal structures too much but that's as far as I know.

EDIT: I guess it could. But for the most part it just sucks in most of energy based attacks. It also comes in handy to calm down oscillinium metal.


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@ Senpai - I'll beta the next part later. Right now I have classes,
Sure thing, as I said, do it when you're not busy with your own matter.
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Old 2013-01-21, 22:18   Link #39859
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@Demi

Just a small question. Does the plot demand for such an extremely hard sword?
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Old 2013-01-21, 22:22   Link #39860
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^ yeah, it's to seal the OTHER sword
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