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Old 2013-05-02, 07:59   Link #42501
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I have to salute the guy. Sounds like he's suffering.
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:04   Link #42502
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Brainstorming....
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The story is actually a simple: OC in IS-verse....the self-fulfillment is the machine. Other than that, life as a Janitor is not that great (considering Ichika's Harem tend to use IS in their minor conflict).
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:05   Link #42503
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Obligatory self-rant:

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Old 2013-05-02, 08:11   Link #42504
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Weird question. Why did Izuru make Setsura instead of turning Yukihira into full fold-out?

I'm pretty sure the latter would be more rule of cool.
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:14   Link #42505
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CC's action cause OC's pain and suffering.

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About not writing full fanfic with Canon characters only.....

Meh. Doesn't find the girls interesting enough to write story about th....

Err....
Spoiler for Off Topic:
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:21   Link #42506
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I have to salute the guy. Sounds like he's suffering.
Yes he is, what made me feel glad is he's blunt without being an ass about it.

This kind of review is what I need

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(If only there's no sig limit...)

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Weird question. Why did Izuru make Setsura instead of turning Yukihira into full fold-out?

I'm pretty sure the latter would be more rule of cool.
To be honest both unit are semi-fold out, they have preset form, rather than freely evolve.
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:23   Link #42507
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I have an alternate idea of Setsura in my head. But it's hilarious as hell

Yukihira gets an Oogata and Oozutsu mode
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:31   Link #42508
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CC's action cause OC's pain and suffering.


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About not writing full fanfic with Canon characters only.....

Meh. Doesn't find the girls interesting enough to write story about th....

Err....
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Twilight Hater say Hi
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:41   Link #42509
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Considering the amount of damages which Rin would cause just by throwing her weapon at Ichika.

Yea... if you are working as a repair guy, you would scream.

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Err... nothing of that sort. Koyomi is not what she appear to be.
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Old 2013-05-02, 08:49   Link #42510
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Err... nothing of that sort. Koyomi is not what she appear to be.
It's a joke, brother.

Belle IS the epitome of shoujo heroine... the worst, shallow kind of mary sue.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:09   Link #42511
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I still can't think of ways to woo older women.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:12   Link #42512
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Be innocent and straightforward

Without looking dumb in the process
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:15   Link #42513
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I think what cake eater really needs now is to start getting the women into situations where they might start seeing Ichika as a man

and not a boy.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:40   Link #42514
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Character development can't be forced, unless you show everything by chronology. That is, one thing happen at a time and not necessarily linked constantly.

For example:
Part 1: Harem appear
Part 2: Spotlight on Chifuyu, etc
Part 3: Scene somewhere (ISRI) with Chifuyu and Maya
Part 4: Focus on Tabane's interaction with Ichika

This allow fast pacing because it only show the condensed version of a story, not every minute and detail. Per chapter word count is low, there's lots of chapter anyway.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:46   Link #42515
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I don't know why but I'm just not comfortble with unveiling ISRI for some reason. Any diagnosis dok?

Mmm how practical is it if the setsura claw hs fingers that cn separte from the claws. But don't necessitate the claws to fold into storage?
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:47   Link #42516
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You really want to get that one (Cake Eater) over and done with, eh... lol

Be A Man:

- Protective, Decisive, Presence, Loyalty, Honor - easiest way for a man to showcase all of these is in a battle - which is why quite a few guys fight so much. >.> Go figure...

'Go to adventure/war, get achievements, prove your worth, come back and marry the girl and life happily ever after' - this is a guy's fairy tail right here.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:53   Link #42517
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I don't know why but I'm just not comfortble with unveiling ISRI for some reason. Any diagnosis dok?
Maybe you're paranoid about the OC

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Mmm how practical is it if the setsura claw hs fingers that cn separte from the claws. But don't necessitate the claws to fold into storage?
Like wolverine claw? No use, because if you want to use the hand the claw had to go somewhere.

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You really want to get that one (Cake Eater) over and done with, eh... lol

Be A Man:

- Protective, Decisive, Presence, Loyalty, Honor - easiest way for a man to showcase all of these is in a battle - which is why quite a few guys fight so much. >.> Go figure...

'Go to adventure/war, get achievements, prove your worth, come back and marry the girl and life happily ever after' - this is a guy's fairy tale right here.
Truth

Why else there's so many, MANY male OC that can curbstomp Cecilia and/or Rin?

Fun thing, it's easy to deconstruct this too.
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Old 2013-05-02, 09:58   Link #42518
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Yeah... Maybe it's Erine. I already envisioned her as a bitchier Kokonoe with a little astrid too so I'm pretty sure I have in idea of how she should act and speak. The dynamic has been planned out too. She's basically Chifuyu's own Chifuyu

Nah, the claws are attatched to manipulator fingers. But the fingers can detach from the claws and flex freely while the claws are locked into that angle they are left at.

Ichika is the "normal" guy. I suppose I'm just not sure the charm of being the perfect house husband is a good thing. Or having integrity and odd idiosyncrasies which border on creepy.

Also, I really do want cake eater 3 done. I don't know why but it's nagging me. Even when I want to put it on the backburner it's chiseling at my brain with a jackhammer.made from admantium.
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Old 2013-05-02, 10:25   Link #42519
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Of course, being 'strong' is relative. Being strong in body but weak in mind is just as bad. It's confidence - confidence in one's self and abilities. You are confident because you understand what your limits are (because you've pushed them before). Some girls are attracted to 'weaker' guys but only in the fact that they function more like a pet than a person.

Ichika doesn't have a lot of confidence in his IS yet. Sure, he knows it, but the experience with it isn't there. Most people know what a gun looks like and can figure out how to use it from a picture. You can read all the stats on it you want but once you get it in your hand, it's just statistics. Then you can feel the weight of it, the weight of the bullets, the magazine, the recoil, the way your body moves to adjust as you move it around. All of these things build confidence/experience.
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Old 2013-05-02, 10:31   Link #42520
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Is 130 thousand yen in electric bill for a single month considered exorbitant?

Tabane: behold!

Ichika: ?!?! What have you been doing here Tabane? Is that a ray gun firing at a box? And what is that smell? It reeks here!

Tbane: hmhmhm, that is no raygun Ikkun. That is my AGECELERATOR!

Ichika: your what?

Tabane: it's a special machine that shoots a localized energy field that changes timeflow.

Ichika: so you made a gun that can make people old?

Tabane: tut tut. Where is your imagination ikkun? The agecelerator can work on more than just people. Imagine plnts! We could solve world famine!

Ichika: but if you make them grow too fast without proper care then wouldn't that just make them die faster?

Tabane:... Then how about this? This box is filled with decaying organic matter. Like this we can use the agecelerator to make more fossil fuels without waiting hundreds of millions of years!

Ichika: I suppose that is impressive. So how long have you been keeping at it.

tabane: 3 months of continuous time bombardment.

Ichika: so you shoot it from morning to night.

Tabane: no, I shoot it from morning through the night. I haven't shut this baby off since I first activated it.

Ichika:... How much time would you say has elapsed inside the warped time?

Tabane: *shrug* not sure. Give or take maybe 5 million years? We need another 10 to make even half of it actual petrol.

Ichika: so let me get this straight. You're making a liter an half of oil *points to box*, by expending electricity non-stop for 3 months?

Tabane: it might take the whole year actually.

Ichika:... Tabane. Our electric bill has been over 100 thousand yen for the past 3 month.

Tabane:...

Ichika: do you have anything to say for yourself?

Tabane: I... Uh... Am a genius?

Ichika: I take it those will be your last.

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