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Old 2013-05-02, 22:02   Link #42541
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Watered down version, probably.

There's always something or two hidden when military talk openly about an incident.
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:05   Link #42542
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Techincally still powered armor.

Hmmm imagining someone who knows nothing about IS beyond what was taught in history. Get out of my head Zoids! XD
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:06   Link #42543
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When do you guys plan to update your stories?
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:07   Link #42544
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@ Demi
Yeah, sort of.

Most of the cadet only knew a little more, as they rise in age and rank they knew more and more.

@ Eras
Of course there's a plan

The problem is WHEN to execute it
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:09   Link #42545
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After I clean out my head. Finish the necessary schoolwork and finally get writing.

I am working on comedy after all
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:14   Link #42546
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Almost finished with chapter 14, but you'd probably hard to work hard to fix it to usual standard. It's...

I couldn't even describe it.
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:15   Link #42547
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Almost finished with chapter 14, but you'd probably hard to work hard to fix it to usual standard. It's...

I couldn't even describe it.
Not enough words? Writer block?

In terms of power armour, I was thinking about Fallout lol.
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:24   Link #42548
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Lack of words, though it's supposed to be a filler of sort, it's just that my brain stopped when trying to add more exposition and explanation.

Fallout armor is cool, but I need to emphasize 'abnormal' in badass abnormal. Since Chifuyu use snake suit made of carbon nanotube, I figure giving Ichika a more sensible but still down to earth design would be good, instead of alternative machine that serves nothing but embellishment.
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:30   Link #42549
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Just curious: How many words on average o=do you guys put in a chapter?
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:33   Link #42550
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Depends on which fic

ST: 6000-9000 words (Chapter 12 is frankly abnormal)
TLR Stratos: 3000-6000 words
AC Xover: 5000-7000 words
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Old 2013-05-02, 22:41   Link #42551
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Hmm, problematic: I've been making 10k. Too much.
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Old 2013-05-02, 23:02   Link #42552
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Hmm, problematic: I've been making 10k. Too much.
You guys are really something, I would be satisfied with 5000 words MAX.
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Old 2013-05-02, 23:07   Link #42553
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Agreed. I was content with 5k, but my writing style changed so every line is 3-4 sentences on average.
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Old 2013-05-02, 23:38   Link #42554
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You guys are really something, I would be satisfied with 5000 words MAX.
Well, if it's dialogue heavy then... I mean, one sentence can contain what? Ten words, mostly.

Adding more elaboration? Anywhere from 5-20 extra words. This take less than ten second in real time in anime terms, or one page in most manga.

This is what happened with chapter 14, it's 4000 word finished, but after fixing, no doubt it'll be at 6000 words at least.

Record holder: ST chapter 12 is more than 11.000 words, SANS author notes which add like, 1.500
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Old 2013-05-03, 00:31   Link #42555
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Had a chapter that had about 14,307 >.> Way too much typing.
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Old 2013-05-03, 01:04   Link #42556
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You haven't SEEN some Harry potter or Naruto fic certainly

Clocked at 60-70 chapter with 10.000 per chapter.... ON AVERAGE.
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Old 2013-05-03, 01:15   Link #42557
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I once did a single chapter story with 20.000 aprox words on it. The prologue of IG has 5000+ words, and that's because i wanted to keep it short. Currently the first chapter of IG has almost 12.000 words, and is not even complete yet.
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Old 2013-05-03, 01:21   Link #42558
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Considering it's a prologue, better cut it off.

Besides, it would be jarring if the next chapter and beyond is noticeably smaller.
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Old 2013-05-03, 01:22   Link #42559
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Oh, I've read fics like those: I meant that its too much typing for an amateur fanficcer like me.
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Old 2013-05-03, 01:25   Link #42560
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And hard for readers to digest

Average reader, assuming decent attention, have something like 200 words per minute of reading speed. More attentive reader would have half that speed or even less.
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