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Old 2013-05-18, 04:32   Link #43481
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No shit that's scary as hell

Ichika must've balls of ormiridium
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:35   Link #43482
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The scariest thing about Yandere is how they talk as they do what they do. So I need a sample.

Hmm... should I bump up cake eater's rating due to swearing?
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:35   Link #43483
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Actually, Ichika's sanity visibly degrades the longer the story goes :/ He's happy in the first instance, paranoid in the next, and this chapter shows him going twitchy. Of course, this is all played for laughs. Charlotte's chapter (Sweet girl who's gentle) will help, though it comes after Rin's.

And then there's the Tatenashi chapter

@ Demi - She talks in a sweet tone all throughout the chapter. "Why are you running away, Ichika? I just want to show you how much I love you". Said by Laura while she's chopping up his door with an axe and humming to herself.
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:44   Link #43484
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Hmmm

"Ne ne... when we get married, I want the ceremony to be small. Maybe just you, me, the priest and that lecherous friend of yours as the witness. No, I don't want anyone else to be there. Not any of the other girls, not my squad, not even instructor. You know why? I want you to only look at me? Yes. I'd look beautiful in a wedding dress right? fufufu... I won't stand for it if you look at any other girl at that time. I might just have to *breaks through door* pu- nish- you~. *Stabs near Ichika* ne ne. Do you want a big family? do you want a small family? After we get married I want a house on a hill. I want to see mountains and the ocean. I want to have a dog and kids. Lots and lots of kids. Doesn't that sound nice? Hmm? Doesn't it? doesn't it? Hmmhmm, I knew you'd say yes. But I hope our children won't love you too much. For their sake, yes. For their sake. hmhmhmhm."
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:49   Link #43485
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Just like that Although I'm debating whether to play creepy hymn music in the chapter in order to further set the mood.

That and Laura's just pretending to be a yandere. When Ichika faints and (unsurprisingly) soils himself, she considers it mission failed and leaves him alone.
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:50   Link #43486
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Must.... resist... urge... running....

*OPERATION HALT - COMMENCING REBOOT - SECTOR A65 TO D99*

Must be popular, this fic, will be.
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:52   Link #43487
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Uh yeah, so back to my question. Erine is a swearing machine. Should I bump cake eater to M?
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:54   Link #43488
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Ask jak, and you shall receive the answer

Language unrelated, rating is, mostly

Addendum, here is: swear word severity, exist they are. Use it wisely.
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:57   Link #43489
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Not really. As long as not everyone in the fic turns into a swear machine, then its fine. I casually curse in my authors notes and I get no flak.
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Old 2013-05-18, 04:59   Link #43490
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Like I said, C word, example. Shall not use it, you are

Addendum, second one, that is: seek the Japanese, the curse equivalent, that is, translated well.
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:00   Link #43491
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Uh yeah, so back to my question. Erine is a swearing machine. Should I bump cake eater to M?
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Ask jak, and you shall receive the answer

Language unrelated, rating is, mostly

Addendum, here is: swear word severity, exist they are. Use it wisely.
Just make sure the swearing's in the most appropriate situations...
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:01   Link #43492
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erine speaking

Spoiler for language:
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:03   Link #43493
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Shall not call that aloof, you are.

Subtle, she is not? For that, blood boiling, eternally.
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:04   Link #43494
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well she's mostly aloof to their problems. But... imagine having to answer for your subordinates crimes. Get interrogated for 3 hours on their stunts. Have to cover PR for them. And you're still behind schedule on your research reports.

But yeah, when she rages... she really rages.
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:05   Link #43495
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Yeah, the c word is sensitive. Things like 'Shit, fuck, and other curses' are fine.
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:07   Link #43496
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Like wise, excrement, not rated it is. Female canine, or illegitimate, conditionally appropriate, should be.
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Old 2013-05-18, 05:14   Link #43497
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Agreed. You can also try medieval cuss words: Courtesan, Half-breed, etc etc.
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Old 2013-05-18, 06:12   Link #43498
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No matter how much I scour the archives, I can't find a story I want to read...
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Old 2013-05-18, 06:13   Link #43499
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Stuff that I do read already finished, hiatus, or dead, the rest... not exactly what I want either.
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Old 2013-05-18, 06:16   Link #43500
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Try reading Shiraniu Amaterasu's story Stronger Ichika, but not absurdly so.

Side note - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lQfIhxLjsA

Watch and see a metal gear mini get pawned by a cyberdog
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