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Old 2013-05-18, 08:47   Link #43541
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Well Everyone was more or less trying to prove each was better than the other. Poking fun, sabotaging each other as pranks. No one really got along. They just did their own thing. Tabane was supposed to be their leader but she didn't bother reigning them in, not like they'd listen anyway. She just gives them parameters and they do what they have to on their end in their specific expertise. Tabane just consolidates all the data in the end. She could do everything they could, but not all at the same time.
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Old 2013-05-18, 08:47   Link #43542
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...this is why I stick to character relationships.

If one tries to explain the world away as they know it, chances are it will be a long, drawn out process that only few can make into a credible story, let along complete the thing.
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Old 2013-05-18, 08:52   Link #43543
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Conservation of Detail indeed.

Also, writing girls, except the dialogue, wasn't as hard as I thought

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~CECILIA POV~


“Well then, what about your partner of choice?”

“Hmm… of course I have the idea, but… I feel kind of bad of doing it too…”

“Why? Just because you approached Houki-san first doesn’t mean you sidelined your other friend”

Ah, yes, Madoka-san wasn’t THAT good with people, putting up icy mask in her first appearance… fufufu, well, it’s not like I’m the friendliest girl around either.

“So who is this second girl of choice?”

“Ah, about that… I though Yuzu-san is…. EEEH?! @_@”

The girl is there, with usual crowd of course. Just as usual, the only sane girl in the circle that is Shizune-san rubbed her temple.

The brown haired girl with long twin tail smiled sheepishly “So, Madoka-san, who is this Yuzu-san you speak off”

“Eeeee-e of course Yuzu-san is Yuzu-san”

I can vouch the last time I saw she’s been this red is when she’s being spoiled by Ichika-san, well that’s a good thing right?

“It’s okay Madoka-san, but are you sure I am worthy? I am nowhere as good as Orimura-kun and others”

“Big fat lie” Shizune-san sneered, oh?

“Hoy, Yuzu-chan is a big liar” whatshername… oh, Nohotoke-san chirped, like usual, I always wonder the practicality of oversized sleeves of her… anyway, I decided to meddle “It’s called self-depreciation, you two”

“Yep, as expected of Cecilia-san” the ever tomboyish Aikawa-san raised her thumb.

“It doesn’t matter anyway, it’s better to put one’s trust to someone close to you, right?” Madoka-san tried with all her might “It must be you”

“… How I could refuse this? Thank you very much, Madoka-san”

And thus, somehow this ended up with a communal hug with Madoka-san at the center, hey, even Shizune-san joined.

“Don’t leave me alone, you!” high pitched voice came from far away.

*POW*

And thus, there goes Lingyin-san, thankfully she’s somewhat lightweight. Ouch! The merry dinner finally ended, mostly because we chat a lot about random things. The part with fashion is exceptionally satisfying.

“Okay then, let’s go and compose our strategy”

Hand to hand, the roommates left the cafeteria, in a sense, I felt somewhat envious.
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Old 2013-05-18, 08:56   Link #43544
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Hmm, would Ichika going out with Shizune be a giant stretch?
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Old 2013-05-18, 08:58   Link #43545
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Sure why not, even by a long stretch, no pairing is impossible.

If anything, it'll be a fourth wall-leaning sporking comedy, being only sane couple and all.
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Old 2013-05-18, 08:59   Link #43546
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I would say Ichika admires Shizune to an extent because he identifies her as reliable. Though that admiration may just be purely of her trait than romantic interest.
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:00   Link #43547
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Well, she's the one who helps him whenever Laura has her 'episodes' - particularly the Yandere one - so they begin to spend a lot of time together:/
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:02   Link #43548
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I like where this going

in mine, everyone is related, EVERYONE has their story tied together.

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Old 2013-05-18, 09:06   Link #43549
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Irony: Laura hoped to get closer to Ichika by copying others, but it was for that same reason that he got closer to Shizune Florence Nightingale effect: She helped Ichika and patched him up, he fell hard for her
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:07   Link #43550
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BRING. IT. ON.

(would this be, ultimately Laura's ending? I hope not, for whatever reason I can't explain)
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:10   Link #43551
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Most likely, yeah After Yandere mode episode, Ichika thinks she went bananas and becomes wary of her. After that she also acts like Tatenashi:/ Tatenashi's attitude plus Laura's forcefullness and body. What's the result?
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:14   Link #43552
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Ever heard of Kodomo no Jikan?
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:15   Link #43553
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Yes...:/ But at least Rin didn't have knives
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:16   Link #43554
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Most likely, yeah


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After Yandere mode episode, Ichika thinks she went bananas and becomes wary of her. After that she also acts like Tatenashi:/ Tatenashi's attitude plus Laura's forcefullness and body. What's the result?
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Ever heard of Kodomo no Jikan?
Ah yes, lolicons, we have dismissed this claim

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Old 2013-05-18, 09:18   Link #43555
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@ Senpai - Why so sad? Its a parody fic, not a serious fic.
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:21   Link #43556
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Nah, it's just my brain on sugar again
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:24   Link #43557
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I could probably make another IKaron draft :/ Any theme suggestions?
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:30   Link #43558
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Hmm....

Maybe Karon dreaming the future? First it's a nightmare, then a sweet dream.
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:33   Link #43559
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How far into the future?
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Old 2013-05-18, 09:34   Link #43560
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Family with preteen kid
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