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Old 2013-05-20, 11:18   Link #43741
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Spoiler for So very bored - my own re-write of the 'at home' scene:
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:22   Link #43742
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intimidation at its finest... then goes to bar and get piss drunk with Yamada
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:23   Link #43743
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"Isn't a man being stronger than woman a story of the past?"

"Orimura-kun. Maybe you can pilot an IS, but that's just overdoing it."

"Ah yes, since males are far weaker now thanks to I.S., they would also be weak inside I.S. too, right? We shall dismiss this claim.... immediately"
Adjusted.

"I'll tell you this right now - you'd do well never underestimate an Orimura in battle."
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:25   Link #43744
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That's in the rewrite, thank you very much.

Made the emperor myth all the more hilarious (and tragic)
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:31   Link #43745
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The fact he's an emperor was funny right from the start.
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:32   Link #43746
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intimidation at its finest... then goes to bar and get piss drunk with Yamada
Spoiler for Continuation...XD:


For Emperor Orimura - Sleepy-tan should be his messenger. She's so damn cute and unassuming that while she gets pats on her head from Ichika and the girls are jealous of it, they can't get mad at her.

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"Wah, everyone get ready~ Hail Emperor Orimu~!!

"Hail Emperor Orimu~!!"

"...so strange, and yet, I can't dislike this feeling..."

"I wonder how it would feel to be called 'Empress Orimu'..."

"B-ba-baka! You can't do that unless you're married to him!!"

"I wasn't suggesting that!!" **oh no, why is my heart beating like this!**
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:52   Link #43747
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Cecilia: You the representative? Humph, one would think that this country would choose someone more suitable yes? A logic suitable for neanderthals is what probably pushed you forward as the best choice. After all, everyone knows that women are the best when it comes to piloting the IS. You're something that existed by chance and yet they put you on a pedestal. It almost feels like they're exhibiting a two headed frog. Hohoho.

Ichika:...What's the big deal anyway? You keep saying representative this and representative that, but that just means we're the chosen participants for Mondo Grosso right?

Cecilia: Oh? You don't know? What kind of dunce are you? You should at least know the importance of your station before you blindly accept. Or are you the type to just nod your head and say yes? My my, you're probably the gullible type. Easy to fool, easy to distress. Perhaps I could beat you even in a game of wits and no more.

Cecilia: Humph, well let me enlighten you. In this world where IS are coveted as the supreme weapon, there are only 467 in existence. Each one is treated as a national treasure and the only defense against other IS. So to speak, it is an invaluable asset and necessity for a country's continued prosperity. Without an IS, a country cannot even be considered worthy of standing on the world's stage as a superpower. And to us representatives, we are vested with the ownership of one of these 467 jewels. See do you understand now? Being a representative isn't merely about being chosen based on novelty. It's a position where you carry the burden of your country. In a way, we can also be counted as their benefactors. We are the best of the best, polished away from the dirt. We are superior to everyone else and stand above them all. That is what it means to be a representative.

Ichika: Aren't you mistaking something?

Cecilia: Oh? What am I mistaking?

Ichika: If what you say is true. Then doesn't that mean they've put their faith in us? Giving us the assurance of a country's life. Giving us the burden of their future. Instead of dangling all that in front of them. Don't you think it's your duty to answer their feelings and expectations? What crap is that about being elite? What crap is that about standing over others? If you want a match then I accept. I believe that is what everyone's feelings are right now, I believe that this is the burden I have to carry for everyone.
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:58   Link #43748
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@ Tempest

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

As OOC as it is... no, it's not really OOC, more like character exaggeration, and it's AWESOME

@ Demi

Ichika: "And now, I'm an economist!"
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Old 2013-05-20, 11:59   Link #43749
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That is what I wish IS was like T_T

@zero: Well he could be. He was studying to be a salaryman and his grades weren't bad. so to speak.
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:34   Link #43750
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Okay, I'm making a plan. Rewrite means a lot of opportunity of massive retcon.


> Started with the exam gone wrong and lot's of exposition.

Day 1

> Introduction going smoothly, Cecilia barge in.

> Madoka spoke with Houki instead of Ichika. Ichika come in and congratulated Houki.

> Cecilia confrontation during class rep election, similar to manga version.

> Stupid Dorm violence is erased, instead, Houki challenged Ichika directly. She disappointed with his justified defeat, but caught off guard by surprise counter.

> Houki dream what if she never left

Day 2

> Ichika got into accident during refit process

> Ichika watched all the recording of Chifuyu's fight after his failure of controlling Kurogane and unable to understand the theory. Madoka grund herself with adjustment operation, hoping to find suitable configuration for Ichika.

> Chifuyu scolded her for staying too late, Madoka didn't respond kindly but obey anyway. Madoka found Ichika sleeping with computer on (full of tab and window), she is astonished that Ichika could work so hard if he tried.

> Ichika got the theory right at school

Day 3

> Houki dreamed of the past, she awake early, and when she get out, she saw Ichika train seriously.

> Houki insisted she'll join I.S. training, combining it with Kendo. Madoka challenged her so as not letting her interfere, but got stomped

> Ichika's debut fight also expanded. Seeing it, as well as Madoka's mockery of her, Cecilia is pissed off and left. Cecilia's background expanded.
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:35   Link #43751
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Is he still an emperor? =))
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:40   Link #43752
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Yep

From the get go, the promotional pamphlet is the cause "Queen vs Emperor, the great clash of the titans"
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:43   Link #43753
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The Queen...Cecilia...? *snickers*
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:46   Link #43754
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ni hyaku nen no toki wa koeru! Kono jidai, saidai no gekiha! Miru de wa ii! BAKA tai DOJIKKO!
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:47   Link #43755
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Hey, propaganda

Complete with their badass picture shopped into one.
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:49   Link #43756
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Why not add in tokusatsu style colored smoke explosions?
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Old 2013-05-20, 12:53   Link #43757
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problem is if I DID make it myself, no room to post it in story XD
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Old 2013-05-20, 13:02   Link #43758
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I don't really remember why Ichika and Rin fought. All I know was that it was stupid.

Chifuyu: alright. With the match results. Alcott is the winner. She is now the representative for class 1-4.

*clap clap clap*

Chifuyu: both combatants, would you like to say a few words? Orimura, losers first.

Ichika: oh, uh... YES! *cough* umm... To the people that supported me and cheered for me. I'm sorry. I let you guys down even though I said all those big words. It's mortifying... I actually want to cry right now. But I'll hold it in and greet the winner my best wishes. But in the future, definitely, I won't lose again.

*clap clap clap*

Chifuyu: well said, ALCOTT!

Cecilia: *stares at Ichika* then challenge me at that time. Till then, I'll hold on to the title of class rep. *sits back down silently*

*whisper whisper whisper*

Chifuyu: *stunned then smiles* oh my.
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Old 2013-05-20, 13:06   Link #43759
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Hmm, how much a fan rage would be if I have Ichika threw his match moments before he could win?

I have no plan of doing it (it's there in chapter 4 already), just some brainstorming.
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Old 2013-05-20, 13:09   Link #43760
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*shrug* possession stu isn't my specialty.
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