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Old 2013-05-22, 20:42   Link #43901
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I think her charm and at the same time the thing that turns me off to her is that she a "my pace" type of girl. But Unlike Honne, Nagisako's pace is always fast XD
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Old 2013-05-22, 21:44   Link #43902
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So that's why you're obsessed with her....
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Old 2013-05-22, 22:11   Link #43903
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Zero, is it possible to sear a wound shut?

If so, then how is it done?
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Old 2013-05-22, 22:22   Link #43904
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Nope, you can't

Sci fi is bulshitting us about this, there IS a method to stop bleeding but it won't shut the wound.
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Old 2013-05-22, 22:27   Link #43905
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Stopping the bleeding is better than nothing...

How can it be done?
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Old 2013-05-22, 22:31   Link #43906
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Cauterization, basically you weld the open arteries shut with heated metal pricks/pin

Problem is it's bad in the long run for many reason that using lots of cloth and bandages just better by magnitude because of following reason

> Raise the chance of infection
> Slowing down regeneration and possibility of permanent damage
> Not done properly, more harm than good
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:24   Link #43907
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Looking at chapter 14, so yes, I do need an explanation on some stuff, who is Mari again? And I sent u a short email.
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:25   Link #43908
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Should've knew it, Mari is more or less one-shot OC representing the former Class rep Rin kicked out of her position.

I'll read the mail then
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:26   Link #43909
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Should've knew it, Mari is more or less one-shot OC representing the former Class rep Rin kicked out of her position.

I'll read the mail then
We definitely have to include that, otherwise the readers will become confused at who this Mari is.
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:29   Link #43910
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As for the transition, the event before timeskip is happened directly after the event of chapter 13, thus basically the aftermath. The abrupt failure in storytelling, apparently OTOH the Rin + Laura event happened one day before the tournament. My bad, I hope you have solution for this.

Also, should we separate the Rin's share and give it so someone? I feel it's too long and dragged out without POV change.
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:34   Link #43911
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As for the transition, the event before timeskip is happened directly after the event of chapter 13, thus basically the aftermath. The abrupt failure in storytelling, apparently OTOH the Rin + Laura event happened one day before the tournament. My bad, I hope you have solution for this.

Also, should we separate the Rin's share and give it so someone? I feel it's too long and dragged out without POV change.
Well, HOW important is Rin's part in this chapter? (note I haven't read the whole chapter) yet, if her part is not that important, then there's no need to emphasise her parts strongly.
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Old 2013-05-23, 00:47   Link #43912
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Well, HOW important is Rin's part in this chapter? (note I haven't read the whole chapter) yet, if her part is not that important, then there's no need to emphasise her parts strongly.
Basically she's important only during dialogue with Ichika up to where the battle start... from there, it's a mess, but I can say she's only important at the start of battle and after Chifuyu called her and Laura into the office

Oh god I really botched this chapter didn't I...not to mention chapter 15 ...
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:13   Link #43913
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Man, so bored....
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:15   Link #43914
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Ah... good to know I'm not the first to include an OC that's formerly Class Two's rep.
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:30   Link #43915
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I feel sorry for Class Two's rep: Got her spot stolen from her by the new transfer student
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:46   Link #43916
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Yep, reap what you sow, Rin
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:48   Link #43917
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Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:54   Link #43918
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Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.
Maybe or maybe not
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Old 2013-05-23, 01:56   Link #43919
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Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.
That and she still alienated by the rest of 1-2 as of ch 15

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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Old 2013-05-23, 02:04   Link #43920
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You sure are a sadist *puts on sadistic grin* Anyone saw a good IS crossover? Because there`s this new anime Valvrave the Liberator and in my view, it`s a good anime. I wonder what would be look like once you do a crossover IS with this?
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