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Old 2013-10-14, 09:04   Link #46921
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VS Trooper, Second Round:

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Old 2013-10-14, 09:14   Link #46922
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@Strato: How would Zero said about this... Ah yes, full of battle excitment.

But that lead to another question consider myself: Why I tend to delusioned and romanticzed the action?
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Old 2013-10-14, 09:29   Link #46923
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It's what happens when you watch waaaaay too much action movies involving robots/mechs/powered armors.

Also, deluded and romanticized? o_O
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Old 2013-10-14, 09:41   Link #46924
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A.K.A I'm thinking more the artistic value, to much to the point that I describe it as a dance.
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Old 2013-10-14, 10:06   Link #46925
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Well, shonen, with few exceptions tend to have that. Battle is exciting, explosion is awesome. Until someone died anyway, but sometimes even THEN.

OTOH seinen tend to portray actions as gritty and wasteful, with death toll either dramatically low or super high but no matter what, it comes with realistic consequences.
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Old 2013-10-14, 10:37   Link #46926
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Where does the draft scene falls in the realism range?

Also the scene portrays the Minerva's arm cannon as a symbolic limiter. Notice how Inami goes NT-D after he detaches it.
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Old 2013-10-14, 11:06   Link #46927
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Not the best but I wanted it out of my system. And I think that Houki's chant came out pretty badassed.

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Old 2013-10-14, 11:13   Link #46928
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@ Stratos
Gundam

Your battle scenes always simple to read and imagine, yet very intense

@ Tempest
I... have no words

It's incredible, but somewhat complex to discern, but too incredible to skim through.
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Old 2013-10-14, 11:55   Link #46929
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I had the inspiration of a super sentai show introductory episode - the one where all of the heroes battle capabilities are shown in a group fight, yadda yadda.

Heh, I didn't start the fanfic challenge because I thought that I was the best at this stuff - I got a lot of room to improve too. Such as calling Laura an 'Iron Pixie' ...

Although, I'll admit, Miner's little challenge of a Romance/Horror with focus being on the name of a flower is a little... unusual. 0.o
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Old 2013-10-14, 15:40   Link #46930
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Not the best but I wanted it out of my system. And I think that Houki's chant came out pretty badassed.

Spoiler for Demon Beast Hunt:
Pah... This is jusst so weird to said... But nothing to complain also!

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Although, I'll admit, Miner's little challenge of a Romance/Horror with focus being on the name of a flower is a little... unusual. 0.o
That's what I'm aiming at.
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Old 2013-10-14, 20:15   Link #46931
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Its considered stu when an OC can beat CC on even terms. Does that rule of thumb still hold true?
You have to be original and I mean it, it must be a new one not the same personality and behavior of anime characters. Those things, I really mean it. BE original and have very original character background if you were to put them in fanfictions. Once I`m done with exams, I`ll revise the published ones I have now and put the revised version.

I quote 'Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose'. Everyone can lose in unexpected moments if they`re caught off-guard and not focused on surroundings and one opponent[in WOT: it`s called 'Focus Fire'.]

I do not know if that rule is true, but I can make my OCs balanced and lose during their early debuts since they`re a 'novice level' to that kind of stuff. Just remember, people who are new to that will take many falls.
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Old 2013-10-14, 20:29   Link #46932
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I had the inspiration of a super sentai show
Funny how that sort of struck a chord for me. I wonder from time to time that since IS users can deploy their IS on the spot, why not mock-up some hand motions then shout "HENKEI" or "HENSHIN" before deploying
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Old 2013-10-14, 20:39   Link #46933
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...because Orimura-sensei would KO them...?
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:00   Link #46934
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Dude, that is what me, demino and babylon has been doing!

And beside, could Chifuyu handle a near light-speed Ichika?

CLOCK UP!

- Ah!

- Wait, Wai... Weh!

- ALERT! Some one has been using speed to lift up our skirts... Not me too!

- Tch... (Chifuyu deploy Kuzuhara)

*BANG*

CLOCK OVER
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:04   Link #46935
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OC vs CC, when I think about it... you need a reason to have that to convince the fandom.

EDIT: unless your OC is a villain or anti hero.

Of course, my OC listing so far is filled by Copycat Sue as it is, along with heavy doses of Possession Sue in regards to CCs. If I were to have such conflict, no one will catch on and raise their forehead because nothing is the same anyway.
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:17   Link #46936
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Is it me, or there are more and more lemon fic?
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:28   Link #46937
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I don't know

I usually don't touch M rated stories
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:34   Link #46938
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Is it me, or there are more and more lemon fic?
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:39   Link #46939
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Ummm

Just in case you don't know Fireminer is 7
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Old 2013-10-14, 21:59   Link #46940
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Well, "Within the Darkness" (WD) and "Operation: BLAZE" are limes. "Origin" is heavy acidic - not so surprise, since the author got help from fujin. And there is the oneshot that I post few days ago.

Also, I can't not help myself but noticing the erractic pattern of "Re-write" writers. Beside of me and Zero, these guys seems to be inputing so much things into Ichika, to the level of Stu. And their plot is messy. Even the new WD, which is a reboot from an old but good IS fic.
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