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Old 2013-12-22, 08:35   Link #49421
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The latter is correct. And yes, Ichika is wearing the Jacket. Or whatever - I don't know what they wore in Feudal Japan.
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Old 2013-12-22, 08:54   Link #49422
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The latter is correct. And yes, Ichika is wearing the Jacket. Or whatever - I don't know what they wore in Feudal Japan.
Feudal Japan?! I don't think that is a Jacket... Might need to search for it..... any image?
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Old 2013-12-22, 08:58   Link #49423
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Feudal Japan?! I don't think that is a Jacket... Might need to search for it..... any image?
Hakama overcoat (Haori)
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Old 2013-12-22, 09:00   Link #49424
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A nice little scene from Athena's Falken arc:

Spoiler for Summer:


Basically, that's OC Phantom Task operative turning over a new leaf. And I imagine and instrumental version of Last Impression playing to this scene, specifically the part where Kirin hands her the pendant.

Heck, it may as well be the OC's theme
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Old 2013-12-22, 09:04   Link #49425
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Oh crup! I forgot that this is litterary a hot spring, and they are runaways! So, no need for a jacket here. Instead of it, must be a straw raincloth and a straw hat, like this one:

http://media.thethaovanhoa.vn/2011/0.../35/aotoi2.jpg

Also, you've got my permission to write this anyway you want.
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Old 2013-12-22, 09:08   Link #49426
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Spoiler for @Fireminer:


Haven't double-checked the grammar yet though.

Edit: Thank you Zero.

Second Edit: Should be Hanten since they are common people.
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Old 2013-12-22, 12:47   Link #49427
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...something about that entire scenario seems very familiar...
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Old 2013-12-22, 12:51   Link #49428
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Sorry for double post but this has nothing to do with previous post helping out Fireminer.

Spoiler for Early Christmas Present? First Draft:


One more section coming soon. But I need people to review this first.

Edit: Should I cut out the exposition part? It seems kind of long.
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Old 2013-12-22, 18:29   Link #49429
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Well, age, you wrote that well. Not much to complain here. And don't cut the exposition part, but condensed the "Legacy <> Slacker" section.
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Old 2013-12-22, 20:04   Link #49430
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Well, age, you wrote that well. Not much to complain here. And don't cut the exposition part, but condensed the "Legacy <> Slacker" section.
Probably cutting out the history proportion and explain them in the actual story? -_-
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Old 2013-12-22, 21:08   Link #49431
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That would be a nice solution.
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Old 2013-12-22, 21:23   Link #49432
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Watching Stardust and why the heck I'm having the idea of Madok using Nuclear Bazooka?

Ichika: GA... I mean... MADOKA!!!
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Old 2013-12-22, 22:22   Link #49433
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Tabane: Ta Da! Here you go, the Animal Translation Potion! With this, Ik-kun could talking with any animal he want!

Ichika: Tabane-nee, do you sure that this is safe?

Tabane: Of course I am. Now, Drink!

Ichika: Gulp... Well, this is... Bark! Bark! (Turned into a dog)

Tabane: Sorry, Ik-kun... Maybe I should had tested this before...

Madoka: Mwhahaha! I'm here to kill you, Ichika Orimura!.. Gulp... Meoth! MEOTH! (Forced to drink the potion, turned into a cat that scratching Tabane's face)
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Just another weird idea.
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Old 2013-12-23, 16:54   Link #49434
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Ok, first, completely new to this creation thread. Second, I came up with a new weapon that im ok with people using in their fanfic's. The weapon is called the G.I.R, short for gravity impulse reactor (you're allowed to change the name). Using technology similar to the PIC, it manipulates the enery of atoms around a target, allowing for the user to crush or move an object. the one drawback of the GIR is that the user must focus entirely on the target, allowing only for single target engagement, so the IS should have cloaking technology or ludicrously high shield levels.
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Old 2013-12-23, 20:03   Link #49435
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PIC will neutralize it

At best you get immobilization effect similar to gravity in pokemon.
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Old 2013-12-23, 20:26   Link #49436
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So, I devided the Harem countries each has one or two distingtive type of special unit (similar to Fire Emblem). And here is the result:

Gaul (Charlotte): Knight, General, Marshal - Heavy Armored Unit. Tanguel and Elf Manipulate.

Albion (Cecilia): Cavalier, Paladin, Armored Cavalier, Baron, Champion - Horse Units. Archer, Sniper, Sharpshooter, Balista - Bow.

Prussia (Laura): Mercenary, Hero - Sword. Shaman, Druid -Dark Magic. Wyrvern Users. Axe Users.

Slavic (Tate): White Magic - Priest, Cleric, Bishop, Saint. Pegasi Knight, Sepraph Knight, Falcon Knight, Griphon Knight - Flying Units.

Middle Kingdom (Rin): Mage, Sage, Mage Knight - Anima Magic. Soldier, Halberdier, Sentinel - Lance. Nomad.

Nippon: Myrmidon, Swordmaster, Theif, Assasin...

Any suggestion? Not an exper on Middle Age warfare.
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Old 2013-12-23, 20:39   Link #49437
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Slavic? I think Rus is better. And Prussia won't exist until the 17th century.

And Laura's catchphrase should be "I'm awesome!"
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Old 2013-12-23, 21:08   Link #49438
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It's after 17th century. That is why they have Magical Locomotive that could fly to the Moon. Plus, Columbiana (America) also existed now.
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Old 2013-12-24, 06:05   Link #49439
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May be you could try reading others' fanfic, look out for ommon trope and see how you can play around with them?
- I encounter a lot of fics that really don't go anywhere, so I'm not sure. I'm more going for actual books and workign from ideas from them--or from really interesting ideas from TV shows that can really be expanded upon. But in the end, all I'm doing is writing The Greatest Story Never Told.
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Old 2013-12-24, 06:30   Link #49440
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