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Old 2013-12-24, 06:51   Link #49441
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Unable to break writers block, gunpla binge doesn't help at all.

Currently forcing myself to read Stephen Coonts books, like, all of Jake Grafton. Hopefully will gain sufficient inspiration.
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Old 2013-12-24, 07:23   Link #49442
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If I remove the history.... won't it reduce the story's link to IS?

Altering the ending since it is a little out of character for Nemo's personality.
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Old 2013-12-24, 07:33   Link #49443
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Currently forcing myself to read Stephen Coonts books, like, all of Jake Grafton. Hopefully will gain sufficient inspiration.
- Good choice. Now excuse, me this bottle of Sav Blanc won't drink itswelf...
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Old 2013-12-24, 07:34   Link #49444
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If I remove the history.... won't it reduce the story's link to IS?

Altering the ending since it is a little out of character for Nemo's personality.
Careful! It's quite a gamble that you're thinking!
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Old 2013-12-24, 08:34   Link #49445
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Damnit, hours till live...

Spoiler for Full version.:


Removed the history. So how was it?

Edit:
Might at this before "back to the story":
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To summarize:
Loser/Legacy has ego and pride the height of Burj Khalifa while Slacker has the pride of an earthworm...

Being on opposing end, it is little wonder why both could not see eye to eye.
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Old 2013-12-24, 08:43   Link #49446
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Better! It would certainly attracted more eyes than the former, although I still prefer the older version. And they still use Tornado?

Hmm... People these day. They never understand the Beauty of Simplistic. Didn't the Lengendary White Devil need only his Saber, Beam Rifle, Bazooka and a Shield to change the course of a war?

Seriously, I'm getting bored with the flashy showoff.
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Old 2013-12-24, 09:18   Link #49447
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Better! It would certainly attracted more eyes than the former, although I still prefer the older version.
So... new version it is?

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And they still use Tornado?
Tornado is a disguise.

They only looked like Tornado.

There is no mentioning of Tornado in earlier part... because as of that moment in story, Nemo know nothing about Military Fighter which is why its name is not mentioned.

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Hmm... People these day. They never understand the Beauty of Simplistic. Didn't the Lengendary White Devil need only his Saber, Beam Rifle, Bazooka and a Shield to change the course of a war?

Seriously, I'm getting bored with the flashy showoff.
I tried to go for that but it can get quite boring sometime..... practical yes but boring.
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Old 2013-12-24, 09:22   Link #49448
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Yes, yes, the new version. However, a bit more of a stunned but calculated Nemo would be great.
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Old 2013-12-24, 09:27   Link #49449
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Yes, yes, the new version. However, a bit more of a stunned but calculated Nemo would be great.
Reason for the change is because Nemo is a Slacker. Lack of Enthusiasm is kind of a trademark of a slacker.

Probably the idea of experimenting with new toy make him excited? Like a young boy with a new toy?
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Old 2013-12-24, 09:34   Link #49450
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Bingo!

Say, What do you think if Ichika dressed like this: http://static4.wikia.nocookie.net/__...ork_(FE13).jpg
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Old 2013-12-24, 10:15   Link #49451
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Some editing for mistake and going live as soon as its Christmas.

Spoiler for Final Draft:
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Old 2013-12-24, 10:30   Link #49452
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Ready for publish, I say!
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Old 2013-12-24, 10:31   Link #49453
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have a rockin' christmas guys!

still reworking my wild core ideas >.>

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Old 2013-12-24, 11:14   Link #49454
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Old 2013-12-24, 11:17   Link #49455
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zeroXSEED, the GIR operates at the atomic level, PICs operate at the molecular level. Also, if the PIC cancels it, explain why laura's AIC works against PIC.
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Old 2013-12-24, 12:33   Link #49456
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Merry Christmas!

*Age is working on summary*

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In the world of IS, there are those tried to change the world like real men and those who are just trying survive a day through their job and life. OC warning. Rated for language, Machine violence and don't-even-try-this level of stupidity.
Good enough?
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Old 2013-12-24, 12:42   Link #49457
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zeroXSEED, the GIR operates at the atomic level, PICs operate at the molecular level. Also, if the PIC cancels it, explain why laura's AIC works against PIC.
*laughs*

No, in the first place PIC always work as protective insulation bubble, similar to mass effect field.

If Laura use AIC on living being unprotected, that living being will either implode or explode into steamy gore due to sudden shift in chemical properties.

Unless GIR can break through PIC (a feat that even AIC can't achieve) it won't work as advertised. But if it does, it'll be one hell of an OP equipment I agree.

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On unrelated note, Rest in Peace Mikhail Kalashnikov, may Ak-47 stay in service century ahead.
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Old 2013-12-24, 12:50   Link #49458
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It's live.

One thing done and many things to go....
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Old 2013-12-24, 13:45   Link #49459
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zeroXSEED, the impulse in gravity impulse generator is there for a reason. The GIR will not stay at a single energy frequency, but oscilate between randomized frequencies (in a specific range), thus confusing the enemy PIC, and allowing for the GIR to work.
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Old 2013-12-24, 17:37   Link #49460
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