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Old 2014-04-30, 07:14   Link #52641
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Admittedly, this is my problem when writing more than two people at once. Two people is much easier since narrative change doesn't need to be too drastic.
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Old 2014-04-30, 07:50   Link #52642
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It gets bigger and bigger until its size rivals that of a boa. Slowly and patiently, snake wraps itself tightly around him like a scarf. The moist, slippery scales give him a terrible goosebumps. Then, when it gets to his neck, snake increases the force of its press.

"Ah..." He can't breath. Ichika's opens mouth desperately inhales for more air, while giving the impression of a silence scream. His tiny figures is now completely swallowed by snake's patterned hood, which is eerie similar to a face, a creepy one. He could see his reflection in its topaz lens: small, pity and pathetic. The forked tongue lick his face thoroughly, leaving a trail of saliva. And... The abyss that is its jaw opens widely, poison drips between sharp tooth, ready to devour the helpless prey...

"Ichika!"

"Ah!" Ichika suddenly falls head down from the chair. His eyes closes, and he curls up like a child with nightmare before finally able to breath normally.
Take two, Critic?
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Old 2014-04-30, 08:47   Link #52643
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So we have the Black Truth, the White Truth and the Golden Truth.
Tabane: "Ik-kun! Do you choose the White Axe, the Black Axe, or the Golden Axe?"

Ichika: "B-but, I didn't drop any Axe..."

Tabane: "BUUUU!!! The correct answer is the Black Axe!!!"

Ichika: (electrocuted by penalty)
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Old 2014-04-30, 09:14   Link #52644
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...why am I reminded of the Matrix?
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Old 2014-04-30, 09:27   Link #52645
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Then, where is the red/blue axe?
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Old 2014-04-30, 10:33   Link #52646
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Hey Zero, get your latest chapter sent to me as well. I got two more nights to finish up chapter 8 before I gotta leave for 4 days. Then I have 5 days before I'm gone for two weeks. @_@

I'll have limited time to be connected to the internet then but working on chapter 9 shouldn't be too much problem every night.
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Old 2014-04-30, 11:22   Link #52647
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If Ichika, Houki, Cecilia, Rin, Charlotte, Laura, Tatenashi and Kanzashi form a squad, what would their positions in the team be?
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Old 2014-04-30, 11:29   Link #52648
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Well...
Tatenashi would obviously be the team leader.
Houki would be the all rounder, (Support and Attack)
The zoners would Cecilia, Laura and Kanzashi.
At the best Charlotte would only be for support because her weapons are not that strong (unless the Grey Scale is included.)
Hard-hitters will be Rin, Ichika including Houki.
And Ichika will get the most important spot, the secret weapon or the one-hitter.

Though if I put it in the context of Truth Be Told, I'm not sure if my suggestion would fit. Since you already have their IS evolve to second shift, I can hard classify them. To me they all seem like all-rounders now
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Old 2014-04-30, 11:38   Link #52649
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The latest chapter I post is about 17,000 words or over... Writing very long chapters really can drain you...

I'm still fixing the specs of the second shift forms of the IS of Ichika's harem, but you are right, they seem too diverse.

You know I'm actually planning to have Chifuyu become more active in my fic. I already handed her back her Kurazakura and am planning to have the queen waltz in the battlefield again rather than just stand in the sidelines like she used to.
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Old 2014-04-30, 11:44   Link #52650
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Must be the OVA trailer of IS getting to you

Actually I would really love to see Chifuyu become active again. Seems legit in your fic too because the enemies you have put there are pretty strong... Ichika will need the help of his Chifuyu-nee

Also is it true that you're adding another main male OC in Truth Be Told?
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Old 2014-04-30, 11:51   Link #52651
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Must be the OVA trailer of IS getting to you

Actually I would really love to see Chifuyu become active again. Seems legit in your fic too because the enemies you have put there are pretty strong... Ichika will need the help of his Chifuyu-nee

Also is it true that you're adding another main male OC in Truth Be Told?
The fics that feature mostly Chifuyu's fierce nature is really low in number, besides the fics of Fujin and Fangking and the other five authors, there is really low number of stories that emphasize Chifuyu's warrior image

Also about your question..... Where did that rumor come from!?

There will be NO, I repeat NO main males other than Ichika in Truth Be Told ... besides his father.

I'm sticking to the mantra I imposed on myself, Ichika: The ONE and ONLY male IS pilot
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Old 2014-04-30, 17:58   Link #52652
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@ Tempest
Understood

BTW, chapter 8 is a bit haphazardly done so feel free to change anything, including cutting and adding scenes as you wish
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Old 2014-04-30, 18:32   Link #52653
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...why am I reminded of the Matrix?
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Then, where is the red/blue axe?
You guys are too young to get the reference I suppose...
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Old 2014-04-30, 18:36   Link #52654
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They're too twisted to understand the moral of fairy tale, bro.
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Old 2014-04-30, 19:07   Link #52655
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Considering our difference in taste and tolerance, I'll let this one go

I know you guys have done it before, but I really find it funny to think about Chifuyu and Tabane's reactions when Ichika rejects Byakushiki and takes on an Uchigane instead. I think they'd rage or something. All that hard work and all.
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Old 2014-04-30, 20:20   Link #52656
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I beg to differ :V

http://forums.spacebattles.com/threa....261019/page-2
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Old 2014-05-01, 05:21   Link #52657
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Then, where is the red/blue axe?
Looks at Houki and Cecilia

Y'know, another plot bunny that I will never write is an IS/ X Kamen Rider Den-O crossover. Houki possessed by Momotaros, Cecilia by Urataros.

Ichika: "There doesn't seem to be any changes in personality, actually..."

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You guys are too young to get the reference I suppose...
- More like nobody tells old-fashioned fables to kids anymore these days.

Ironic, because I actually had to explain to a 17-year old what Goldilocks and the Three Bears was about I made a reference to it and he had no idea what I was talking about.

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They're too twisted to understand the moral of fairy tale, bro.
Morals? (Laughs maniacally)
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Old 2014-05-01, 05:36   Link #52658
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Morals? (Laughs maniacally)
And the prince raped Snow White in the original, yes?

There's always moral, the question is whether it's good moral or bad moral.
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Old 2014-05-01, 05:38   Link #52659
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And the prince raped Snow White in the original, yes?
- In her sleep. And he wasn't the only one.
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Old 2014-05-01, 06:16   Link #52660
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Isn't that sleeping beauty? The little mermaid never got the prince either

I think the best description of the golden knight is nobility. To have integrity despite all that is faced. To be able to bear pain so others don't have to feel it. Not deciding what happiness is for each person. Rather, affording each and every person the opportunity to reach their own happiness.
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