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Old 2011-11-04, 04:58   Link #6041
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@ Zero and Rain - Yuriko and Aria draft. Please read and tell me what you think.

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Old 2011-11-04, 05:33   Link #6042
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I'm cancelling and withdrawing my current storyline (Van MArrk arc for <Ren>'s story), mainly because I'm just not happy with how it's turning out. It might end up as a separate side story, but defintely removing it and starting it from scratch--especially givne the reviews the 1st chapter is getting on ff.net.

I'm going to have to meet some expectations now...
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Old 2011-11-04, 05:39   Link #6043
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Haha, you didn't think they'd be ignoring you forever now did you?
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Old 2011-11-04, 05:47   Link #6044
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@ Hawke - What other fanons have you written fanfiction about other than IS?
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Old 2011-11-04, 05:52   Link #6045
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If I remember, he had plenty in his website... I guess it's mostly pre-2000 anime/manga though...

EDIT: I'm going to read the draft later, kinda busy here...
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Old 2011-11-04, 05:54   Link #6046
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@ Hawke - What other fanons have you written fanfiction about other than IS?
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If I remember, he had plenty in his website... I guess it's mostly pre-2000 anime/manga though...
Pre-2000? You mean like hunter x hunter and others like that? Those were some of the best anime's when I was a kid.
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Old 2011-11-04, 05:58   Link #6047
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Magic Knight Rayearth. Kids these days! (shakes cane)

And yes, given that I use OCs, I was assumign they'd ignore me forever. Including the guy who Jak's so ticked off at.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:00   Link #6048
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Magic Knight Rayearth. Kids these days! (shakes cane)
HEY I DO WATCH RAYEARTH! I EVEN HAD IT'S OFFICIAL SNES GAME CARTRIDGE!
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:03   Link #6049
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Magic Knight Rayearth. Kids these days! (shakes cane)

And yes, given that I use OCs, I was assumign they'd ignore me forever. Including the guy who Jak's so ticked off at.
Sorry. I grew up watching Doraemon, Shaman king, Hunter x Hunter and Detective Conan.

Also. Can you please not act like a grandpa? I doubt you're as old as that.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:09   Link #6050
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Judging by his looks, I don't think he's too far off.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:11   Link #6051
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Days like these I go home with a backache, I DO feel like a grandpa...

Seriously, I had to teach people IMS databases and COBOL, had te explain what a telex machine was to some IT people, and I also knew what a dial-type (pulse) phone was...
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:15   Link #6052
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There used to be some dude who hated OCs with a passion, but he hasn't made his presence felt since the anime stopped airing.

In other words, a little before this thread became really active.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:17   Link #6053
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There used to be some dude who hated OCs with a passion, but he hasn't made his presence felt since the anime stopped airing.

In other words, a little before this thread became really active.
I saw him leave a review in the Index archive. He's still an ass.

Though oddly enough he seems to have left heart of the Machine alone despite having a Male OC for the main character.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:32   Link #6054
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He probably lost interest in IS at some point.

Are we talking about the same guy?
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:36   Link #6055
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Regardless, I'm ripping out what I've written so far on chapter two and will start again. Argh, it's apain, but if a story's going nowehere, it's going nowhere fast.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:42   Link #6056
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He probably lost interest in IS at some point.

Are we talking about the same guy?
I was talking about Jasper actually. I know the one you posted, he's a dick too. He purposely make his reviews as insulting as he can.

@ Hawk - Good luck to you on that I'm looking forward to it.
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:49   Link #6057
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Ahh....

Sometimes I come back here, and wonder if we're all really some alternate universe of Bakuman. XD

I don't mean to toot my own horn, but I started out in the deep of CLAMP, and have read everything they've made right up to TRC (after that I lost interest in Kobato...). This story, Mobile Angel Reiya, is mostly Angelic Layer, but there's so many hooks to other CLAMP material I still wonder how did I manage to piece it together like that. This incomplete piece was what I'd consider the epitome of my writing. Everything has gone downhill since.

But now, as I reread that fic, I find that my penchant for being absolutely annal for details has become even worse than before; in the past I drew on other CLAMP manga and the real world for inspiration, now my inspiration comes from frikkin' everywhere, plus I also have people routinely feeding/pruning ideas.

I read my Vandam II fic and somewhere it just doesn't feel like Reiya did. I'm missing some kind of spark, and I can't put my finger on it...
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Old 2011-11-04, 06:52   Link #6058
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Ahh....

Sometimes I come back here, and wonder if we're all really some alternate universe of Bakuman. XD

I don't mean to toot my own horn, but I started out in the deep of CLAMP, and have read everything they've made right up to TRC (after that I lost interest in Kobato...). This story, Mobile Angel Reiya, is mostly Angelic Layer, but there's so many hooks to other CLAMP material I still wonder how did I manage to piece it together like that. This incomplete piece was what I'd consider the epitome of my writing. Everything has gone downhill since.

But now, as I reread that fic, I find that my penchant for being absolutely annal for details has become even worse than before; in the past I drew on other CLAMP manga and the real world for inspiration, now my inspiration comes from frikkin' everywhere, plus I also have people routinely feeding/pruning ideas.

I read my Vandam II fic and somewhere it just doesn't feel like Reiya did. I'm missing some kind of spark, and I can't put my finger on it...
Why do you write stories Meister? If you can answer that then you might be able to find something to help you.
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Old 2011-11-04, 07:18   Link #6059
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I though Stratospear already do that?

I did what now?
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Old 2011-11-04, 07:28   Link #6060
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I'm cancelling and withdrawing my current storyline (Van MArrk arc for <Ren>'s story), mainly because I'm just not happy with how it's turning out. It might end up as a separate side story, but defintely removing it and starting it from scratch--especially givne the reviews the 1st chapter is getting on ff.net.

I'm going to have to meet some expectations now...

I'm not a good writer myself, but I know a good story when read one.

Your current story arc is excellent. The plot is quite exciting and the draft already well written. If you decide to scrap it, in my humble opinion, it will a waste of good writing material.

But, hey, you are the writer.... so the final decision is yours

With part exactly that you not satisfied with?
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