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Old 2011-11-07, 23:42   Link #6641
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I doubt she can do a tour of france while her father is still there, so I'll have to make him get arrested or something off-screen.
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Well then have him 'watching' (by agents or security cameras)... he's not necessarily active... he's a businessman, which is busy
Which means I'll have to do an action scene. Oh well, a classic case of rescue romance.
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Old 2011-11-07, 23:43   Link #6642
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Which means I'll have to do an action scene. Oh well, a classic case of rescue romance.
Action scene where?

I guess you just misunderstand, oh well... see you again later
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Old 2011-11-07, 23:46   Link #6643
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Action scene where?

I guess you just misunderstand, oh well... see you again later
Ichika probably won't take kindly to Charlotte being stalked. Which leads to a punch out.
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Old 2011-11-07, 23:48   Link #6644
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@Zero: Well, you can always drop chapter 12 for me to correct grammar, but I won't go TOO indepth as I would before. It's not like it's exams that I need to worry about, but assignments, which give me more leeway.
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Old 2011-11-08, 00:50   Link #6645
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@ Meister - Can teachers in Japan actually be as young as 19?
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Old 2011-11-08, 02:31   Link #6646
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@ Meister - Can teachers in Japan actually be as young as 19?
They'd be student teachers. Private instituitions also have some leeway with the age thing. Furthermore, training IS is a recent thing; most of the teachers themselves aren't that much older.
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Old 2011-11-08, 02:48   Link #6647
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Thanks, that explains it. Can student teachers get involved with students?

@ Zero and Rain - What I have so far for Daydreams, it's just the beginning. Please tell me what you think.

Spoiler:
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Old 2011-11-08, 03:22   Link #6648
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Thanks, that explains it. Can student teachers get involved with students?

@ Zero and Rain - What I have so far for Daydreams, it's just the beginning. Please tell me what you think.

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Let me guess, Ichika makes his appearance in the next a part.
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Old 2011-11-08, 03:24   Link #6649
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Let me guess, Ichika makes his appearance in the next a part.
Obviously. I'm trying to use a more common writing style but it's extending the chapter. If I used the old one then I'd be nearly halfway done.
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Old 2011-11-08, 03:43   Link #6650
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@ Jak - Seems fine to me. That's the first time I've seen a professional IS pilot be so cocky though. You already know my comments about the Tokyo segment.
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:15   Link #6651
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I'm here, what's up?

So far Athena Bouclier is not in a jam... Just moving at a pace slower than a retarded turtle and there's a cohesion retreat tomorrow so things are really slow here.

Since my fic is more from Inami's POV, I'm skipping the scene where Ichika talks in his subconscious.

Also Eratas, need my help for the new crack fic?
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:25   Link #6652
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I'm here, what's up?

So far Athena Bouclier is not in a jam... Just moving at a pace slower than a retarded turtle and there's a cohesion retreat tomorrow so things are really slow here.

Since my fic is more from Inami's POV, I'm skipping the scene where Ichika talks in his subconscious.

Also Eratas, need my help for the new crack fic?
Yup, basically a school life AU where there's no IS or dark backstories. Ichika was never kidnapped, Cecilia's parents never died, Irish was never a terrorist, Inami was never a pilot etc etc.

I'll put some lampshade hanging though like Inami being a mecha Otaku, Ichika mentioning Chifuyu going to Germany despite him not being kidnapped and Tatenashi commenting on Irish's hair being white despite the fact that he has no skull suit to change the color.
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:42   Link #6653
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@Meister, I sent u the link via PM. Thx in advance ^^
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:48   Link #6654
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PM'ed Inami's info to you, Eratas. Hope its allright
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:59   Link #6655
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@ Stratos - I just read your plans, it's pretty good but I have something to add.

1. The school was an all-female school that's recently become co-ed. This explains the small number of males present in the story. The classes there are regular classes, not advanced computer tech research.

2. The bracelet would be confiscated. Think about it, what's stopping him from storing a gun in there? A school wouldn't take that risk. I know you said it's a secret but with teachers like Chifuyu, a prez like Tatenashi and other people he really can't hide it.

3. How did he get so good at tech? The AU means none of them have the advanced skills they have in the regular verse. Kyuukai isn't an experienced soldier or Irish isn't that good a hacker being examples.

4. I need to know if he's already dating Tsurugi or if she's still his osananajimi.
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Old 2011-11-08, 05:59   Link #6656
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Eratas, if you're having trouble with Charlotte's segment, how about having her dream about being Ichika's childhood friend? That would be different.

Also a bit caught up in assignments.
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Old 2011-11-08, 06:02   Link #6657
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Eratas, if you're having trouble with Charlotte's segment, how about having her dream about being Ichika's childhood friend? That would be different.

Also a bit caught up in assignments.
I'm not skilled enough to do that. Maybe Zero, Meister, or Hawke can, but I doubt I can do it.
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Old 2011-11-08, 06:04   Link #6658
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Eratas, if you're having trouble with Charlotte's segment, how about having her dream about being Ichika's childhood friend? That would be different.
- agreed. You could also point out how Charu would have felt less lonely if Ichika were her childhood friend. EG That she had someoen to be with even after her Mother passed away.

But you might need to hone your dramatic skills on this...

Dpon't give me more work than what I already need to do as I'm stuck on rewriting chap2 of my own fic...
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Old 2011-11-08, 06:06   Link #6659
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BELIEVE IN YOUR ELF!!!!


(And all that shounen stuff...)
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Old 2011-11-08, 06:06   Link #6660
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- agreed. You could also point out how Charu would have felt less lonely if Ichika were her childhood friend. EG That she had someoen to be with even after her Mother passed away.

But you might need to hone your dramatic skills on this...
That's good enough to be it's own story. I might do it in the future as a standalone fic but not now since I'll have to start from when they were kids from up to high school.

@ Box - I don't have an elf, sorry.
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