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Old 2011-11-11, 09:09   Link #7261
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I just remember an idea Hawke gave me: What if Ichika and Charlotte were childhood friends? No Dunoa company or abusive backstory.

What do you guys think? A decent fic?
Two things

1. If you make it well, it'll be a fresh, good story.
2. if you don't do it well, it'll still be popular...
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:10   Link #7262
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And I hoped you'd go for more mundane direction when you said starting it from the scratch, oh well...
Its just a theory. I haven't bothered to explain how or what makes it work, and this was what led to the giant IS in the first place.

I do however theorize that IS cores turn mind power to physical power. How that occurs, or if there's any risk of IS eventually turning people into mindless batteries is anyone's guess.

But do know that my fic is full of high adventure. Things that are dark or belong to the "Fear the Machine" trope are toned down or subverted. Mistrusting IS runs counter to my fic, and hence why I added the positive intent caveat.

Like grim dark, Rage Against The Machine is far too overused. I for one would like to create a setting where machines are much more trustworthy than other humans. How rare do you get to do that? Hardcoding this into the IS achieves this goal, and does not deviate far from what is 'logical'.

Because the IS itself defies all laws of physics...
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:11   Link #7263
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Two things

1. If you make it well, it'll be a fresh, good story.
2. if you don't do it well, it'll still be popular...
See? My ideas are awesome, as long as I don't write them down.

Charlotte always seemed like more of an osananajimi-type than the other girls.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:14   Link #7264
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Two things

1. If you make it well, it'll be a fresh, good story.
2. if you don't do it well, it'll still be popular...
It's easy enough to make reasons as to why anybody else could be chosen.

Laura - Chifuyu took Ichika to Germany and befriended Laura.

Charlotte - Moved to Japan and got close to the Orimura family.

Tatenashi - Became a servant/butler of the Sarashiki family in order to help Chifuyu support them both.

Cecilia - No clue Maybe adopted temporarily by Orimura family in order to protect her from her family?

@ Meister - Interesting concept to work with. Yes, rage against the machine is overused but the reason behind it is simple. The IS caused the social imbalance. They don't hate the machine, just what it ended up doing. Most of us subvert the rage against the machine trope anyway.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:17   Link #7265
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I suppose if you guys go with that, she'll be be referred to as "Third Childhood friend" by Ichika?

Also, artwork for the Proioxis Battle Armor: Link
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:20   Link #7266
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Its just a theory. I haven't bothered to explain how or what makes it work, and this was what led to the giant IS in the first place.

I do however theorize that IS cores turn mind power to physical power. How that occurs, or if there's any risk of IS eventually turning people into mindless batteries is anyone's guess.

But do know that my fic is full of high adventure. Things that are dark or belong to the "Fear the Machine" trope are toned down or subverted. Mistrusting IS runs counter to my fic, and hence why I added the positive intent caveat.

Like grim dark, Rage Against The Machine is far too overused. I for one would like to create a setting where machines are much more trustworthy than other humans. How rare do you get to do that? Hardcoding this into the IS achieves this goal, and does not deviate far from what is 'logical'.

Because the IS itself defies all laws of physics...
That's.... not what I meant but....

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It's easy enough to make reasons as to why anybody else could be chosen.

Laura - Chifuyu took Ichika to Germany and befriended Laura.

Charlotte - Moved to Japan and got close to the Orimura family.

Tatenashi - Became a servant/butler of the Sarashiki family in order to help Chifuyu support them both.

Cecilia - No clue Maybe adopted temporarily by Orimura family in order to protect her from her family?
Lol, even in Sacred Twins Cecilia is constantly sidelined (and damn she realized it)

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Anyway listing of maximum speed of I.S in Sacred Twins, @10.000 m and 230 K (Gospel Battle)

Schwarzer Regen: Mach 3.55 (With Special Booster)
ShenLong: Mach 3.75
KuroGane: Mach 3.8 (With Special Booster)
Metal Wolf: Mach 4.05
Rafael Revive: Mach 4.1
Blue Tears: Mach 4.4
ByakuShiki: Mach 4.5
BT Gunner: Mach 4.85
BS Setsura: Mach 4.95
Silver Gospel: Mach 5.1
Akatsubaki: Mach 5.35
Hirameki: Mach 5.4
ShiroKishi: Mach 5.5

Note that during the Gospel Battle, Both KuroGane and Scwharzer Regen didn't use extension booster thus is much slower than this number and basically firing from below.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:22   Link #7267
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Should I make Charlotte the only childhood friend? It would allow the two to get closer without any distractions.

Should I also take out the I.S machines and just make it into a rom-com?
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:26   Link #7268
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Should I make Charlotte the only childhood friend? It would allow the two to get closer without any distractions.

Should I also take out the I.S machines and just make it into a rom-com?
Better to have just her, and if you're going to include the IS, have it as a background thing, them not thinking any more of it than we do about the statistics of people that die on the road. Ofcourse this is all up to you, and I can't say this idea hasn't been slightly touched upon before either.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:26   Link #7269
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Should I make Charlotte the only childhood friend? It would allow the two to get closer without any distractions.

Should I also take out the I.S machines and just make it into a rom-com?
So cliche it'll break reality....

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Old 2011-11-11, 09:28   Link #7270
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:30   Link #7271
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@ Zero - Different for every girl

Laura - Teacher her about romance.

Charlotte - Childhood friends that get closer as they grow up/Cliche storm.

Tatenashi - Closest friend and servant of the girl. Girl cock teases him on a daily basis.

Cecilia - Teaches her about more practical values and about caring about her family more than her wealth.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:33   Link #7272
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@ Zero - Different for every girl

Laura - Teacher her about romance.

Charlotte - Childhood friends that get closer as they grow up/Cliche storm.

Tatenashi - Closest friend and servant of the girl. Girl cock teases him on a daily basis.

Cecilia - Teaches her about more practical values and about caring about her family more than her wealth.
I mean, taking everyone else of equation = no variation & conflict = no plot = BORING. I'm glad you will make this similar to Daydream.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:34   Link #7273
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That's.... not what I meant but....
I'll avoid this topic completely then. I don't see anyone needing to give an explanation of how the IS core works in the foreseeable future (nor are they qualified, really).

Until someone gives me a better idea, I'll keep it vague.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:37   Link #7274
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I mean, taking everyone else of equation = no variation & conflict = no plot = BORING. I'm glad you will make this similar to Daydream.
It may be boring but it's what people like to read. Look at the reviews for Shadow compared to the fluff stories. Daydreams alone has more than double of it despite it being corny stroytelling from a guy who doesn't know anything about romance.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:45   Link #7275
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I see you can't stop coming here, it pulls you in, no?
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:47   Link #7276
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@ Eratas
Not my cup of tea then.

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Old 2011-11-11, 09:49   Link #7277
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I'll avoid this topic completely then. I don't see anyone needing to give an explanation of how the IS core works in the foreseeable future (nor are they qualified, really).

Until someone gives me a better idea, I'll keep it vague.
The IS core runs on pheromones. Since scantily clad ladies emit more pheromones, they are suited to be IS pilots.

Ichika is the odd one out because he unique. To be accurate, a genetically inoculated subject from White Helix Labs, which is in turn funded by AAPL Industries, to emit male pheromones. The name of the project is known as iChikan.
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:50   Link #7278
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Old 2011-11-11, 09:51   Link #7279
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Zero, was your review referring to when Tsurugi went Zengar on Inami?

Also, I posted a link to the sketch of the Proioxis several posts up. ^^
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