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Old 2011-11-18, 06:55   Link #8181
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KILL. THAT. BUNNY.

Post 8181 claimed!

EDIT: Forget it, all I did is killing your guys' creativity...
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Old 2011-11-18, 06:57   Link #8182
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@ Box - Too late! I'm making my own after Daydreams! Hmm~ German and french souffle with a side dish of the Sarashiki twins sandwich.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:05   Link #8183
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@ Box - Too late! I'm making my own after Daydreams! Hmm~ German and french souffle with a side dish of the Sarashiki twins sandwich.
Oh well, I guess I'll stick to the horror, tragedy, etc.

Unless you want me to write something like this again.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:07   Link #8184
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Oh well, I guess I'll stick to the horror, tragedy, etc.

Unless you want me to write something like this again.
For the love of God, what the?!
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:07   Link #8185
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@ Box - Truth be told, my Filipino isn't very good. I was raised to speak english so much that I actually gained an accent and people keep thinking I'm a foreigner. So I can't read your fic.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:12   Link #8186
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For the love of God, what the?!
Did you really think you'd seen the last of that?

And I understand your situation Eratas, I used to be like that and it's not easy to pick up when you're a bit older.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:13   Link #8187
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A fic that can make crack-addict Meister furious... it's like Pandora's box... or Box's box?
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:19   Link #8188
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Trust me, that's Omega-class crack.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:20   Link #8189
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About to post Yachi's fic re-write, can everybody please read and review?

Side note - Man, it's hard to re-write the fic when I don't know what's happening!
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:32   Link #8190
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I certainly will, but first I have to finish the prequel.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:35   Link #8191
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@ Everyone - Part of Yachi's fic re-write, hopefully it's better than the original. I added more detail and added/changed some additional dialogue.

Spoiler:
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:42   Link #8192
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@ Everyone - Part of Yachi's fic re-write, hopefully it's better than the original. I added more detail and added/changed some additional dialogue.

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*LOSS OF WORDS*

What's just happened again?!

That aside, I wonder if it's the difference in vocabulary but I just can't get any clue what happened. Something like....core? Ah screw it, sorry I can't give any useful comments.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:48   Link #8193
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*LOSS OF WORDS*

What's just happened again?!

That aside, I wonder if it's the difference in vocabulary but I just can't get any clue what happened. Something like....core? Ah screw it, sorry I can't give any useful comments.
Don't look at me! I don't know what's happening either! I just wanted to know if the re-write is okay (Compare it to Yachi's previous chapters on fanfic.net)
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:48   Link #8194
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how interesting, for I too am tending to a crack bunny.

However, I cant read tagalog...
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:52   Link #8195
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how interesting, for I too am tending to a crack bunny.

However, I cant read tagalog...
Crack bunny? *Loads shotgun* Where is it? I want to "pet" it.
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Old 2011-11-18, 07:53   Link #8196
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@Eras
Definitely better, but it lacked the drive and confusing.... I wonder if it's because you're having no idea about it at all.

What I knew is "Where Have you been" is much more detailed than this....I wonder if Yachi suddenly changed it. I advise you read it to get a clue, I currently reading chapter 3....
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Old 2011-11-18, 08:08   Link #8197
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@ Zero - Truth be told, I have no idea what's going on in that fic. I'm just replacing words like "Yammennes appeared" or "Aden said" with more detailed sentences and added some details of what the area looked like.

I'm just as confused as you are.
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Old 2011-11-18, 08:20   Link #8198
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@eratas: I'm not really angry or anything. On the opposite, I am well entertained. I enjoy a good verbal spar, as long as no foul words and no personal attacks are used. I actually learn a lot about the flaws of the AE as the forum continues to deconstruct it. Truth be told I made the dangerous gambit(read as suicidal foray) to write in the IS fandom without A) a proper design for the AE-001 Swordbreaker and B) a proper grasp of the girls' personalities.
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Old 2011-11-18, 08:22   Link #8199
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Plot bunny!

Spoiler for A new character appears!:
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Old 2011-11-18, 08:24   Link #8200
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@ Box - Remember the days when fics were about romance and gary stu male IS pilots? I wonder where those days went *Has a dreamy expression on his face*
I destroyed them, well, crushed several of them. xD
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