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Old 2011-11-19, 06:20   Link #8401
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@ Zero - Posted Irish's part after your last post. Please read and review before I change it later.

@ Box - Is the song sad or upbeat?
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:23   Link #8402
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@ Zero - Posted Irish's part after your last post. Please read and review before I change it later.

@ Box - Is the song sad or upbeat?
Which one?


Oh, and in case anyone missed it, here's my new one-shot.

BEHOLD

Reviews are ofcourse welcomed as always.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:25   Link #8403
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Left out in the cold as usual...
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:26   Link #8404
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@ Jak - How was I supossed to reply? I'm using a phone so I can't watch youtube.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:27   Link #8405
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Sacred Twins OST :3

OP1: Nami Tamaki -Re_Birth-

OP2: Nami Tamaki -Speedway-


As for ED, I think the original would be suffice.

@Eratas : Nice Interrogation scene...
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:27   Link #8406
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don't worry jak. At least you have a well accepted fanon.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:29   Link #8407
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@ Zero - Is that sarcasm? I can't tell since I can't hear your voice but the uh-oh face is kind of implying it.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:31   Link #8408
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^ I meant it's appropriately enough instead of narmtastic
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:31   Link #8409
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No no, Zero doesn't use for sarcasm, he uses it because that's what his face looks like, if he's being sarcastic he'll use .
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:33   Link #8410
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No no, Zero doesn't use for sarcasm, he uses it because that's what his face looks like, if he's being sarcastic he'll use .
Huh?! I thought it's mean for "You know what I mean"
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:35   Link #8411
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Huh?! I thought it's mean for "You know what I mean"
If you hover your mouse over it, it'll give you the meaning.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:36   Link #8412
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@ Zero - Think I should remove the intro scene at the end? Her ignoring the fact that Irish was being physically attacked might not sit well with readers.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:37   Link #8413
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If you hover your mouse over it, it'll give you the meaning.
My mistake then, I once thought = serious not mad, Blitz corrected me.

@ Eras: how about Tatenashi told him to stop and introduce herself?
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:41   Link #8414
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@ Zero - Thank you! I'll have to extend the scene to have Irish get beat up more though. Maybe have him struggle with Mactavish for the knife. Then she barges in and stops the fight.

Side note - The original scene was Tatenshi entering the room and Irish tries the same thing like he did with Mactavish. Ends about just as well as you'd expect.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:45   Link #8415
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^ Have Tatenashi told him it's against "Child Protection Act" and she blackmailed him for that. That's how Tatenashi rolls.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:48   Link #8416
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@ Zero - Cue Irish raging.

Irish: I'm not a kid!

Mactavish: See? He says so himself!

Tatenashi: Quiet please, the adults are talking here.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:48   Link #8417
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Cue me series of music:

Inami's theme: Innocent Days

Tsurugi's theme: Pure Feelings

Inami and Tsurugi love theme: With You

Jinrai's theme: The Univers

Athena Bouclier OP: Colors of the Heart

Athena Bouclier ED: Anata no Kaze ga Fuku Kara
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:49   Link #8418
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Mactavish is a jerkass isn't he, but either way he's boned because Tatenahsi has the footage....
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:55   Link #8419
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@ Zero - Not a jerkass. Just believes that terrorists are terrorists no matter their age. Besides, he was nice enough to keep Joshua alive in the first place. Irish doesn't help his case hy acting like a prick throughout the entire interrogation.

Though Tatenashi saying she has footage would be funny and make Irish wonder what the hell her deal is.
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Old 2011-11-19, 06:58   Link #8420
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Then he's an ignorant ass, not a jerk. At least he dedicated to his job.

And yes, that'll be one hell of mood whiplash.
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