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Old 2011-11-20, 05:28   Link #8561
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@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation.

He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:30   Link #8562
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@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation.

He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most.
Let's not forget that most of what he says is giving food commentary.
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Old 2011-11-20, 05:34   Link #8563
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To recap: His monologues tend to be long and have unnecessary comments while his talking is short and to the point.

EDIT - @ Meister - When will you write Vandam-tan? I'm waiting for the "Uruchai's"
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:15   Link #8564
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I need to finish Vandam I before even considering Vandam-tan.
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:18   Link #8565
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@ Meister - Won't you put it as an omake?
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:21   Link #8566
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The omake wouldn't make any sense if the audience doesn't know what I'm parodying.
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:28   Link #8567
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A character gets turnes into a chibi when an experiment goes wrong and proceeds to live on her friends head while constantly causing trouble along the way for everyone around her. Hilarity ensues.

What's there to get?
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:29   Link #8568
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Shana-tan, is that you?
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:45   Link #8569
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I think its funnier if the premise was that during the course of the events in Vandam I then Shooting St@r, Karon is replaced with Chibi Karon, and everyone else has their characterizations butchered.

I could make it a standalone, but that would only be a useless plot bunny.

And slow Box-kun is slow.
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:49   Link #8570
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A box does not move, grasshopper. :wisemanfacewhichwedon'thaveasanemoticonbutweshoul d:
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:50   Link #8571
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A box does not move, grasshopper. :wisemanfacewhichwedon'thaveasanemoticonbutweshoul d:
I am imagining a box with a Mameshiba face.
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Old 2011-11-20, 06:51   Link #8572
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@ Meister - The only difference is the fact that Karon isn't confined to her friends head and can move around since her Vandam shrunk with her In the omake I'm making, the three are basically stuck not only because they can't fly, but because of the way they act (Ichika's an idiot, Irish doesn't say anything and Kyuukai keeps reading weapon magazines). They'll have three dead chibi's by the end of the day if they don't keep a constant eye on them.
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Old 2011-11-20, 07:21   Link #8573
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@ Jak - Looks good Just make sure to limit the silverback's power levels. Also, you might want to change Tezla's dialogue to say that the Silverback isn't as strong as the IS or something to to that effect. Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS.
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Old 2011-11-20, 07:25   Link #8574
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As for an introduction.

Here's one of my supporting characters of the Blue Side.

Spoiler for C'rnadyne's Boss:


I wanted to do a sample script but heck i am trying to revive my FFN passion.
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Old 2011-11-20, 07:41   Link #8575
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Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS.
How does the Minerva fair for that matter?

Granted, it went down twice from situations that a genuine IS would see through with minimal issues but still, I wanna hear people's opinions about it.
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Old 2011-11-20, 08:10   Link #8576
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Old 2011-11-20, 08:52   Link #8577
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A character gets turnes into a chibi when an experiment goes wrong and proceeds to live on her friends head while constantly causing trouble along the way for everyone around her. Hilarity ensues.

What's there to get?
Chibi-Karon : *sniffs* Now I am small, everyone's chest is bigger than m- FINALLY SOMEONE WITH THE SAME SIZE AS MINE! *jumps on Riselle*

Riselle : OI! GET OFF ME! NO! Stop grabbing my......my chest!
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Old 2011-11-20, 09:14   Link #8578
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Old 2011-11-20, 10:00   Link #8579
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Chibi-Karon : *sniffs* Now I am small, everyone's chest is bigger than m- FINALLY SOMEONE WITH THE SAME SIZE AS MINE! *jumps on Riselle*

Riselle : OI! GET OFF ME! NO! Stop grabbing my......my chest!
@ Meister and Saintess - Karon's probably about the same size as Riselle's chest at her height Did Karon turn perverted when she went chibi or something?

@ Stratos - The only problem you had was already mentioned before: You took the canon cast's moment of glory with the Silverio Gospel. You already re-wrote the part so I'd say it's fixed.

You mentioned why this was the case before (The fact that Inami's already been involved in their affairs), that gives an in-story explanation. However, from a meta point of view, it makes Inami look like a spotlight stealing squad.

There's my two cents.
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Old 2011-11-20, 10:51   Link #8580
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