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Old 2011-11-22, 00:08   Link #8821
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@ Eratas: I'm asking permission to use that conversation. (Berates himself for not thinking of it sooner*)
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:13   Link #8822
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@ Rain - Permission granted It's not very detailed since I used my phone to type it and I had to rush since it was running out of battery.

Question: Does Kyuukai ever act jealous? Need to change the date peepers segment to reflect this.
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:16   Link #8823
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@ Eratas Yes. Whenever Irish is with Laura.

Can I have your opinion on this scene? It's another good draft, and it's the one involving Charlotte.

Spoiler for Charlotte's Scene:
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:37   Link #8824
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It looks good, although it's not that long. It's to expected since it's 1st person POV. The chip thing was funny.

Here's a random one from the date peepers.

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Please tell me what you think.
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:42   Link #8825
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@ Eratas: I'm betting the result will be Kyuukai either fainting on the spot or tripping over himself to find out what's going on or get a better look.

Reminds me of this scene:

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You've read the story, so you know they're not doing that.
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:45   Link #8826
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It looks good, although it's not that long. It's to expected since it's 1st person POV. The chip thing was funny.

Here's a random one from the date peepers.

Spoiler:


Please tell me what you think.
Someone kill me now, I got a stomach cramp laughing MY FUCKING ASS OFF!!

@ Rain

That's definitely a massage.
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:48   Link #8827
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@ Rain and Zero - He's just helping her put on some pants. The zipper was too big and it couldn't fit but he kept trying to push it in which made Laura say she was hurt.

As for the behind, well......take a guess.

Kyuukai probably wants revenge but dating Tatenashi won't work, Irish doesn't excrete any jelly due to his innocent outlook on relationships.
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:50   Link #8828
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Of course, something that had a zipper in the back (maybe a skirt? corset?)

EDIT: Considering their LACK of nudity taboo, bra is not farfetched either...
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:54   Link #8829
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Nope, he's doing her from behi- *Killed by Kyuukai in a frenzy*

Just kidding, yup it was a skirt. She has a hard time putting it on and he's helping. (If you're wondering. Yes, he saw her in nothing but underwear. Neither of them care though.)
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Old 2011-11-22, 00:56   Link #8830
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Just as Planned-I mean as expected.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:01   Link #8831
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It's not like she hasn't seen him in the buff before either. Both of them get trapped in a steam room together (Spa filler chapter) and they had to take their clothes off since it stuck to their body. Neither particularly cared due to the way they were raised and the fact that both of them look somewhat androgynous.

Of course, the gang opens the door and sees both of them nude while they were panting (Due to heat) so it made a rumor.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:02   Link #8832
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@ Eratas: ... All I can do...

Kyuukai: What the f*ck do you mean that's all you can do! My love interest is being molested by a snarky SOB with bleached hair- SHOT*

Stay behind the fourth wall!
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:07   Link #8833
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@ Rain - Don't worry, he's not interested in her. If you notice, Irish acts somewhat like a genderbent Laura so their relationship is strictly platonic. The way they tend to stay close to each other somewhat unnerves their respective LI's though.

Their backgrounds and attitudes are too similar and they're the most chaste among the main cast. Changing clothes in the same room is no matter to them since they were raised by an all male/all female group.

His hair isn't bleached though. His natural hair color is black, it turned with due to the stress from using the skull suit.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:18   Link #8834
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Simply because I'm bored and envious....

Spoiler for LOL:


HoYay to the Max?
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:21   Link #8835
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@ Zero - Envious of what, exactly?

Anyway, it's pretty funny but not really ho-yay since this is Charles we're talking about here. No one considers Hideyoshi moments ho-yay so neither is this.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:24   Link #8836
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Everyone produced drafts so fast, and some already updated. Meanwhile, i'm dumbstruck here...

Anyway, It's HoYay, since Charles admit he'll fell for Ichika if not for Laura.... However it's not really HoYay either, Charles is...ahem, incomplete at the time....
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:28   Link #8837
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@ Zero - I just made that date peepers draft so it's not like I had it for a while. Besides, I haven't updated my stories either.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:32   Link #8838
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Currently having an Idea for another non-I.S. fic, but afraid due to flammable nature of the fandom
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:33   Link #8839
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@ Zero - What do you mean non-IS? As in, just the cast and not the machines? Daydreams is like that and it seems to get along well enough.
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Old 2011-11-22, 01:36   Link #8840
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I mean not fully Infinite Stratos, I plan to rewrite either

1. Warhammer Trouble 40000
2. To-love-Ru Stratos

It's easier for me to write the first due to the real-robot syndrome. But as you known W40K Fandom is flammable, one wrong step and it's over.
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