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Old 2011-07-20, 04:07   Link #881
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MY Reply preserverd by my word of mouth

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*comes out of warp*



WTF did i just read...

this will warrant some nukes.



you seem to have forgotten something, go check some of my pasts posts as well as your char indexes.

*warps away to another sector in the meantime*

that`s the alternate dimension i`m talking about..2 male pilots only

the "no male pilots" dimension will be posted here too and it will be the prequel of "alternate dimension". The prequel covers everything about the Infinite Stratos: White Knight Incident, Creation of Infinite Stratos, etc.

The second " no male pilots" dimension is about the graduate
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Old 2011-07-20, 04:39   Link #882
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*comes out of warp*



WTF did i just read...

this will warrant some nukes.



you seem to have forgotten something, go check some of my pasts posts as well as your char indexes.

*warps away to another sector in the meantime*
best damn story ever tol
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Old 2011-07-20, 05:39   Link #883
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best damn story ever tol
You mean the "Alamat ng IS: Infinite Stratos"
I read that in ff.net

Here`s my ff.net account
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Old 2011-07-21, 07:45   Link #884
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so...how's the challenge coming along for you guys
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Old 2011-07-21, 08:41   Link #885
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STill on-going The one I`m writing now is a Tragedy-type

I`m going to make a epic ending for that fanfiction w/out any OCs interfering
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Old 2011-07-21, 09:59   Link #886
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*buried under pile of assignments*

Maybe Sunday...
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Old 2011-07-22, 02:28   Link #887
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*buried under pile of assignments*

Maybe Sunday...
same here, but sloooowly making progress
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Old 2011-07-23, 01:15   Link #888
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Now, in response to Wavehawk's challenge:

RED and BLUE

yeah, it's rough, it's amateurish, and really messy, but I found that challenge a bit harder than I probably should.

Still, I'm okay with the way it turned out.

(It's not good enough to be on FF.net though, so I won't upload it there.)

and if you're wondering...yes, I am called the Blue Flash
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Old 2011-07-23, 06:57   Link #889
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I`m making progress now..though still in ALPHA.It`ll be release in 5 months
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:16   Link #890
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@Box: not bad, could use a clean-up, though, and some additional detail. I know you're trying to use the same format as the original light novels, but it's a bit jarring.

Still working on mine. Even though I put out the challenge, trying to make it unique and believable at the same time is taking some doing.

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Silent moonlight was raining on the surface of the water. It isn't what I expected.

In the cold dry night of the desert, I saw the girl standing armored and tall in the quiet, lonely dark. Her machine was silent in its stance, but the maiden's heart within her trembled like the turbulent oceans.

She turned to me with those questioning eyes, a hint of soft gentility clad in her cloak of beautiful steel.

"I wish I had met you sooner," she replied, the girl-woman hiding both her smile and tears under a tone of familiarity.

Looking at her I could only ask myself...how did it come to this?
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:19   Link #891
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^ so much better than mine
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:28   Link #892
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I was actually inspired (by all things) Thane from Mass Effect 2. I liked the way he expressed his memories, and thought I'd try and replicate the same stle for that--but that's only an intro. The story proper will have both those moments and regular prose.
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:33   Link #893
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^^ Oh great I have to change my way of writing..I`ll make it like descriptive
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:41   Link #894
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It's not wrong to be less descriptive, it's just that we're writing in english--and most light novels are in japanese that are directly translated. It feels different.

That's my take, anyway. I always try to write the same way you would expect a novel (neglish language) would turn out.
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Old 2011-07-23, 08:48   Link #895
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I`ll try out the light novel-style writing then
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Old 2011-07-23, 09:09   Link #896
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could you guys give feedback on the one i did?

i can't help but feel something just isn't right about it

feedback could help me improve, as you can see, i'm more of a detective than a writer
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Old 2011-07-23, 09:27   Link #897
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I just gave you my quick feedback. I'm not going to read too much into it just yet.

One thing I can say is that if you watch anime but don't read a lot of REAL books, you'll never be able to make it as a writer.
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Old 2011-07-23, 09:38   Link #898
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I just gave you my quick feedback. I'm not going to read too much into it just yet.

One thing I can say is that if you watch anime but don't read a lot of REAL books, you'll never be able to make it as a writer.
right, can't say i've read too many of those, sure, there's the mountain of comics in soft-copy format

and some ghost-story books, so i kinda get where you're coming from with that
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Old 2011-07-23, 09:45   Link #899
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*facepalms*

Some authors whose books you guys MUST read:
- Anything by Terry Pratchett. Evn if you don't like comedy, he has a talent for using words to make a point. PERIOD.
- For military fiction: Stephen Coonts and Harold Coyle. Like Tom Clancy, but their characters are actually more human and fleshed out.
- The Snow Queen by Joan D Vinge. Am not finished with it yet, but love this--women writers seem to have a really different take on fiction than men do, especially with Science Fiction.
- Ice Station by Matthew Riley - Fellow Aussie Matt isn't really a good story writer per se, but he has a VERY good way of putting Hollywood action-movie moments in his novels.
- Classics like books by Charles Dickens.
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Old 2011-07-23, 10:07   Link #900
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^ you see, i'm much younger than you imagine me to be
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