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Old 2011-09-02, 22:14   Link #1041
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Yeah, in the IS novels, the transition isn't from 1st to 1st, only Ichika is given 1st, the others get a narrator when Ichika's not around.
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Old 2011-09-03, 09:03   Link #1042
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.......wait, oh yes...it's mostly Ichika.

Hmm.... might experiment with my Orimu-cest then...

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A/N: Speaking of which, Box and Wavehawk, is it fine if I have you two as cameo in my fic??? Y'now, Ninja baker and stuff....
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Old 2011-09-03, 10:00   Link #1043
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I sense the force to be strong within you, go forth!

You don't need my permission at least, young padawans must train and improve in any which way they can.

Btw, we haven't seen Kamen Rider around these parts recently.

Good, now I can easily take over the IS sub-forum, WEHEHEHEHE~!!!

Just as planned.
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Old 2011-09-03, 21:22   Link #1044
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I sense the force to be strong within you, go forth!

You don't need my permission at least, young padawans must train and improve in any which way they can.

Btw, we haven't seen Kamen Rider around these parts recently.

Good, now I can easily take over the IS sub-forum, WEHEHEHEHE~!!!

Just as planned.
Here's sample of the cameo

Spoiler for Because it's not awesome enough:


You know, I broke my jaw punching myself when I write this. In my imagination, Hawk is more like Caruso in CSI Miami while Box is...er...James Bond?
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Old 2011-09-03, 22:13   Link #1045
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Oh God, that last part.
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Old 2011-09-03, 23:38   Link #1046
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Uhm, hate to burst your bubble, but I'm not that badass. Remember my "Agent" is more like the office delivery guy, only older? Definitely nowhere near as cool as those guys on CSI. -_-;;;

And to be honest, Sam Fisher/Solid Snake action is what I'd like to be doing, but in reality...
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Old 2011-09-04, 00:20   Link #1047
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Uhm, hate to burst your bubble, but I'm not that badass. Remember my "Agent" is more like the office delivery guy, only older? -_-;;;
Hmm, well, since my story (To-Love-Ru STRATOS) is rather obscure here's the explanation (especially for ya Hawk).

> A Fictional country named "Deviluke" open themselves to Australia about a year prior to the story.

> At the same time, Jade Metal Lyman (Australia) and Shanghai Steel (Chinese) also create a Joint Operation of IS Development (although more like Australian guided by Chinese), 'Outback Screamer' and 'Jia Long' born from that Joint Development. Those Corporations are borrowed from Front Mission.

> There's a gap of one month between Chapter 4 and 5 (I'll fix it), LingYin visit Australia, and the self-fulfilling challenge story you write currently happens during that time. There's a trope for that: Took A Level in BadAss

> Due to the [Classified information], Agent Hawk has been promoted, ironically, his first job is escorting Australian first IS pilot...which is a Male, to China.

> Len, the pilot, is a Childhood friend of Lala, Princess of Deviluke, who smuggling herself to Japan, in a grand search for her mother. For convenience, Len was sent to retrieve her discreetly, which of course, dragging Hawk in the mess

> The chaotic situation happened in chapter 7 and 8 allowed Len and Hawk to slip out after convincing Lala, Hawk met Ling once again shortly before he escape.

> and the twist in chapter 9 (TAAAAABBAAAAAAAAAAAANNEEEE!!!!!) made the plot stir further, once again, Hawk is Len's official 'bodyguard' every time he went to foreign countries. Bodyguard in this sense refer to a party escort of sort, not the one that fighting assassin etc. and by mean of Caruso, I mean the portrayal hehe. Yes, a cool, awesome delivery man.

> The cameo samples happened in future, unspecified chapter which also as Combat Bakers (from Box's Infinite Stratos Kamizame) made their move...as even Box emphasize that in face of Large Organizations as a whole, Hawk is still 'an Amateur Security Agent'. But hey! Since when IS talk about large organization unless necessary to the plot? They always talked about specific individuals...
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Old 2011-09-04, 00:27   Link #1048
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Uhm, hate to burst your bubble, but I'm not that badass. Remember my "Agent" is more like the office delivery guy, only older? Definitely nowhere near as cool as those guys on CSI. -_-;;;

And to be honest, Sam Fisher/Solid Snake action is what I'd like to be doing, but in reality...
Snake? Hawk?

I see what you did there.
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Old 2011-09-04, 01:45   Link #1049
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BTW, here's summary of my original ISes which will appear in the future chapters, some of the pilots has yet to be decided.

Spoiler for how unoriginal:


Well, that is.
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Old 2011-09-04, 01:59   Link #1050
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> Due to the [Classified information], Agent Hawk has been promoted, ironically, his first job is escorting Australian first IS pilot...which is a Male, to China.
- <PARANOID>WHATWHATWHAT--have you been reading my notes by hacking somehow?!?? </PARANOID>


...and just my luck, me harping over Australia's 'good relations' with China, and THIS HAPPENS:
http://www.gloucesteradvocate.com.au...c/2278574.aspx
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I can't help but think that after becoming so powerful, China's becoming a lot like America, just a bully.
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...and just my luck, me harping over Australia's 'good relations' with China, and THIS HAPPENS:
http://www.gloucesteradvocate.com.au...c/2278574.aspx

WAIT WHAT THE FUCK!

It's okay,it's okay....damn, at least its set in 2016...YAY ALTERNATE UNVERSHAAA!!!

*Cough*Huffman wars*cough*

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I can't help but think that after becoming so powerful, China's becoming a lot like America, just a bully.
And why is not the correct question either...
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Old 2011-09-04, 05:02   Link #1053
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/me drops Kamen Riders on Zero.

Now, count up your sins!
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Whoa okay... Perhaps I'll post the "preview" of my fanfic later.

Anyway, thanks for the advice guys.
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Old 2011-09-04, 05:27   Link #1055
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ZeroXSEED : "Ichika, I...I have a confession.
Ichika: "NO! ZERO! Save your strength, the hospital is close!"
ZeroXSEED: "I.....I ship you with your sister-"
Ichika fired Setsura and obliterated the dying body.
Ichika: "Bear the sin of loving my sister, I'll live up to your expectation, Zero.
Spoiler for What could possibly go wrong?:


ZeroXSEED: (from the Incest Hell & Heaven) "Bear the sin and love your sister, congratulations, Ichika" (Clapped hands)
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Old 2011-09-04, 06:41   Link #1056
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...you people are going to hate me after this...

Yes, it has been a hard few weeks trying to write, especially with the stress of a new job and a new idiot neighbor.

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The building was historically the Center for Automotive Excellence, and was originally meant to test and refine cars. After the advent of the Infinite Stratos, it became the only facility in Australia that could test IS metallurgy and construction that was open to the public. Technically, we had a few other facilities that could do this, but they were property of our military, and thus too secure to allow a foreign national IS representative to set foot in. Since Australia had only one IS, our army was always looking for unique ways to counteract enemy IS attack if we--whoops, you didn't hear that from me...

Linyin seemed docile enough when she summoned her IS <Shenlong> for the metallurgy tests. I'm not a tech genius, but apparently what they were currently testing was how 3rd generation IS armor fared after data decompression. Apparently, the physical aspects of an IS can be turned into pure data and stored in that form as Quantum Nonohon-no-bits--or was that Quagmire Nanobits? Anyway, something to that effect. As I said, I'm not a genius so it's all greek geek to me.

"This is stupid," Linyin complained as the laser depth scanners traced the outer shell of her armored suit, a process that required her to stay completely still. "Couldn't they just send <Shenlong's> specs from my country to your country?"

"I'd say it's a matter of trust," I replied, strongly resisting the urge to poke fun at her. Remembering that her IS could flatten my skull within six picoseconds helps, really. "China trusts Australia enough to do it's own studies on your IS."

"Or maybe Australia doesn't trust China to send over correct data?" Linyin skeptically refuted.

"Don't so cynical," I answered, but she actually had a valid point. China is chummy with us, but not THAT chummy. Still, like hell I'm stepping into that potential political landmine.

The analyst at the laser control gave a thumbs-up signalling the end of the armor depth testing. That study would eventually backflow into the Australian knowledge base on IS design and construction. One of the reason Australia's IS <Outback Screamer> is often termed a 2.75 Generation IS is because it has features and capabilities close to the newer 3rd-Generation designs like <Shenlong>, but not quite.

It's sort of like comparing an upgraded computer with a brand new one--they can probably perform the same things, but the upgraded one is a product of trial and error, and has lots of extra parts hanging off it, while the new computer is more streamlined. I guess you could look at Australia and China's IS designs in that way. The Frennch Rafale Revive series technically count as 2.25 generation IS by comparison, and a custom version would be about the same as <Outback Screamer>'s 2.75 generation in terms of specs.

No, I didn't make this up. Sam already went through this process while strongly reminding me that if I messed up and Linyin wanted to kill me, there was no way that <Outback Screamer> would be able to protect me from the consequences, even if it was right next to me.

"What's next?" I turned to the tech as I walked toward the <Shenlong>.

"Weapons testing," the scruffy tech explained as his comrades put away their testing gear. <Shenlong> did not walk, but floated almost daintily toward the area the techs were indicating. "We need to test out how those Impact Cannons work."

"There's a firing range here?" Taking a step back, I was a bit worried. True, the Center was vast. But it was an Automotive research institute first and an IS testing institute second. Why they hell did it have a weapons range? "Where is it?"

"Your bloody arse is standing on it."

I meekly tiptoed off the grid and behind the testing console. Wait, is that twin-tailed devil snickering at me AGAIN?!?

"I'm perfectly happy to blast an annoying old man if he wants to."

Cocky and confident and annoying. Gah, I'm actually getting used to that shrill little voice.

There was a click as walls were raised from the floor. A side-effect of IS technology was that a lot of applications later became commonplace. Onesuch was the shield systems, a lot like science-fiction force fields. They were used to repell impacts from high-velocity objects. Since they took a huge amount of power fields couldn't be used on vehicles other than IS, but facilities could generate low-level versions of it.

In this case, the 'walls' that came up to close off the firing range were little more than aluminum and steel shutters. However, they generated a low-level field like the <Shenlong>'s own shields. Basically, an invisible barrier to keep fragments from injuring anyone else in the center.

Despite risking being a target myself, I couldn't help myself. "Could you make sure you hit what you're aiming at?"

There was a giggle. "Are you afraid I'd kill you by accident?"

"Not really. It's just that my blood tends to leave a hard to clean big ugly stain on shiny surfaces. Like this center," I kept a straight face saying this. "One that your government will make you clean up."

Oh, that got her. The utterly perplexed what-the-hell-I-don't-know-how-to-answer-that look on her face was worth it.

"Targets up."

The pop-up targets appeared.

I was expecting to hear a powerful blast. Instead, I almost heard a squeak out of Linyin's voice. A very unexpected squeak.

"...kangaroos?

There was a long, awkward silence. The techs, scruffy and manly and bogan as can be, looked...a bit nervous. Ah hell, someone's got to put his foot down.

"...you want me to kill those kangaroos?"

"They're less than a meter tall, so they're Wallabies."

"That's not the problem!!" Linyin looked straight at me with--is that utter dread? From the twin-tailed devil? "You want me to use the Impact Cannon on kanga--wallabies?"

"Yes." I answered, flatly.

You see, I swear she's just doing this cute girly won't-hurt-a-fly routine on purpose to win sympathy points. Probably so we can cut the testing short and she can run anuck somewhere. I should know, I've had more than one girl pull that trick on me before.

Actually, now that I have a few seconds to think about it, I realize that most people worldwide think of those bloody Roos and Wallabies as cute critters that have babies in their pouches and hop aroudn being cute and neighborly in this oddball land called Australia. That is FAR from the truth. Think about this: Kangaroos and wallabies are common in Australia. VERY common, in fact.

Like rabbits, only bigger and meaner.

They also tend to eat more than rabbits, so when a herd of kangaroos visits a farm out in the ouback--well, there's going to be some very angry farmers. There are seasons when hunting kangaroo is legal, in order to cut down the population to a manageable size. No, we don't hunt them all down, but there's got to be something done. They're not an endagered species by any definition of the word--well, some specific breeds of Roo are, but that's not my point.

Think about it, culling the population of roos and wallabies should be no more disturbing than hunting down an overpopulation of wild dogs or cats.

And since the Automotive Centre of Excellence is a civilian centre and not a military one, obviously they wouldn't be putting up targets of human beings. So wallabies it is.

Linyin repeated: "Kangaroos?"

"Wallabies." I repeated back. This is getting really Awkwaaaard~~~~ "Just shoot them already."

Next to me, the scruffy tech's eyes went wide, but I glared back at him.
I know what I'm doing, dammit.

"But they're..."

"What? Cute?" I scoffed at her. "An adult kangaroo's kick can disembowel a grown man. You try equating that with cute."

The scruffy tech next to me mouthed: 'are you bloody serious?'

"She's an IS Representative Candidate. This is a hell of a time to play squeamish." I whispered back at him.

"You said they were wallabies!" Lin was still hesitant--is she actually freaking out?

I was starting to lose my temper. Oh no wait, I already lost my temper on the drive down from the airport. I'm actually feeling suicidal because this girl who's capable of such meanness and mass destruction is balking at the thought of vaporizing cardboard cutouts of wallabies.

BLOODY FREAKING WALLABIES.

Glaring back at Linyin, I crossed my arms. "Represenative Candidate, why do you think your country asked you to perform target testing here?"

The mention of 'Representative Candidate' seemed to shake her resolve even more. "That's a mean thing to say to a girl."

Ten...nine...eight...seven...

"You know it's not even a real wallaby. What's the problem?"

Linyin was silent, but I didn't know whether she was going to own up.

The scruffy tech was tapping my shoulder. "Uhm, if she doesn't want to do it we can change those targets into plain old bullseyes."

Too bad I wasn't having any of it.

"So you're telling me you can't shoot a paper target," I was growling, teeth grinding, and starting to feel the onset of ulcers in my gut. "But you don't have a problem trying to chop someone's head off?"

"As if I'd do that!" She screamed at me, shrilly. <Shenlong> turned away from the targets straigh at me. Meaning that I was dead in the Impact Cannon's sights.

"Isn't that what you do in an IS battle?" Uh-oh. I was angry. And when I'm angry I start saying stupid things. Stupid things that normally get my guts beaten out of by whoever I say them to. But I can't help NOT saying those things to people who tick me off.

Besides, I tend to beat the other guy's guts out, too. Wait, why am I talking about this?

Linyin's face was red as beetroot. "It's not the same thing!"

I kept my face cold. "You're being hypocritical for a little kid."

"HAVE YOU LOST THE PLOT, MATE?!?" The tech looked about to wet his pants. Actually, was that the <Shenlong>'s Impact Cannons starting up?

"Tell me the truth, then." Here it comes, my pride before common sense and survival. "Tell me you haven't SERIOUSLY considered killing your classmate Ichika Orimura for real.

Oh hell. I said it.

GAVOOMPH.

The techs were screaming all over the floor. I wasn't budged, though. The shielding across the walls held. As the smoke cleared, I was expecting Linyin to have bolted clear across the planet.

She hadn't.

<Shenlong> was still standing there, it's staring at me with tearful, sobbing child's eyes.

Wait. Tearful?

"Mean old man." Linyin sobbed, just like a child. "You mean, MEAN old man!"

<Shenlong> then bolted out the Centre's door, even as the techs were screaming still. Some of them were on their phone--not to the police, as I heard one of them screaming for his mother.

Oddly, I felt ridiculously calm, even as I saw the IS tear straight into the Melbourne skyline. For some strange reason, what I was thinking of was whether I was now officially fired from ASIO.

My mobile phone rung. It was Sam's number.

Oboy, here it comes. I hit 'recieve' on my mobile phone.

"~~~WHAT THE HELL DID YOU TELL HER, Y'DUMB GALLARD?"

-------------------------

Good news: The Chinese government haven't heard about what just happened in Melbourne and ASIO is going to keep it that way.

Bad news: Sam has been very descriptive about what he plans to do to my head, my lungs, my brains, and other vital parts of my body if I do not un-frack this situation and fast.

Specifically: his words were "Why was I COLOSSALLY STUPID enough to leave this all to YOU?! Why? WHYYY?!?"

That basically boils down to me finding Linyin and bringing her back--in Sam's own words HAPPY!--before she goes and destroys something of interest, which right now could be anything.

<Shenlong> wasn't exactly designed for supersonic long-range flight, but it's still liable to get pretty far. If she's decided to head south toward Tasmania, it could be trouble, since I didn't relish crossing the ocean to go after her.

North would be another issue entirely. That's a lot of desert to be searching through.

You're wondering why I haven't just bothered to check with the ASIO abotu a satellite view? Well, a few things: An IS can jam surveillance if it wanted to. We never got to check if <Shenlong> had that ability before I sent Linyin off crying. Second: If ASIO could see <Shenlong> flying around, then so woudl the Chinese--meaning they knew what happened and we were all in deep pudding poo.

Third: Considering how mad Sam was--and it didn't help that his Ex-Wife apparently slapped another injunction order on him just this morning--I don't think I would have gotten much help. Once he calms down he'll probably offer the help assuming the first two cases I mentioned above weren't a problem. But right now, he just wants to strangle me to death.

...I'd better find that girl, and fast.

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OMG, the Old Man snapped....

Well, no sympathy for Ling, just kidding, POOR LINGYIN! SOMEONE CHEER HER QUICK!!

That ought to teach her a lesson thought...still....
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AND THUS ZERO ANNOUNCED!!!!



-IS- Infinite Stratos: Sacred Twins

Spoiler for First Part Twincest:


I made Madoka brash and temperament, but acting cool outside, all the way, like...Mini-Chifuyu. But she could be herself in front of Ichika or Chifuyu, and probably the rest of Harem... if they could be closer with her of course...

Oh and yes, in her monologue, she always call him 'Ichika-nii' but in conversation she did not add honorifics, talk about pride...
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Dang man, did this have something to do with Light Novels? I'm still reading them on Baka-Tsuki, waiting for Vol. 4,5 and 7 to be translated.
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