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Old 2011-12-03, 02:51   Link #11061
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@ Senpai and Rain - Like this? Just their dialogue.

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Any Suggestions?
THIS I APPROVE, but please no limb cutting, instead, STAB THE HAND. MWUAHAHA (You know, for a scientist their hand is the most precious after their brain and eyes)
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Old 2011-12-03, 02:52   Link #11062
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too much boob in shootin star? Wut?

B then... >.>
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Old 2011-12-03, 02:56   Link #11063
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@ Eratas: I've got to go now. See you guys in the morning!

Please post a response though, I can probably read it and/or reply before sleeping.
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Old 2011-12-03, 02:58   Link #11064
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@ Meistah - B's more reasonable Just make her higher as she ages.

@ Senpai and Rain - Then comes his sisters THAT will be significantly harder to write since they spent a lot of the story fighting each other and at one point they almost rape him when they didn't know their relation (Being raised by PT isn't healthy).

The original plan during first concept was for him to kill one of them but the other one nearly kills him in retaliation. What do you think I should write?
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Old 2011-12-03, 03:06   Link #11065
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@ Meistah - B's more reasonable Just make her higher as she ages.


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@ Senpai and Rain - Then comes his sisters THAT will be significantly harder to write since they spent a lot of the story fighting each other and at one point they almost rape him when they didn't know their relation (Being raised by PT isn't healthy).

The original plan during first concept was for him to kill one of them but the other one nearly kills him in retaliation. What do you think I should write?
Make Irish ALMOST kill her, and she surrendered in response. The other sister tried to kill him from behind but stopped by someone.

Even more tragic if one is killed by other guys (probably from Fracture) and the other commit suicide BY PULLED IRISH' HAND TO STAB HER, but that's too dark even for a finale, and no one can support her mother then... XD

See you guys alter, I'll post To_Love Ru Stratos draft when I log in again.
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Old 2011-12-03, 03:25   Link #11066
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What is the White Roseloss that was mentioned in V4? Is it some kind of vehicle or something?

I think I might've missed it somewhere...
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Old 2011-12-03, 03:30   Link #11067
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Alicia Worwood, probably the weirdest OC I've made yet.

Spoiler for Alicia Wortwood:


^profile above is subject to change or scrapping. Criticize and deconstruct to your heart's content^

EDIT: Sorry about the wall o' text era. Still working on it.

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Old 2011-12-03, 03:45   Link #11068
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@ demino_hellsin - Can you please shorten it to the more important parts? It's hard to read walls of texts.
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Old 2011-12-03, 05:27   Link #11069
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Just a little something...

Spoiler for Flashback:


Not much, but better than nothing.
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Seems more like an epilogue to me.
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Ditto.
It's them talking about their "original" future plans after being Thunder Crash, before "that" occured.
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Old 2011-12-03, 05:37   Link #11070
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@ Jak - Eh? Then why didn't they follow through with their plans? Either way their group was disbanded and they had nothing left for them.
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Old 2011-12-03, 05:57   Link #11071
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I can't seem to cut the character profile any shorter...
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:01   Link #11072
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And just for fun, reposting my first post here, so, how is it?


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just putting this guy out there, first time doing this, my fan-made character which i, spending countless hours lying in bed and standing around in the bathroom, much to the dismay of myself and my roommate, decided to make

well, hope it's interesting

Spoiler for my (possibly AU-ish character):
I'm surprised at how polite I sounded back then, WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH ME!!??

It's a good thing I never used this character in an actual fic.
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:08   Link #11073
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@Detective: I'm actually trying to read it completely but as of right now my mindset of waking freshly from a nap is not very pleasant. However I understand one thing about this character profile. "This is a character who may or may not be a overpowered. It's for him to know and you to find out."

*brain ache*

I always believed naps were supposed to refresh the mind... and yet I feel completely tired...
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:10   Link #11074
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Yeah, I'm not sure what I was trying to get at back then, reading it now is really...weird.

That was way back in page 36.
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:12   Link #11075
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I think anyone would feel that way... I still have the stuff I wrote up in my second year of highschool and the naruto fic I wrote in my 1st year of highschool is still up. I don't recognize any of it o.o
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:13   Link #11076
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Finished Daydreams Chapter 5!
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:14   Link #11077
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gratz era-era
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:39   Link #11078
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Noice, Eras!
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:42   Link #11079
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@ Stratos - Any questions or anything you need?
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Old 2011-12-03, 06:47   Link #11080
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@ Stratos - Any questions or anything you need?
I initially asked about the White Roseloss... but then I found out shortly after that it's a car.

Then there's also the completed Chapter 1. Thinking of publishing the story now...
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