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Old 2011-12-06, 04:31   Link #11461
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where did this Amagami-level weird kisses come from again? I'd say weirder the better, like Amagami, so... Back of her knee!

and guys aren't we forgetting that Class 1-2 is doing an Oriental Cafe for the festival? Have Everyone in chinese dress, even Irish!!!!
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:33   Link #11462
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Not sure about Stratos, but I think Rain will think it's good. Still, a badass old man is new and refreshing which is good enough for me.
Well, you're going to have to remember that he's going to be a "support" character if I add him.
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:34   Link #11463
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@ Meistah - Back of the knee? How would he pull that off? Unless he trips her and kisses her there on purpose, I doubt he could say it was an accident at all.

Asked a question in the last post of the previous page.

@ Jak - No problem. Besides, having a high ranking officer who's 61 tanking with the mains too much is going to look retarded if he does it all the time. Better to limit it.
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:35   Link #11464
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@ Senpai - Kyuukai doesn't exist here so I'll replace him with Maximillian and Charlotte is still placed on the suit due to her stint as Charles. Most likely he'll still end up being on the maid outfit since this is Dying!Irish and his physical features start to match the pic I posted a while ago.
Whoa, then have the 'chef' not a guy or Charles, the cafe would be small but VERY crowded due to everyone wanted to be 'served' XD. Each buttler warrants different fetish reaction (that somewhat OOC, then again it's all act...) such as Gentleman!Ichika, Shota!Charles, or Tsundere!Max.

(Just have Dan dragged by Ichika, if he's present anyway, make him Shyguy!Dan)

Yes, this is inspired by Ouran Host Club...

EDIT: AWWW, guess we'll have to go with oriental cafe...

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Okay, do I have them kiss on the fireworks scene or bonfire?
My mind is filled with steamy Ikaron Image, so yes, the Bonfire as background. At first, Irish will assume it's "anywhere but lips" again, but then Karon wil correct him aaand... uh, excuse me....

*NOSEBLEED*

(and then everyone freaked out that Karon get more hickeys )
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:44   Link #11465
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@ Senpai - Doesn't the Shota label go to Irish? That is, unless he cross dresses which makes it moot. Anyway, I'll include Dan in and have him serve Utsuho and Honne

Then how exactly does the kiss start? I planned for it to be something a bit like this. Dialogue only.

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Any tips or suggestions?
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:45   Link #11466
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What is this that I dont

She'd notice the hicky though, in fact, the whole act of Irish kissing her anywhere should make her blush terribly. If he's fast like acting on instinct, Karon wouldnt have stopped him until mid-act.
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:48   Link #11467
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@ Meistah - Made a post above that shows how the final kiss is started. Does it look OOC?

Anyway, I thought Karon was chaste? Why would she blush about it since it's part of the play? Irish even says he's just playing along so they can finish.
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Old 2011-12-06, 04:51   Link #11468
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@ Senpai - Doesn't the Shota label go to Irish? That is, unless he cross dresses which makes it moot. Anyway, I'll include Dan in and have him serve Utsuho and Honne
As I said, it's an act, of all people minush Irish, Charles is the closest thing to a Shota. It's Pandering to the fetish.

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Then how exactly does the kiss start? I planned for it to be something a bit like this. Dialogue only.

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Any tips or suggestions?
No, this is incredible.

*NOSEBLEED*
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:02   Link #11469
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@ Box - How's that case coming along?

@ Senpai - So the butler cafe actually ends up making more than all the other classes despite being the smallest shop The power of Bishie's and Shota's is amazing....

@ Meistah and Senpai - Small continuation.

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Is it okay?
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:05   Link #11470
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Last day of exams tomorrow, I'll be working on it after that.


Mobile Sandwich: Detective Ichika
-coming soon-
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:07   Link #11471
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The difference is setting! I thot I was an accident or something.

If it were as that short you wrote, its PERFECT.

But she'd still be blushing (in a good way) in private later, as its still her first kiss. Unless she was Ichika, then there'd be no afterthought. She's chaste, but she's not Ichika. And that's another reason it'll have an effect on her even if not immediately.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:07   Link #11472
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@ Box - Why don't you let Ichika actually get any? I'm doing it in the revised daydreams drafts later.

@ Meistah - I posted a small (dialogue only) scene that leads up to the kiss. Is it okay and Karon isn't too OOC right?
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:09   Link #11473
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@ Box - How's that case coming along?

@ Senpai - So the butler cafe actually ends up making more than all the other classes despite being the smallest shop The power of Bishie's and Shota's is amazing....

@ Meistah and Senpai - Small continuation.

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Is it okay?
*Being hysterically happy and is restrained by sister with a Chokehold*
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:09   Link #11474
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He doesn't get any because he wasn't honest with his feelings for Tatenashi, and when he finally mans up...well, it's kinda too late.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:13   Link #11475
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@ Senpai - I can't believe this started out as a crack fic Anyway, this leads directly to a rumor spreading around school the next day

@ Box - Still, isn't that a bit too cruel?
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:20   Link #11476
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Maybe, but I'm the downer ending kinda guy anyway.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:27   Link #11477
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@ Senpai and Meistah - After scene in Karon's room with Karon and Riz.

@ Box - Wait, this has a downer ending? Isn't this a crack fic?

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Short but I'm using my phone.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:32   Link #11478
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@ Senpai and Meistah - After scene in Karon's room with Karon and Riz.

@ Box - Wait, this has a downer ending? Isn't this a crack fic?

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Short but I'm using my phone.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:33   Link #11479
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Why yes, yes it is, but that won't stop me from killing Tatenashi off.

Not just for kicks though, I quite like her, but almost all my fics end similarly...with similar lines.
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Old 2011-12-06, 05:35   Link #11480
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@ Senpai - I don't understand, does that mean it's good? Also, need to figure out how to show Karon being in deliria more than I posted just now. Irish is pretty much unresponsive.

@ Box - What the fuck!? Sorry, but I might not read as much as I was supposed to. Can you PLEASE make it a happy ending? Don't make me do the tsundere act.
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