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Old 2011-12-08, 06:42   Link #11821
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A crack world full o robot bunnies with Ichika as her personal butler.
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Old 2011-12-08, 06:49   Link #11822
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A crack world full o robot bunnies with Ichika as her personal butler.
So her story is crack then? Anyway, I just got a suggestion from Fangking on a dark segment for the daydreams saga: Ichika is kidnapped by Madoka and forced to stay with her in order to stay alive. I dunno what she does. maybe she abuses him, maybe she rapes him, maybe she does nothing, still pretty dark.

On the other hand, we get the standard imouto love story.

What do you think is more interesting?
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Old 2011-12-08, 06:52   Link #11823
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I need help on my fic, who can beta read/edit my fic/add some scenes?

would be greatly appreciated.

BTW, it's my new fic, not the other one. I'm taking a break from Everything is Radiant. Might write it after my exam next week.

Thx in advance
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Old 2011-12-08, 06:55   Link #11824
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D:

I thought era-era was going to step into the adult's world #>.<#

Kanzashi is probably reading in the hallways, or the cafeteria, maybe even the library(she's restless in her own room maybe?)

Maya and Tabane should prove an interesting challenge fufufufu
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Old 2011-12-08, 06:56   Link #11825
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@ Yachi - Is that the Charlotte flashback fic?

@ demino_hellin - I posted a possible plot for Madoka, that might be my darkest fic yet On the other hand, Maya and Tabane are going to be some of the most lighthearted and cracky couples I've written.
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Old 2011-12-08, 06:59   Link #11826
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wait... Maya and Tabane are for daydreams right? Tabane's I imagine it would be heart wrenching.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:00   Link #11827
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@Eratas Yesh
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:02   Link #11828
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@ Senpai - What about you, senpai? Any comments for anything?

@ demino_hellsin - Why would it be heart wrenching?

@ Yachi - Sorry, I'm making too many fics of my own along with my own Charlotte flashback arc. If you give it to me, it might take weeks.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:02   Link #11829
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Alright, Imma fix it by myself.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:03   Link #11830
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considering that Tabane is in love with the guy her little sis is in love with and her little sis is someone who means the world to her...
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:05   Link #11831
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No dark stuff in Daydreams!!
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:08   Link #11832
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ah... Tabane's chapter outline has appearred in my head...
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:13   Link #11833
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@ demino_hellsin - This is a daydream, same rules don't apply. Look at the other daydreams, Houki doesn't even appear in Cecilia's and vice versa. They ignore the other heroines and focus on themselves. For all I know, Houki actually supports it in her daydream.

EDIT: Gimme the outline.

@ Box - No dark stuff?

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@ Yachi - Sorry I can't help.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:15   Link #11834
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You'll be cutting a core component out of Tabane's character but then again fanon has its own definition of Tabane. I wish you the best of luck, though I'll assist in any way.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:18   Link #11835
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I actually planned to have her come to terms with her forbidden love but I listed it as Romance/comedy in the genre's That's why I was worried about the VT system and Laura's arc Anyway, gimme the outline you said.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:38   Link #11836
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FINALLY GETTING MY OWN MODEM (though old 128k stuff, can't watch Youtube DX).

Anyway, Ichika-sensei x Maya would be classic rom-com minus the abuse (think Mahoraba), while Ichika-sensei x Tabane would be outright crack fic AND crack pairing, also, foe yay (Ichika is order as in Tabane's chaos).

EDIT: It''s your fault Eras, now I'll write "Reaching For You" again!
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:41   Link #11837
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Well...

Tabane is in her lab compiling data on Byakushiki, she pauses when she reaches Ichika's profile. She thinks to herself of how he's grown and remembers back in the past when she was still cold to the world.

flashback

She has to babysit Ichika because her parents are taking Houki to see a big kendo event. Tabane who doesn't really like crowds excuses herself. At that time Chifuyu is suddenly called out on a night job(pot-stickers assistant cart runner?). Tabane is only nice to Ichika because he's Chifuyu's little brother and ignores him when she's not there. Ichika calls her attention but she doesn't respond. Ichika calls her an idiot and she snaps. Ichika smiles because he got her to look at him saying that Chifuyu-nee's charm worked. Child Ichika pushes a book of stories towards Tabane and asks her to read. She refuses, he begs and finally she caves. (insert heartwarming moment). Tabane realizes that Ichika is a good kid and decides to genuinely like him.

back to reality

Tabane thinks back to all the times she's with Chifuyu and how the elder sister was so proud of her younger brother, Tabane wants to understand those feelings too. She observes how the Orimuras interact, Ichika in particular for reference on Houki(not the best idea). She realized in the middle of all that Ichika was becoming more important to her than he initially should be(the warmth of her world?)

She admits to being in love with him but doesn't act on it because her sister loves him too. She imagines herself and Ichika as characters in one of the many fairy tales that he read to her at that time(whether as prince and princess or evil mistress and prince, you decide). She wakes up to the immaterial screen before her and closes Ichika's profile. She gives a bitter sweet smile.

Forgive me if it's so specific. I got too into it.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:45   Link #11838
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@ Senpai - This happens to all three people in Shadow later on (minues the sexual implications). Thankfully, each of them have something that keeps them sane all throughout: Ichika's is his love for his friends (Standard Shonen stuff), Kyuukai's is his will to protect others (Heroic need) and Irish's is his desire for vengeance (Anti-heroic willpower). This is what kept them sane all throughout the mind breaking.

Anyway, how do you want Madoka to be woken up? Double points if it's ironic.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:49   Link #11839
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@ demino_hellsin - It sounds really nice Can you think of a happier one, though? I need to keep it strictly low key angst if I can. But I'll definitely incorporate parts of that into the current chapter.
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Old 2011-12-08, 07:53   Link #11840
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Does it feel depressing as a whole?
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