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Old 2011-09-13, 18:48   Link #1241
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@ZeroXSEED- Focusing on the societal regression is a good idea since the POV of Infinite Stratos is through Ichika's eyes and so we never really get to see this part of society (Will also try to focus on this when POV switches to Kyuukai and "Irish" since they aren't exempt like Ichika is) .

Will the societal regression in your fic be only focused on japan or worldwide?

BTW hers a little tidbit I found - Even though females have gained dominance in the lower and
middle class the Upper class males still retain their influence in things like politics.

Spoiler:
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Old 2011-09-13, 19:11   Link #1242
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@ZeroXSEED- Focusing on the societal regression is a good idea since the POV of Infinite Stratos is through Ichika's eyes and so we never really get to see this part of society (Will also try to focus on this when POV switches to Kyuukai and "Irish" since they aren't exempt like Ichika is) .

Will the societal regression in your fic be only focused on japan or worldwide?

BTW hers a little tidbit I found - Even though females have gained dominance in the lower and
middle class the Upper class males still retain their influence in things like politics.

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Well, mostly in Japan, through Dan and Ran's eyes as 'ordinary middle-class civilians'. Still, I'll also did the same with Britain (ALL HAIL BRITANIA!!!!) when Cecilia was there, disguising as ordinary people to sightseeing.

Also have this crazy idea of an OC:
Spoiler for Crazy idea:
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Old 2011-09-13, 20:08   Link #1243
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The 'father' thing seems more plausible since he's already an established character and it would explain why he's abandoned the siblings, adding a brother is a bit of an asspull.
Btw I'll post a draft of What lies in shadows that focuses a bit on how females act later so please comment on it when I post it.
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Old 2011-09-13, 21:58   Link #1244
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The 'father' thing seems more plausible since he's already an established character and it would explain why he's abandoned the siblings, adding a brother is a bit of an asspull.
Btw I'll post a draft of What lies in shadows that focuses a bit on how females act later so please comment on it when I post it.
You never know with borderline crazy Tabane involved in Orimura family for so long, she's nothing short of Chifuyu's stalker.

She manipulated the documents in the school (probably via hacking) so they always been a classmate since elementary. ShiroKishi rolled out when she and Chifuyu is 15, how she accomplished it? HACKING THE MILITARY COMMAND CENTER OF 12 COUNTRIES!

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Old 2011-09-13, 22:49   Link #1245
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Old 2011-09-13, 23:04   Link #1246
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@ ZeroXSEED- I'm planning to put the "Ichika is a clone" thing later on in the story for drama
And added tension.
@ Drakjak- The question wasn't that odd. There are odder ones in the previous pages.
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Old 2011-09-13, 23:32   Link #1247
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@ ZeroXSEED- I'm planning to put the "Ichika is a clone" thing later on in the story for drama
And added tension.
@ Drakjak- The question wasn't that odd. There are odder ones in the previous pages.
HUH? How the hell, did we share a mind or something? So, who's the real person? Or maybe Ichika is Chifuyu's clone? I use the first and already write a convoluted scheming, we should talk about this in ff.net PM to keep a surprise, and we can't have EXACT similar backstory...

EDIT: Unless we made a shared verse but alternate timeline...aka For want of a nail.
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Old 2011-09-14, 03:13   Link #1248
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Old 2011-09-14, 03:40   Link #1249
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I read some of your chapters, they're pretty good.

Okay... In this chapter, the guys of Alpha Squad refer to each other by their real names. Here's a little reminder:

Eric Anderson: Hot Shot
Eddie Garcia: Sideswipe
Brian Mclurg: Ratchet
Clayton/Clay Maddox: Scourge

Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 1 Preview:

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Old 2011-09-14, 04:14   Link #1250
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I read some of your chapters, they're pretty good.

Okay... In this chapter, the guys of Alpha Squad refer to each other by their real names. Here's a little reminder:

Eric Anderson: Hot Shot
Eddie Garcia: Sideswipe
Brian Mclurg: Ratchet
Clayton/Clay Maddox: Scourge

Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 1 Preview:
This four are from.... Transformers? BTW I haven't read your fic, I'll read it later
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Old 2011-09-14, 05:02   Link #1251
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This four are from.... Transformers? BTW I haven't read your fic, I'll read it later
Yeah, the Prologue explains the names. Oh and another thing, it's an OC story set outside of IS Academy.
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Old 2011-09-14, 05:46   Link #1252
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Yeah, the Prologue explains the names. Oh and another thing, it's an OC story set outside of IS Academy.
Yeah, yeah, since it's a large OC cast
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Old 2011-09-14, 05:58   Link #1253
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I read some of your chapters, they're pretty good.

Okay... In this chapter, the guys of Alpha Squad refer to each other by their real names. Here's a little reminder:

Eric Anderson: Hot Shot
Eddie Garcia: Sideswipe
Brian Mclurg: Ratchet
Clayton/Clay Maddox: Scourge

Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 1 Preview:
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This four are from.... Transformers? BTW I haven't read your fic, I'll read it later
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Yeah, the Prologue explains the names. Oh and another thing, it's an OC story set outside of IS Academy.
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Yeah, yeah, since it's a large OC cast

I see what you did there...and I have this premonition that this will be very-very awesome sidestory

But really, I've never realized that the names are from what...Transformer? I'm not exactly well versed in non-anime/manga media... hell, I never play metal gear and all I heard about it are fanboys being gay for big boss

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Old 2011-09-14, 07:44   Link #1254
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- ...seriously? Jak? EDDIE GARCIA?
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Old 2011-09-14, 14:37   Link #1256
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What you said about Tabane Shinonono in the actual IS storyline Zero, well this came straight from the horse's mouth.

Spoiler for Vol. 3 Ch. 3 in the Light Novels.:


If my OCs were around and heard her say that, they would be ready to perform Thunder Crash's style of Lobotomy on Tabane *Snap* just like that.

Now, reading that is making me want to do a redo on the whole timeframe of my Fanfic. Damn it...

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Old 2011-09-14, 14:55   Link #1257
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What you said about Tabane Shinonono in the actual IS storyline Zero, well this came straight from the horse's mouth.

Spoiler for Vol. 3 Ch. 3 in the Light Novels.:


If my OCs were around and heard her say that, they would be ready to perform Thunder Crash's style of Lobotomy on Tabane *Snap* just like that.

Now, reading that is making on redo the whole timeframe of my Fanfic. Damn it...
No offense but i don't think Tabane is stupid enough to let your ocs assassinate her that easily.
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Old 2011-09-14, 18:41   Link #1258
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Anybody have any idea how old Tabane is? Some say she's as old as Chifuyu but some say she's in her 30's. I need to change my backstory depending on her age.
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Old 2011-09-15, 03:37   Link #1259
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Anybody have any idea how old Tabane is? Some say she's as old as Chifuyu but some say she's in her 30's. I need to change my backstory depending on her age.
Positively 24, Tabane manipulated (possibly hacked) the school's database so she and Chifuyu can stay in the same class since elementary.

Volume 2 Epilogue
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"Oh my, Tabane's happy to hear a voice she hasn't heard in a long time! Chi-chan's still as amazing as ever, don't go running into the other side of the sunset."

Tabane folded her arms in front of her chest as she muttered, laughing away.

Orimura Chifuyu and Shinonono Tabane first met each other in elementary school, and after that, they were always in the same school and the same class. Of course, Tabane deliberately set that up, and Chifuyu knew that.

However, that wasn't all to their relationship.

The IS was released when Chifuyu was studying high school, and for the next few years, Chifuyu had been assisting in the IS development as a pilot.

In other words, what Chifuyu knew about IS already far surpassed the other pilots by a lot, and the comprehension level was on a completely different level. Because of all that training and unique skills, it wasn't a surprise that she became the 1st Mondo Grosso champion—at least that was what Tabane felt.

TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 2011-09-15, 04:00   Link #1260
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@ZeroXSEED- Thanks for the info,can't believe Tabane built the Infinite Stratos when she was 14. Where in the hell did she get the funding and equipment to do something like that?

Here is the draft on how (some) women in society act in "IS:What lies in shadows" along with some Tatenashi and Irish humor.

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Please comment if the imbalance is a bit too strong or not. I'll tone it down if it's overboard.
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