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Old 2011-09-23, 10:21   Link #1481
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Did she get her knife proficiency through hard training or is she just naturally good at it for some reason?
- Both.

Seriously.
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Old 2011-09-23, 17:55   Link #1482
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- Both.

Seriously.
Then again I guess she's halfway between normal and abnormal.
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Old 2011-09-23, 18:24   Link #1483
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My story is somewhat complicated, but if read from the beginning it is easy to follow.

SECOND CHANCE

PLOT:
Ichika Orimura was taken hostage for the second time of his life, right after he had taken his high school entrance exams...but this time it doesn't end as well as his first incident. This time he gets caught in an explosion during a rescue gone wrong, and is on the verge of death. Shinonono Tabane, intervenes after being called by Orimura Chifuyuu. She has a daring plan: install an IS core into Ichika's dying body. After a painstaking surgery, it is a success Ichika is now part IS.

But the time to relax isn't now. Do to international pressures of Japan gaining an extra IS (for Ichika's IS is a new one built by Tabane), he is forced to enter IS Academy...a school only for girls.

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Old 2011-09-23, 19:07   Link #1484
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My story is somewhat complicated, but if read from the beginning it is easy to follow.

SECOND CHANCE

PLOT:
Ichika Orimura was taken hostage for the second time of his life, right after he had taken his high school entrance exams...but this time it doesn't end as well as his first incident. This time he gets caught in an explosion during a rescue gone wrong, and is on the verge of death. Shinonono Tabane, intervenes after being called by Orimura Chifuyuu. She has a daring plan: install an IS core into Ichika's dying body. After a painstaking surgery, it is a success Ichika is now part IS.

But the time to relax isn't now. Do to international pressures of Japan gaining an extra IS (for Ichika's IS is a new one built by Tabane), he is forced to enter IS Academy...a school only for girls.

LINK:

SECOND CHANCE
This at least explains why Ichika can pilot the suit even though he's a male and nobody else can, please continue this story.
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Old 2011-09-23, 20:43   Link #1485
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This at least explains why Ichika can pilot the suit even though he's a male and nobody else can, please continue this story.
Thank you! I plan to also redesign Byakku Shiki, into something a bit more streamline, and since the IS is apart of him, he may easily have more than 2 shifts.

I'm thinking of him having an arm weapon from the beginning.

I plan to also fill some plot holes and tech specs.

Not sure about pairing, might just make it a harem.
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Old 2011-09-23, 20:51   Link #1486
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My story is somewhat complicated, but if read from the beginning it is easy to follow.

SECOND CHANCE

PLOT:
Ichika Orimura was taken hostage for the second time of his life, right after he had taken his high school entrance exams...but this time it doesn't end as well as his first incident. This time he gets caught in an explosion during a rescue gone wrong, and is on the verge of death. Shinonono Tabane, intervenes after being called by Orimura Chifuyuu. She has a daring plan: install an IS core into Ichika's dying body. After a painstaking surgery, it is a success Ichika is now part IS.

But the time to relax isn't now. Do to international pressures of Japan gaining an extra IS (for Ichika's IS is a new one built by Tabane), he is forced to enter IS Academy...a school only for girls.

LINK:

SECOND CHANCE
I`ve read your story. I don`t know why Ichika is able to pilot an IS..I think your story might be a possible cover story

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Old 2011-09-23, 20:54   Link #1487
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What do you mean more streamline? Do you mean you'll have Byaku-Shiki able to use equalizers?

As for pairings: Picking either Char or Houki is the safest bet since they're the fan preferred couples, making it harem is okay as long as you can balance all their screentime.

BTW- please read my story "IS:What lies in shadow" every reader, comment, and valid criticism counts
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Old 2011-09-23, 21:13   Link #1488
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Thank you! I plan to also redesign Byakku Shiki, into something a bit more streamline, and since the IS is apart of him, he may easily have more than 2 shifts.

I'm thinking of him having an arm weapon from the beginning.

I plan to also fill some plot holes and tech specs.

Not sure about pairing, might just make it a harem.
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What do you mean more streamline? Do you mean you'll have Byaku-Shiki able to use equalizers?

As for pairings: Picking either Char or Houki is the safest bet since they're the fan preferred couples, making it harem is okay as long as you can balance all their screentime.

BTW- please read my story "IS:What lies in shadow" every reader, comment, and valid criticism counts
By Streamlined, do you mean like...ShiroKishi? Notice that while the sword is damn large, the LEGS are human sized and the wings are modest, not as massive as most I.S.

As for pairing, Eratas is right, but don't forget Laura, even though she's more often paired with O.C.
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Old 2011-09-23, 21:17   Link #1489
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Should be finishing chapter 3 in a few hours. Please read when it's done.
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Old 2011-09-24, 00:22   Link #1490
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My story is somewhat complicated, but if read from the beginning it is easy to follow.

SECOND CHANCE

PLOT:
Ichika Orimura was taken hostage for the second time of his life, right after he had taken his high school entrance exams...but this time it doesn't end as well as his first incident. This time he gets caught in an explosion during a rescue gone wrong, and is on the verge of death. Shinonono Tabane, intervenes after being called by Orimura Chifuyuu. She has a daring plan: install an IS core into Ichika's dying body. After a painstaking surgery, it is a success Ichika is now part IS.

But the time to relax isn't now. Do to international pressures of Japan gaining an extra IS (for Ichika's IS is a new one built by Tabane), he is forced to enter IS Academy...a school only for girls.

LINK:

SECOND CHANCE
Rebuilt of Infinite Stratos, APPROVED.
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Old 2011-09-24, 01:23   Link #1491
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I hate writers block. It's like going into a brick wall at mach 5, especially when I'm on a roll for a story. Augh.
At least I can listen to music that can put me in the mood to write this right...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pUwZm...eature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HxKfA...eature=related
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Old 2011-09-24, 02:53   Link #1492
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Rebuilt of Infinite Stratos, APPROVED.
Damn straight, interesting stuff we're getting.
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Old 2011-09-24, 03:10   Link #1493
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We've been getting a surge of fics lately, pretty odd since this is for all intents and purposes a harem anime while almost all the fics are pretty much GRIMDARK or have GRIMDARK elements added into them. Guess we're getting tired of the usual harem antics.
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Old 2011-09-24, 03:23   Link #1494
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I wouldn't call my Linyin fic Grimdark, but the current one...yeah.
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Old 2011-09-24, 03:46   Link #1495
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Grimdark? Sacred Twins?? Hardly.

Though I and Blitz decided to take the harem antics from serious, psychological point of view. Indeed, it'll be darker than canon not because I made it darker, it's because we took things seriously.

The same could be said for everyone's fics (which I could safely said is darker than mine), for example, Eratas' child soldier and Jaks' mercenary, those are the parties that CLEARLY been the victim of I.S. invention.

Grimdark is when something made darker just because it's fun to make it dark and edgy story without clear plotline *cough*W40K*cough*.

Instead, we just took the source material faithfully and deconstructed it for the sake of awesome plot. Yes, even GRIMDARK need plot to be awesome. Ciaphas Cain and Gaunt Ghost just few examples.
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Old 2011-09-24, 03:52   Link #1496
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Mine isn't dark, yet.
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Old 2011-09-24, 04:00   Link #1497
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We've been getting a surge of fics lately, pretty odd since this is for all intents and purposes a harem anime while almost all the fics are pretty much GRIMDARK or have GRIMDARK elements added into them. Guess we're getting tired of the usual harem antics.
Hard to work on getting the attention of like 5-6 girls when they're already locked on to one (un)lucky dude. Though that's just me. Some people prefer to work deeper.

Which is always welcome
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Old 2011-09-24, 04:19   Link #1498
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Just a tiny bit I managed to finish, painfully.
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"Hmmm." <Ren> whispered to herself. The security men were more
disciplined than she had initially thought. She was gambling on the
troops firing at the metal screw she'd thrown to buy her time to attack,
but it was bait they did not fall for.

Still, it was entirely within line of her expectations.

Slowly, she slid between the rust-darkened walls and cabinets litterign
the building. She could not make any overt move just yet, as the sheer
firepower at this point would stop her. Had they been unarmed, <Ren>
would have been confident in taking them all on at once.

The security men were open, direct combatants, much like Samurai. Highly
trained, exceptionally gifted, and utterly incapable of adapting to the
changing battlefield when their rules of engagement fail.

"I should turn up the pressure, then.
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Old 2011-09-24, 04:41   Link #1499
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Finished Chapter 3! Once EthernalRain has beta read it then it will go up on fanfiction.net. Please read and review once it's posted

Oh, I have to give a warning on possible OOC and mood whiplash (particularly on Ichika's segments).
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Old 2011-09-24, 05:32   Link #1500
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Grimdark? Sacred Twins?? Hardly.

Though I and Blitz decided to take the harem antics from serious, psychological point of view. Indeed, it'll be darker than canon not because I made it darker, it's because we took things seriously.

The same could be said for everyone's fics (which I could safely said is darker than mine), for example, Eratas' child soldier and Jaks' mercenary, those are the parties that CLEARLY been the victim of I.S. invention.

Grimdark is when something made darker just because it's fun to make it dark and edgy story without clear plotline *cough*W40K*cough*.

Instead, we just took the source material faithfully and deconstructed it for the sake of awesome plot. Yes, even GRIMDARK need plot to be awesome. Ciaphas Cain and Gaunt Ghost just few examples.
Uh, that's "mercenaries". There's 4 of them. And yes, from what it looks like so far, Project Silverback has this "Grimdark" tone to it.
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