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Old 2012-01-06, 10:48   Link #16721
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@ Demi - Yes. Jigsaw from Saw is akin to a force of nature.

@ Senpai - What do yo mean lose to Louise territory?

@ Yachi - I'll help if I can. I can probably re-write your chapters since it's less that white knight's 10k per chapter.
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Old 2012-01-06, 10:50   Link #16722
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He was as interesting as he was disgusting. I'd just kill'em all, torture can only be fun if the victim is fetish fuel.
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Old 2012-01-06, 10:50   Link #16723
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@ Demi - Yes. Jigsaw from Saw is akin to a force of nature.

@ Senpai - What do yo mean lose to Louise territory?

@ Yachi - I'll help if I can. I can probably re-write your chapters since it's less that white knight's 10k per chapter.
Yeah yeah, I can't write like that. Probably my maximum words for chapter is 4k

I'll still re-read the canonball fast volume to get more details

Side note - My chapter 5 is 2.5k words now, and it's still 50% done, probably this will be my longest chapter at the moment XD
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Old 2012-01-06, 10:50   Link #16724
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@ Senpai - What do yo mean lose to Louise territory?
Lesbian Kingdom, the place where less-than-straight student hangs out. And Rito was seduced by a lot of girls there.

Side note - I hate Torture porn
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Old 2012-01-06, 10:51   Link #16725
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@Eratas123

The OC role is more of a mentor, he doesn't engage enemy IS directly ( Let's his mini mobile suit army do the dirty work.) Has many gizmos available to him

@ZeroXSEED The OC has a limited number of powerful 1/100 Gunplas that can fight IS directly , for it a lot of time and effort to build one. He has MANY mass production units like GM III, Nemo, Jegans etc

OC Catch phase " That a load of BS! Screw your reality!! To me it just a mere illusion, that is going to be broken by my fist!"
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Old 2012-01-06, 10:54   Link #16726
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@ Kaizerknight - Interesting. Many OC's are frontline attackers.

@ Senpai - How did he gte seduced by Lesbians!?

@ Yachi - I'll rewrite to be like White knight

@ Demi - Jigsaw is symbolized as a cancer cell. Turning others into like him and killing those who can't. Also, I hate Jigsaw since his philosophy is BS. Seriously, he kills people for not appreciating life? Yeah, I'm sure they'll get a chance to do that after you blow their brains out
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:00   Link #16727
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Thank God he hasn't met any real humanity haters yet
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:01   Link #16728
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@ZeroXSEED The OC has a limited number of powerful 1/100 Gunplas that can fight IS directly , for it a lot of time and effort to build one. He has MANY mass production units like GM III, Nemo, Jegans etc
You may need to be careful with that.

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@ Senpai - How did he get seduced by Lesbians!?
He's crossdressing remember? And seriously look like a stereotypical androgynous bifauxnen than bishonen in drag, especially that Schwarzer hase has two variant of bottom: Trouser and skirt. He use the former and yet still pass, only with fake boobs and limited makeup as part of gender disguise.

Louise however quickly figured him out and subtly dragged him out of her territory while at the same time saved him.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:04   Link #16729
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@ Demi - I want him to go to see suicide bombers. Lets see what he does then.

@ Senpai - Wait, how does Rito keep from people seeing that he has a bump between his legs? Irish has:

1. A small one, anyway.

2. Actually wears shorts and wraps to be careful.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:05   Link #16730
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@Zero huh ? I don't understand?
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:07   Link #16731
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@ Kaizerknight - Fans tend to go mad when they see robots that can take on the IS. This fanbase is volatile.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:10   Link #16732
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@ Senpai - Wait, how does Rito keep from people seeing that he has a bump between his legs? Irish has:

1. A small one, anyway.

2. Actually wears shorts and wraps to be careful.
Louise was the one noticed that after he's getting aroused and quickly saved him. That part actually covered with his upper uniform, still, you know.... Rito is a beast

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@Zero huh ? I don't understand?
I.S. fandom is sensitive to sentence like "Machine that can Rival I.S." etc.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:13   Link #16733
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@ Senpai - So how does the school react when they find out he was crossdressing?
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:14   Link #16734
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hence my comment before that fans "worship" the IS like gods
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:15   Link #16735
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@Eratas ah i understand ...... i can assure you the gunpla's with not steal the limelight over the IS unit . the story that trying to make is adventure oriented and humor. the gunplas are just plot device, more of a side kick ( Well it will have it moments) and the butt of the jokes too
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:18   Link #16736
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No, they worship the concept of the girls being infallible. Notice that male OC's get more flack than female ones. Seriously, you have to make your character noticeably weaker than the females if you don't want flack.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:18   Link #16737
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@ Senpai - So how does the school react when they find out he was crossdressing?
No, only Louise find it, afterward, he met Chifuyu, who scold him for being reckless (he and Haruna was there to escort Ren and Lala back to Deviluke, but they're separated due to girls rushing to chase Ichika). This happened between V3 and V4 arc.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:19   Link #16738
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concept of waifu... they don't want anyone abusing their waifus... D:...
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:20   Link #16739
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The problem also lies in the fact most male OC's are blatant stu's. Look at the past stories.
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Old 2012-01-06, 11:25   Link #16740
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It's really a cycle

1. Author felt like creating a male OC that is as good as female cast.
2. Ended up creating Marty Stu that is better than Ichika.
3. Reader hate Marty Stu, hence the increased sensitivity.
4. Author switch to more acceptable OC guy and make Ichika more badass than canon.
5. Reader accept it happily.

I myself trying to represent them as 'equal', not in power level or status, but as in they respect each other as individual and fellow human. Some guys are superior than girls but with convincing reason and vice versa. Feminist and Misandrist getting the short end of stick in my stories.
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