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Old 2012-01-15, 00:04   Link #18101
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Well, sane people don't want to meet psychopaths face to face. I'd like to meet Touma and Conan Edogawa.
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Old 2012-01-15, 00:38   Link #18102
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When is a character more enjoyable? When he is unique? Or when you think to yourself "I want to meet this person."?
When a character has character development.... enuff said.

it is more fun to see people struggling with themselves (especially if the character is a good guy), ultimately became stronger than before (after the ordeal), more epic fail than before(fail in different areas, implying that he learned the wrong thing, paving way for another development) or just give up in despair (and become a witch monster)

Unique character is fun but the problem is: Unique characters can be a double edge sword, they can be enjoyable, but on the other hand, their quirk might come off as annoying.

As for "I want to meet this person."...... if the "I" is the writer, I think that add points to the Sue-factor.
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Anyway ultimately, it really had to depend on the skill of the writer

In the hand of a poor writer, any character is annoying but in the hand of a skilled writer..... HELL, even a Mary Sue character can become interesting.
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Old 2012-01-15, 00:51   Link #18103
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Actually, the problematic "I" is when you think "I want to be this character" or "This character is idealized version of me" while writing, it's really Stu +30 (most of the time anyway).
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Old 2012-01-15, 00:53   Link #18104
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I fixed some minor errors.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7486570/...ing_is_Radiant
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New chapter
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Old 2012-01-15, 00:58   Link #18105
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@ Senpai - Can you see if this is okay?

Spoiler:
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:00   Link #18106
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@ Yachi
Just read the chapter, I'd say the fix is good, at least I can get the grasp of the overall story this time, nice fix. (will review when read them properly)

@Eras
Char sure knew what's to do, true Yamato Nadeshiko style.

Anyway, I just checked WK review... let's say they're making the tragedy and creepiness look hilarious.
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:03   Link #18107
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@ Senpai - Can you see if this is okay?

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This is, future imperfect? It's humorous xD
It's like, CHAOS TIME
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:06   Link #18108
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Charlotte became the leader of Dunoa Industries in thefuture and that's why Charles kept trying to say excecutive Whwre do you guys think te other two kids should be?
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:09   Link #18109
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I see the point of your story Eras.

Story about different future parallel worlds sent in one present reality O.O

I think I'll look forward to this sounds fun
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:12   Link #18110
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Actually, Tabane only wanted to get Houki's kid so she can pair them up. She screwed up and grabbed everyone's instead.
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:13   Link #18111
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Hmmmm....

As expected from Tabane.
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:14   Link #18112
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Correction, not screwed up, I guess, INTENTIONALLY
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:15   Link #18113
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The triumphant return and eventual disappearance of wavehawk.
Such misfortune...

I haven't been well lately compounded by the fact that most people I know IRL are morons. Yes it's been a rough start to the year for me, and writing is one of my biggest problems...
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:15   Link #18114
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Where should Charlotte's temporary kids from earlier be? I'm leaning on bugging Kanzashi while she was trying to fix her unit again

@ Yachi - Well, she was genuinely shocked when she found that she har a kid as well.

@ Hawke - Hang in there, I'm rooting for you Hamazu- Sorry, I meant Hawke.
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:17   Link #18115
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Where should Charlotte's temporary kids from earlier be? I'm leaning on bugging Kanzashi while she was trying to fix her unit again

@ Yachi - Well, she was genuinely shocked when she found that she har a kid as well.

@ Hawke - Hang in there, I'm rooting for you Hamazu- Sorry, I meant Hawke.
Make Charles mess up with tatenashi more cooler ^_^

I GTG now, see ya later ^^
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:19   Link #18116
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See ya later Any thoughts, Senpai?
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:20   Link #18117
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Naw, story about happy children (except Childhood romance) never been my field.
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:22   Link #18118
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@ Senpai - Well, there is one kid who came from a bad future where the IS ended up causing worldwide catasthrophes. How about that?
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:40   Link #18119
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I thought you said no room for drama :|
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Old 2012-01-15, 01:44   Link #18120
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@ Senpai - No, I said no room for angst He doesn't angst about it and he acts more like the Silent Bob that the quiet angster.
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