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Old 2012-01-15, 14:09   Link #18281
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Also, scanning is useful, but boring most of the time.
Which is why Imber has it.... His machine specialized in skill which other Male OC don't bother with.
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:10   Link #18282
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Too much fat burned = dangerous, there's also some issues about loose skin and stuff. Also, messing with hormone can be fatal sometimes.

Side note - dunno, because what happened to Irish is beyond normal medical recognition, other than his organ messed up, I don't know (and frankly him becoming bishie in the process is... well, how? )

Going to sleep. see ya.
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:11   Link #18283
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@ Treme - ISA wouldn't buy "fix a robot dog" as an excuse to let a guy come to ISA. Unless he's being put there by an org, nothing can happen.

@ Senpai - That sounds nasty I wonder if people were desperate enough to do that.

The bishieness was already natural since his family is shown to be not bad looking. However, the reason he looks like that even now is due to his body getting less hormones, i.e less physically mature even if he ages. To be frank, people get less bishie as they age (This is true, you know that). The only reason he looks like that is because his body isn't aging correctly, so he retains most of his looks from being a child into adolescence. The thinness and paleness is a sign that his body's dying. Body's turn paler and grow thinner as they lose blood flow so his skin tone gradually became paler to show that his body can't cope with the effects and that he's not going to last much longer if he keeps going.
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:13   Link #18284
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guys some need advice, i can picture the plot and images on my head having a hard time doing the dialog. but when i comes to fight scene for some reason i have a lot easier time writing

I might be used to writing in third person view point
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:15   Link #18285
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Actually It has nothing to do with fixing.

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Old 2012-01-15, 14:20   Link #18286
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@ Treme - I'm surprised they don't just kill Ichika straight out.

@ Kaizer - What do you need help with?
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:26   Link #18287
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Note: They can't. Too much attention is on him, if he die suddenly, people will knew something is wrong. Plus, Ichika's death means one less male IS pilot sample for them to work on.... Data from Male IS pilot is precious to unlock the ability for males to pilot IS.

Note: the spoiler is also the reason why Imber is pissed off and trolling most of the time.... It's like Saving somebody's life and end up being late for work and your paid get deduced for being late...

Anybody would be pissed in that situation.

Edit: Now the problem I had to deal with is the timeline...... oh well, back to the drafting board....
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:30   Link #18288
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What's wrong with the timeline?
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:35   Link #18289
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Nah, I will go to sleep first. I will plan out the whole things.....when I wake up.

(Well, at least all this plan made a legitimate claim that the fanfic is in Development Hell for a while )
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:48   Link #18290
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@Eratas

having trouble with the dialogue part. i'll to get some inspiration by watch the the IS / or reading the novel.

Please bear with my gammar ( Mildly dyslectic I them to skip some words )

@eratas can i pm you my ideas or post it on this from??
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:49   Link #18291
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@ Kaizer - Just post it here and I'll give you some tips.
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:52   Link #18292
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@ eratas thx
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Old 2012-01-15, 14:55   Link #18293
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@ Senpai - THought you were going to sleep?

@ Kaizer - Alright, please hurry since I may sleep soon.
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Old 2012-01-15, 16:26   Link #18294
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Too much fat burned = dangerous, there's also some issues about loose skin and stuff. Also, messing with hormone can be fatal sometimes.

Side note - dunno, because what happened to Irish is beyond normal medical recognition, other than his organ messed up, I don't know (and frankly him becoming bishie in the process is... well, how? )

Going to sleep. see ya.
You also forgot that too much fat burned = ketoacidosis, which is fatal.
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Old 2012-01-15, 16:51   Link #18295
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I just wanted to say good morning, it's 5:51am here, so I gotta run for school.

See ya later ^^
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Old 2012-01-15, 17:05   Link #18296
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Updated Future Imperfect! Man, I didn't sleep to update that damn thing. Ah well, it was months overdue.
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Old 2012-01-15, 22:34   Link #18297
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Reworking on the male lead again....

Spoiler for Long post due to Brain storm:
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Old 2012-01-15, 22:47   Link #18298
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If someone has better/improved eyesight, does that mean flashbangs will affect them more?
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Yes they do.
So if that's right, then the IS's Hyper Sensors can be a "double-edged sword". And that could be a factor...

And agetreme, is this a whole new fic you're doing? Or is it the same one you thought of back in October or November of last year?
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Old 2012-01-15, 22:49   Link #18299
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What's weirder than a male IS pilot? A dog piloting the IS?
Oh Hello there Shadow:

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Old 2012-01-15, 22:52   Link #18300
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