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Old 2012-01-17, 08:22   Link #18481
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Actually, that was my first plan They basically start canceling each other's attacks out for a while before Ichika loses his stamina.
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:29   Link #18482
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.....I dunno if you're bullshitting, or you're being genuinely serious here. This is a romance story, can I really get away with making the male lead a wuss?
Dude.

Yes. You. Can.

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A good writer can get away with anything including a Mary Sue (A well-written Mary Sue isn't Mary Sue!)

A way to do this:
The character may appear like a Wuss because he is introverted, however, he is more sensitive to the girl's feeling, a point which the girl eventually came to like about him.
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:31   Link #18483
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To the point where he's basically getting goomba stomped the entire fight? Geez, Ichika's freaking chivalry makes the fighting so annoying. I dunno if he'd fight her using things like headbutts or foot stomps without being OOC.
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:39   Link #18484
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@ Treme - I meant wuss in the sense that he gets the tar kicked out of him whenever he fights. Irish could be considered a wuss in this sense.

Side note - Can't edit>_<
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:39   Link #18485
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Heck back! Never bothered to read the previous pages

I'll make Chapter 6 of Everything is Radiant as the Epilogue, since I'm going to concentrate for "Something"
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:43   Link #18486
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@ Yachi - Hey Yachi, just wondering how to do Tatenashi's daydream. Any advice? My romance sucks and I'm better for serious stories.
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:46   Link #18487
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about tatenashi, hmmm.

Making it a lot flirty one, would be better for her character.

Actually, making Ichika give up quickly would be no thrill, try some revealing Ehm, I don't wanna say it

Or would be cool if you all add blackmailing
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:48   Link #18488
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Doesn't Ichika not like her flirting?
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:50   Link #18489
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Doesn't Ichika not like her flirting?
Oh yeah, hmmm. I can't think of anything because of her attitude.

All I know is blackmailing, go a date with her for her to stop doing "those" things to him XD
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:54   Link #18490
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Hm, actually sounds somewhat plausible. Though how that date will go is another thing entirely
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:54   Link #18491
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I think I'm gonna leave again, I have a daily routine in our prom practice, since it will be on friday, the ACTUAL dance FTW!

Gotta wake up again at 5am .O.

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@Eras, it would be easy to handle if you know Tatenashi really well. ^_^

Gotta go, see ya!
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Old 2012-01-17, 08:59   Link #18492
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Hope it's better than your last prom Good luck
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Old 2012-01-17, 09:27   Link #18493
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@ Treme - I meant wuss in the sense that he gets the tar kicked out of him whenever he fights. Irish could be considered a wuss in this sense.

Side note - Can't edit>_<
What's wrong with that? Wuss just attract a different group of girls with special interest....

Being male doesn't really means you must be good at fighting though....
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Old 2012-01-17, 10:52   Link #18494
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@eratas how the day dream fanfic going?

as for my fanfic still brain storming
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Old 2012-01-17, 16:21   Link #18495
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Agetreme, I have a feeling that my fic might've sparked yours.
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Old 2012-01-17, 18:41   Link #18496
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.....I dunno if you're bullshitting, or you're being genuinely serious here. This is a romance story, can I really get away with making the male lead a wuss?
Spoiler for Rants:


Mind you the first and second point is reasonable, the Male protagonist is supposed to be Audience Surrogate.

The third case is tricky, but not that impossible either.

Ichika is a blend of second and third.

Note: Going to hospital, not logging in for hours.
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Old 2012-01-17, 21:09   Link #18497
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@ Kaizer - When are you gonna post the stuff you need help with?

@ Senpai - Not all harem protags have to be badasses. For example: Minato from Sekirei gets no flack for this since his harem is a bunch of superpowered aliens. However, protags like Ichika get flak since he uses the same tech as everybody else (In fact, he uses better tech than everybody else) yet he's the 2nd weakest in the entire team.

Side note - I personally have no problem with weakee male protags. Irosh is the weakest and youngest male protag in the story.

@ Treme - The problem that Ichika has is that, other than his one hit kill sword and gender, he's got nothing going for him.
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Old 2012-01-17, 22:02   Link #18498
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Can't go to work because of trolling fever... At least I can still type ;3

Also, scene~!

Spoiler for Scene:
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Old 2012-01-17, 23:01   Link #18499
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@ Stratos - What are they doing there?
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Old 2012-01-17, 23:54   Link #18500
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They're gathering for another day out somewhere else, while Cecilia's in sickbay.

During that time, Inami and Tsurugi are already in the ISA... but only Cecilia, Maya and Chifuyu knows about their presence.
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