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Old 2012-01-23, 02:35   Link #19281
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@ Senpai - Here's Kanzashi's pic http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/in...IS_v07_173.jpg
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Old 2012-01-23, 03:03   Link #19282
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That works

@ Box - Cheating on <Ren> too? Tsk tsk tsk.
That's it, from now on I'm going to follow in mangatron's footsteps as harem king!!
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Old 2012-01-23, 03:45   Link #19283
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*sigh* Should've saved my previous post for this time of the day :/
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Old 2012-01-23, 04:45   Link #19284
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Scene with a teeny bit of classic SRW touch.

Spoiler for Scene~!:
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:09   Link #19285
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Anybody here?
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:20   Link #19286
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Currently continuing chapter 12 for the hell of it :|
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:24   Link #19287
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Still writing up on Chapter 8~! ^^
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:30   Link #19288
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Beta reading white knight and making plans for FI. Argh! I don't know wjicj kid to introduce next!
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:38   Link #19289
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This is the second time Louise will appear.
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:42   Link #19290
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Decided to not keep things underwraps anymore so... Praxidike scene!

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Old 2012-01-23, 07:43   Link #19291
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@ Senpai - Do you think there's a home economics room at ISA? I just had an idea
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Old 2012-01-23, 07:56   Link #19292
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Finally the legless mech rolled out

@ Eras
I don't see why not? It's after all just ordinary school at it's core.
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Old 2012-01-23, 08:03   Link #19293
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@ Senpai - Then I know how to introduce Cecilia's kid and where Tatenashi and Rin's kid went Now all that's left is Tabane's and Kazuma/Shouta's before they all confront eavh other

Anyway, going to sleep early now. See ya!
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Old 2012-01-23, 10:16   Link #19294
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Argh..... NO inspiration to type anything, too tired to type so....wasted day.
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Old 2012-01-23, 10:39   Link #19295
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I know that feeling, man.

Us authors and our bad days...
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Old 2012-01-23, 11:52   Link #19296
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My problem always lies in the beginning of the story.... If I could do a good beginning, I can go full stride on the rest (for middle part at least).

For now, I had a better idea on how Joan is like than my own main lead.

I think I really need to simplify things... instead making it too complex.

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The first draft is felt a little imperfect because I had new ideas on how things should work out....

Mostly deal with introduction to antagonist/rival....

Anyway.....Since Eratas currently is my beta reader but he is busy...so while waiting on his verdict for the first draft, I will go back to the drafting board again to draw up a second draft....(Using the same lead because I am too lazy to think up a new meaningful name...(Ya, really. I always do research on names before I use them and I am really tired of keep doing research on name.)

(@Eratas: Don't worry and just give your verdict (for the first draft) anyway (even while I am working on second draft), because I know how to direct the second chapter (of First Draft's chapter 1) back into introduction of antagonist. The only problem with that is: It felt a little awkward and rushed for me....)
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Old 2012-01-23, 13:21   Link #19297
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I forgot when was the last time I did this but...

Chapter 8 of Athena Sabre is now LIVE~!

Chapter 8: Fighting Spirit

Though everyone's already asleep... but what de heck. :3
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Old 2012-01-23, 16:42   Link #19298
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@ Senpai - Does a home economics room usually come full stocked with ingredients?
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Old 2012-01-23, 19:30   Link #19299
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I will as soon as I finished it.
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Old 2012-01-23, 19:37   Link #19300
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Does anybody have tips on writing style? Whenever I write a story it feels.....stiff. Kind of like it only focuses on the characters actions and everything else is ignored.
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